Story: Invasion

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Story: Invasion; by It'sTimeToDance
Topic Started: Feb 6 2009, 05:06 PM (67 Views)
Nittanylizard	Feb 6 2009, 05:06 PM Post #1
Gang Leader Posts: 895 Group: Senior Member Member #29 Joined: September 14, 2007	http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4785505/1/Invasion There are some grammatical and spelling errors, but it's possible they're intentional. Even if they're not, I thought this fic was just downright funny. Very clever. The idea is that the gang are aware that Mary Sues are invading, and they are responding like they're in a war, with Darry leading. Here's an excerpt from chapter 4 (all the chapters are short); Two-Bit and Dally have left the refuge of the house to scout out the gas station, and came across Badass!Sue: Quote: Her eyes were blue, sparkling like the stars above, with long, wavy black hair that flowed to the back of her knees. They had pink and blue highlights running through them like streams. She had a nose ring and a belly button ring, and she wore a white belly shirt that said "Linkin Park" on it, even though nobody in said band would be born for another twenty years. She wore baggy jeans with holes in the knees. She had a scowl on her perfect face, and she cocked her hip to the side. "Hey," she barked, "I'm Dannie." (A/N See, cause I'm the author, and I'm inserting myself in the story, and my names Danielle, and now I'm putting an annoying irrelevant author's note in the middle of my awesome story!!!! Shoutouts to Kelz and Rickki and Jimmi and all meh peeps in da hoood!!! Good tymes in Social Studies!!!) Taken with her beauty and tough-ness, Dallas garbled. Two-Bit, immune to her non-blonde endearingly butch behavior, grabbed his arm as he was sucked towards her, unzipping his pants. "No, Dallas! It's a Sue! Remember, Darry told us about 'er! The Bad Ass! No, don't! Ahh! You'll get syphilis!"
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bronxxxy	Feb 6 2009, 09:41 PM Post #2
Future Greaser Posts: 122 Group: Member Member #435 Joined: November 14, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username bronxxxy	Ahaha, I read this whole thing. I think the grammar errors and what not are actually intentional, but you're right even if they're not it's a fun read, I love the bit with Ponyboy and Steve's wrench in either the second chapter. Edited by bronxxxy, Feb 6 2009, 09:43 PM.
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TheLorax	Feb 8 2009, 12:20 PM Post #3
Gang Leader Posts: 1,521 Group: Senior Member Member #55 Joined: October 13, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username FlaminSquirrelz	Good tymes in Social Studies, that's great lol.
	"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax


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