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| Story: Fire Down Below; by Tulsa Tease | |
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| Topic Started: Sep 3 2008, 03:14 PM (120 Views) | |
| Mars | Sep 3 2008, 03:14 PM Post #1 |
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4516943/1/Fire_Down_Below What do you think of this? I'm not familiar with the author at all, and the summary made me think it would be a raging Mary Sue. But Dallas is quite in character and the OFC doesn't seem like a Mary Sue so far. I think it could be a good fic. |
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| Luna Skye | Sep 3 2008, 06:15 PM Post #2 |
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Future Greaser
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I do agree that it has potential. And even if the story will be a Mary Sue, at least the grammar is decent and comprehensible, which is something to be thankful for. |
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| ShotgunOpera | Sep 5 2008, 12:12 PM Post #3 |
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shepard gang member, bee-yotch
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“Guess I oughta be glad she didn’t name me Spanky, ” -- that made me lol :D Edited by ShotgunOpera, Sep 5 2008, 12:12 PM.
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"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight | |
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| fullofmetal | Sep 10 2008, 03:09 PM Post #4 |
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It seems like a decent fic, thank god. I don't think we need anymore 'Sues floatin' around. The grammer is good (HALLELUJAH), and Dally was in character... It should be interesting to watch to see which way it goes. |
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