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| Story: Stumble (You Might Fall); by Mars and Artemis | |
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| Topic Started: Mar 4 2009, 07:57 PM (1,890 Views) | |
| Artemis | Mar 26 2009, 03:26 PM Post #36 |
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Whoa. Either we have taken a major turn into suckville, and you guys are too shy to tell us (don't be) or we have stunned you into silence. If it's the later, I'm left wondering whether I can write like a mofo or if that was just one big ol' piece of pr0nyness that is taking you time to digest. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Jen | Mar 26 2009, 03:47 PM Post #37 |
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I'm just taking the advice of the Review thread and thinking things over first so I can come up with a good review for you guys :P which will be done when I get home. Oh, and you definitely haven't gone down suckville :D Edited by Jen, Mar 26 2009, 03:48 PM.
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| Mars | Mar 26 2009, 04:31 PM Post #38 |
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Yeah, I'm a bit worried about the chapter content in this story and how people will react, because it's definitely not like our normal stuff lol. That and I don't know how to gauge this story in terms of interest, purely because it's 1) rated MA and 2) mostly OCs. |
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| Big Town Avenue | Mar 26 2009, 05:31 PM Post #39 |
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I'm trying to get to it, but of course, the site is down. Boooooo. Hissssss. |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 27 2009, 07:25 AM Post #40 |
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I'm still working it through my system...but this would be my take :O |
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| TheLorax | Mar 27 2009, 09:06 AM Post #41 |
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I tried to review, but FF.net decided to have a meltdown just as I finished chapter four. Plus, there are probably a lot of people who don't think to change the ratings to "All," so are simply unaware you guys have a new fic. |
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"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax | |
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| TheLorax | Mar 27 2009, 09:17 AM Post #42 |
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And right now I'm trying to figure out this family tree - Waay confusing. Let me make sure I'm correct on the ages, though, as of April 1992. Ray-Ray and Devlin are 22. Shawn is 21. Timmy and Christopher are 20. Chuck 19. Thomas and Christian are 18. Eric is 16. Right? |
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"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax | |
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| Artemis | Mar 27 2009, 12:41 PM Post #43 |
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The Red Queen
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Something like that. I think. I keep thinking of them at their Heaven & Earth ages. Very confusing. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| TheLorax | Mar 30 2009, 09:17 AM Post #44 |
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Does Heaven and Earth take places before or after Stumble? |
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"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax | |
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| Mars | Mar 30 2009, 09:48 AM Post #45 |
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Four years later. |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 30 2009, 12:57 PM Post #46 |
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I thought Shawn was older than Ray-Ray?....I'm confused again. :( |
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| Artemis | Mar 30 2009, 01:05 PM Post #47 |
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The Red Queen
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Ray-Ray is the oldest. He is Angela's and Ray's oldest son. Devlin is a few months younger. He is Dawn's and Ray's only son. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 30 2009, 01:17 PM Post #48 |
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Uh, I have a question, with Shawn because his mother died and his dad got sent to prison, who took him on? Angela? His mothers sister? Who? |
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| Mars | Mar 30 2009, 01:18 PM Post #49 |
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We have a little backstory for that - it may come out in Heaven and Earth since Shawn is featured in that. |
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| Artemis | Mar 30 2009, 01:30 PM Post #50 |
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Yeah, lots of Shawn in H&E. I like the way he turned out. And where he grew up will likely be addressed. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 30 2009, 01:45 PM Post #51 |
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Stop the teasing guys, it gets me cranky to say the least :( |
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| Artemis | Mar 30 2009, 02:06 PM Post #52 |
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Haha ... I liked Player!Shawn in this last chapter. I like to think that he would have gone home with those girls if he hadn't had to chase after Christian. |
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| xolilkelox1 | Mar 31 2009, 08:50 AM Post #53 |
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Christian, Whose Chrstian?How can you two keep up with all these OC'S?Lol. |
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"Do not stand at my grave and weep." R.I.P. Poppy Scaga you will be deeply missed . 1924-2008 | |
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| Mars | Mar 31 2009, 08:56 AM Post #54 |
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Christian is Jenny West and Ray's son. |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 31 2009, 09:38 AM Post #55 |
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Rubs temples, I just know I'm going to have to read Holding Back The Years again. |
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| xolilkelox1 | Mar 31 2009, 10:09 AM Post #56 |
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Same here,lol. |
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"Do not stand at my grave and weep." R.I.P. Poppy Scaga you will be deeply missed . 1924-2008 | |
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| zevie | Mar 31 2009, 10:17 AM Post #57 |
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha
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I could not for the life of me keep them straight, so I did this: Posted Image Did I mess it up? Edited by zevie, Mar 31 2009, 10:18 AM.
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sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish) | |
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| Mars | Mar 31 2009, 12:31 PM Post #58 |
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SO weird, because I had made one of these to post! Yours is close - a few dates are off and Moira should be Myra. I'll attach mine.
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| zevie | Mar 31 2009, 01:22 PM Post #59 |
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Nicole is 15?! Oh, wait, right, 16 and Devlin's turning 23. Wow, he really is a cradle robber. Somehow Myra became more Jewish in mine lol. I somehow KNEW you would have one of these lol ... which looks a lot more organized, btw. I had to line mine up by the kids just sos I wouldn't forget who was older than who, and it makes Dawn's uterus look as widely ranged as Rays dangly bits, which is just not so. OMG I'm so slow ... that line connecting Shawn and Christian confused me for like five minutes before I realized that it's because they're cousins and not because they're incestuous lovers. Edited by zevie, Mar 31 2009, 01:33 PM.
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sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish) | |
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| the_sly_wink | Mar 31 2009, 02:15 PM Post #60 |
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Thanks for the charts, guys. That is a heapin' helpin' of relatives, and the time line is a big help too. |
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| Mars | Mar 31 2009, 02:55 PM Post #61 |
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I decided I couldn't attach all the cousins to each other or it would look like spaghetti. |
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| samaryley | Mar 31 2009, 04:03 PM Post #62 |
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I am blowing this up and posting it on my office wall. |
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| Artemis | Mar 31 2009, 06:45 PM Post #63 |
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Hahahaha ... you shoulda stuck spouses in there, too. That've really fucked people up. |
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| Artemis | Apr 1 2009, 05:45 PM Post #64 |
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Updated again. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| fullofmetal | Apr 2 2009, 10:26 AM Post #65 |
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This is killing me. I want to read it so badly, but I'm grounded from my computer at home, and school has a blocker against FF.net. D: |
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My whipped iced dairy drink brings the attention of many males to my place of residence. They declare that its quality far surpasses yours. Absolutely, it far surpasses yours. I could convey to you the recipe but I would require a sum. If sometimes you feel useless or depressed, just remember that you were once the fastest & most victorious little sperm out of millions. FF dA YT FP | |
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| Artemis | Apr 9 2009, 08:13 PM Post #66 |
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The Red Queen
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Another chapter, another asskicking. Also, Ruby and Devlin finally "talk" now that she knows he's dating her daughter. Oh, and Devlin does a little self-reflection and angsting. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Artemis | Apr 10 2009, 02:32 PM Post #67 |
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<whines> zeeeeeeevie, you haven't put your life aside to give us a throughly analytic and in-depth review in TWO chapters. Don't you looooooove us anymore? </whines> |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Mars | Apr 10 2009, 02:36 PM Post #68 |
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And it was my birthday and everything *pout* |
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| Artemis | Apr 10 2009, 02:40 PM Post #69 |
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Oh, that's good. I didn't even think to use guilt. I was pondering threats. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| zevie | Apr 11 2009, 02:47 PM Post #70 |
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Ah, God I've been so braindead lately, all I've been able to do is watch Sailor Moon and check my email. I will review soon though; promise! |
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sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish) | |
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