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| Topic Started: Feb 16 2009, 10:29 AM (1,135 Views) | |
| Mars | Feb 16 2009, 10:29 AM Post #1 |
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Gang Leader
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/1/ by http://www.fanfiction.net/u/921743/ Summary: When Tim Shepard receives a shipment of something other than the weapons he was expecting, the contents of the truck put his life in danger and force him to face some of his deepest prejudices. Finally! It's posted. This is what I wrote for Nanowrimo 2008. |
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| ShotgunOpera | Feb 16 2009, 10:36 AM Post #2 |
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shepard gang member, bee-yotch
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oo, excitement! unfortunately i'm quite behind on fosterchild's story and need to catch up with that before i dive into yet another story. reviews and such will be coming from me sometime i just can't guarantee when. |
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"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight | |
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| Hahukum Konn | Feb 16 2009, 11:29 AM Post #3 |
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Admiral-Engineer Second Rank
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Nice intro chapter. :) |
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"They don't just lean to the Gary Stu side, they bloody topple over from the lopsided weight." - barbarienne from Livejournal, in a discussion regarding John Grisham's main characters. "In their own way, they have us beat. It's like a secret code. They're probably really trying to take over the world and we literate people are out of the loop." - Latch, on fanbrats and bad spelling. | |
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| Kimberley. | Feb 16 2009, 02:15 PM Post #4 |
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I reviewed. The first chapter for me makes or breaks a fic. Supirse, suprise yours made my favorite stories list :) |
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| the_sly_wink | Feb 16 2009, 03:00 PM Post #5 |
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Royal Portrait Artist
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Whoa! Season premiere. |
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| Shannon Marie | Feb 16 2009, 03:11 PM Post #6 |
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Ooh, very good and interesting opening chapter. When I read the summary I totally didn't expect that to be in the truck lol. |
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"Roadhouse is the best action movie of the eighties. Hands down, no doubt. At least the eighties, maybe all time movie; It’s got all the key ingredients:” “Town in need, man searching for his soul,” “Hot sex, fisticuffs.” “Two words:” “Patrick,” “Swayze.” -- Friday Night Lights (TV series) | |
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| Jen | Feb 16 2009, 03:45 PM Post #7 |
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Woohoo!! Read and reviewed :D |
| I like wine. I like tasting. You know I can party. Let’s do it. Let’s rock it, maturity style! | |
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| Artemis | Feb 17 2009, 07:28 PM Post #8 |
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The Red Queen
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I was gonna pimp this. I'm so disappointed. |
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Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be. | |
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| Mars | Mar 2 2009, 09:00 PM Post #9 |
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Chapter 2 has been posted: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/2/ |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 3 2009, 09:59 AM Post #10 |
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REVEWING NOW ! That was an amazing up-date Mars. NICE ONE ! (anyone want to help me review this without sounding like a fanbrat gone wild?) |
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| Big Town Avenue | Mar 9 2009, 05:16 PM Post #11 |
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K-Dawg, the Destroyer
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Chapter 3 was posted today and it is fantastic! Curly and Tim are awesome, as usual, and I am really loving Lupe. She's totally original, which is a breath of fresh air in this fandom of Mary Sues lol. |
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| joeperrysbabe | Mar 15 2009, 03:33 PM Post #12 |
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Mars, this story so far is excellent!!! I love Tim Shepard, he's so damn tough, yet he's very family oriented. Curly was fantastic, too. And yes, the character of Lupe is great. :) I just love the chemestry between her and Tim. Will be anxiously waiting for more chapters to come. Your stories are wonderful. |
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| Mars | Mar 15 2009, 06:35 PM Post #13 |
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Thanks =) I hope to get ch 4 up tomorrow some time! |
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| Mars | Mar 21 2009, 08:06 PM Post #14 |
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Chapter 4 has been posted - http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/4/ |
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| Jen | Mar 21 2009, 08:07 PM Post #15 |
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Yay!! *goes to read* |
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| joeperrysbabe | Mar 23 2009, 09:19 PM Post #16 |
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All Right! :) |
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| joeperrysbabe | Mar 23 2009, 09:57 PM Post #17 |
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OMG! It's so getting good, now! :) Chapter 5! Chapter 5! |
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| Kimberley. | Mar 24 2009, 03:52 AM Post #18 |
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I second this. |
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| Mars | May 10 2009, 12:47 PM Post #19 |
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I've updated with chapter 5 posted: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/5/ |
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| xolilkelox1 | May 11 2009, 06:36 AM Post #20 |
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Read and Reviewed this chapter gave me chills listening to Lupe tell her story to Tim. :wub: Edited by xolilkelox1, May 11 2009, 06:37 AM.
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"Do not stand at my grave and weep." R.I.P. Poppy Scaga you will be deeply missed . 1924-2008 | |
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| Hippie | May 11 2009, 01:14 PM Post #21 |
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Maybe beause it's set in '67, and you got yourself killed a year earlier. |
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| joeperrysbabe | May 30 2009, 11:36 PM Post #22 |
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Awesome chapter! :) |
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| Mars | Jun 12 2009, 08:32 AM Post #23 |
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Chapter 6 has been posted. |
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| Mars | Jun 27 2009, 09:43 PM Post #24 |
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Chapter 7 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/7/ |
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| Mars | Jul 6 2009, 08:48 AM Post #25 |
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Chapter 8 is posted. http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/8/ I'm trying to get them all posted before I leave (or at least ready to post so I can maybe post them while I'm gone). Wish me luck lol. Also, my beta is on vacay until July 13th, so this chapter is un-beta'd. |
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| Kimberley. | Jul 6 2009, 11:32 AM Post #26 |
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:-/ ...where are you leaving to? |
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| Mars | Jul 6 2009, 01:34 PM Post #27 |
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I'll be working on Glenn Withrow's movie "The Mooring" for about a month from mid-July to August. While I'll have internet, I don't know how much I'll be online. |
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| Kimberley. | Jul 6 2009, 02:16 PM Post #28 |
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Ah. See, I thought you were going to say "I'm going to travel the world in 80 days with Glenn and Matt". That'd be cool. I hope you have fun with the movie (lucky you!). |
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| Mars | Jul 9 2009, 12:36 PM Post #29 |
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Ch 9: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/9/ |
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| Kimberley. | Jul 9 2009, 02:44 PM Post #30 |
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No, Tim, no! Gosh I wanted Curly there sooo bad. Anyone else feeling my love for Curly Shepard or are we all go team Tim? |
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| Mars | Jul 9 2009, 03:49 PM Post #31 |
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This story actually made ME love Curly lol. I may update once more before I leave. Maybe twice if you're good lol. |
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| Kimberley. | Jul 10 2009, 12:13 AM Post #32 |
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:O Please, please, pretty please? Did I tell you I love this story? :D |
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| writersblock242 | Jul 10 2009, 08:35 AM Post #33 |
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We are good, we are very good. O=) Pweeeeeeeeeez |
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I have left borderline obsession and I am driving away in my blue 66' mustang, laughing at the borderline for being so far away. -Me about The Outsiders (shoot, Randy got a new car.) "Remembering. Remembering a handsome, dark boy with a reckless grin and a hot temper. A tough, tow-headed boy with a cigarette in his mouth and a bitter grin on his hard face. Remembering-and this time it didn't hurt-a quiet, defeated-looking sixteen year old whose hair needed cutting badly and who had black eyes with a frightened expression on them. One week had taken them all." | |
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| Mars | Jul 12 2009, 10:37 AM Post #34 |
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Chapter 10 http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4867917/10/ |
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| Kimberley. | Jul 12 2009, 12:03 PM Post #35 |
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Told you we were good :D |
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