Story: Out Tonight

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Story: Out Tonight; By: taylorjeanjn
Topic Started: Jun 1 2009, 12:28 PM (149 Views)
taylorjeanjn	Jun 1 2009, 12:28 PM Post #1
Future Greaser Posts: 113 Group: Member Member #568 Joined: May 9, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username taylorjeanjn	Okay, so I recently wrote a companion to "Mr. Dating Machine" called "Out Tonight". They really don't have much to do with each other, though, so you don't have to read one before the other. So, the brief summary: Ponyboy's going on his first date and Two-Bit and Steve decide that this is a perfect opportunity for their own entertainment purposes. Out Tonight In reviews, I'm mostly looking for feedback on characterization :) See if you can spot the cameo with Mel and I, too.
	Quotes to Live By: Too often, we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that ass upside the head. He who stands on a windowsill to see how far out he can lean without falling is a moron. If you wish on a falling star it might come true... Unless it's a meteor hurdling to earth... Then no wishes come true... Unless your wish was to be killed a meteor hurdling to earth.


taylorjeanjn	Jun 3 2009, 07:37 PM Post #2
Future Greaser Posts: 113 Group: Member Member #568 Joined: May 9, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username taylorjeanjn	I just put up chapter two, in case anyone's interested. You get to meet Patricia. -shrugs- http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5100029/2/Out_Tonight
	Quotes to Live By: Too often, we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that ass upside the head. He who stands on a windowsill to see how far out he can lean without falling is a moron. If you wish on a falling star it might come true... Unless it's a meteor hurdling to earth... Then no wishes come true... Unless your wish was to be killed a meteor hurdling to earth.


aerodynamics	Jun 3 2009, 08:14 PM Post #3
Gang Leader Posts: 500 Group: Senior Member Member #401 Joined: October 14, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username aerodynamics	I READ AND REVIEWED. I believe I was number one for chapter 2 ;) It. Rocked.
	"Well, that's crappy."


taylorjeanjn	Jun 3 2009, 09:18 PM Post #4
Future Greaser Posts: 113 Group: Member Member #568 Joined: May 9, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username taylorjeanjn	Thanks ^_^ So far, you're the one and only reviewer lol. I could give you a cyber trophy if you want it.
	Quotes to Live By: Too often, we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that ass upside the head. He who stands on a windowsill to see how far out he can lean without falling is a moron. If you wish on a falling star it might come true... Unless it's a meteor hurdling to earth... Then no wishes come true... Unless your wish was to be killed a meteor hurdling to earth.


aerodynamics	Jun 3 2009, 10:52 PM Post #5
Gang Leader Posts: 500 Group: Senior Member Member #401 Joined: October 14, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username aerodynamics	Duh. Hand it over. (:
	"Well, that's crappy."


perfectimperfection	Jun 4 2009, 03:13 PM Post #6
Future Greaser Posts: 64 Group: Member Member #417 Joined: November 3, 2008 Fanfiction.net Username the perfect imperfection	I reviewed, but it was a really sucky review. Sorry. I enjoyed the fic, though. =)



taylorjeanjn	Jun 4 2009, 05:27 PM Post #7
Future Greaser Posts: 113 Group: Member Member #568 Joined: May 9, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username taylorjeanjn	That's good ^_^ It was ten million times harder to write than "Mr. Dating Machine" and I'm still not quite sure why. -shrugs- Thanks for your review though. It seemed good to me lol. I was excited when you pointed out the name thing because that was one of those Mary-Sue traps that I really worked hard to avoid with Patricia.
	Quotes to Live By: Too often, we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that ass upside the head. He who stands on a windowsill to see how far out he can lean without falling is a moron. If you wish on a falling star it might come true... Unless it's a meteor hurdling to earth... Then no wishes come true... Unless your wish was to be killed a meteor hurdling to earth.


perfectimperfection	Jun 4 2009, 06:13 PM Post #8
Future Greaser Posts: 64 Group: Member Member #417 Joined: November 3, 2008 Fanfiction.net Username the perfect imperfection	The follow-up's always harder, I think. I just hate leaving short reviews; I'm a rambler. Unfortunately, my brain still feels like it's fried and for some reason I'm still staring at a computer screen. I picked the wrong day to leave three reviews, I guess lol. And yeah, I did the same thing with my first OFC. The names get easier, I promise.



Kimberley.	Jun 5 2009, 07:33 AM Post #9
Gang Leader Posts: 570 Group: Senior Member Member #475 Joined: December 29, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username Mercury Jayne & Fall In Line	I shall review C2 soon :)



taylorjeanjn	Jun 5 2009, 12:26 PM Post #10
Future Greaser Posts: 113 Group: Member Member #568 Joined: May 9, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username taylorjeanjn	Sweet B) Reviews are good.
	Quotes to Live By: Too often, we lose sight of life's simple pleasures. Remember, when someone annoys you it takes 42 muscles in your face to frown, BUT it only takes 4 muscles to extend your arm and slap that ass upside the head. He who stands on a windowsill to see how far out he can lean without falling is a moron. If you wish on a falling star it might come true... Unless it's a meteor hurdling to earth... Then no wishes come true... Unless your wish was to be killed a meteor hurdling to earth.


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