Story: Quit Screwing Me Over (DallasWinston)

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Story: Quit Screwing Me Over (DallasWinston); Dallas Winston makes an appearance.
Topic Started: Jan 11 2008, 04:42 PM (2,081 Views)
EmilineHarris	Jan 11 2008, 04:42 PM Post #1
Greaser Posts: 416 Group: Senior Member Member #41 Joined: September 21, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston	I didn't see any other posts about this, so I hope it's not a repeat. Check this out. It is absolutely AWESOME! If someone on this board is responsible, I want to shake your hand. Quit Screwing Me Over In addition to being funny and a wonderful "wake up call" of sorts, I really like the whole idea of what became of Dally's potential "sister." It is such a harsh, and sad, concept, but it really fits with the character and adds to his inner demons. And how Dally refers to it is just ... Well ... So, Dally. Any other opinions?
	"Luckily, I was wearing my thermal bat-underwear!"


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 04:46 PM Post #2
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I was dying of laughter lol. His profile is hilarious and he has a forum AND a Livejournal - the LJ looks like it's been around for a couple of YEARS even though to ff.net account is from January 08. His reviews are so funny if you can find them. I laughed so hard at the knitting needle line. That's so wrong, but ... it fit lol.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 04:58 PM Post #3
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	OMG, there's reviews from Tim Shepard and Darrel Curtis. I kid you not. http://www.fanfiction.net/r/4005742/
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


zevie	Jan 11 2008, 04:58 PM Post #4
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	Tim reviewed. LMAO! AND Darry!
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 05:00 PM Post #5
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Did you look at the date on his account??? Tim joined last YEAR. This is awesome. I am so jealous.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


TheLorax	Jan 11 2008, 05:01 PM Post #6
Gang Leader Posts: 1,521 Group: Senior Member Member #55 Joined: October 13, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username FlaminSquirrelz	Ahh! That is too cool!
	"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax


Hahukum Konn	Jan 11 2008, 05:08 PM Post #7
Admiral-Engineer Second Rank Posts: 3,452 Group: Senior Member Member #28 Joined: September 14, 2007	I am boggled. I really am.
	"They don't just lean to the Gary Stu side, they bloody topple over from the lopsided weight." - barbarienne from Livejournal, in a discussion regarding John Grisham's main characters. "In their own way, they have us beat. It's like a secret code. They're probably really trying to take over the world and we literate people are out of the loop." - Latch, on fanbrats and bad spelling.


Queen Jane Approximately	Jan 11 2008, 05:09 PM Post #8
Gang Leader Posts: 2,104 Group: Senior Member Member #9 Joined: September 8, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	That's pretty much hilarious. I'll bet every Outsiders character is going to make their appearance, now. There's going to be an uprising. A revolt. They're going to gang up on the fanbrats, leave all kinds of reviews like that, and send them packing. I truly predict that's what's going to happen, lol. Peace, Queen Jane



TheLorax	Jan 11 2008, 05:11 PM Post #9
Gang Leader Posts: 1,521 Group: Senior Member Member #55 Joined: October 13, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username FlaminSquirrelz	Queen Jane Approximately Jan 11 2008, 04:09 PM That's pretty much hilarious. I'll bet every Outsiders character is going to make their appearance, now. There's going to be an uprising. A revolt. They're going to gang up on the fanbrats, leave all kinds of reviews like that, and send them packing. I truly predict that's what's going to happen, lol. Peace, Queen Jane Let's hope.
	"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 05:13 PM Post #10
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I want to know how the fanbrats are taking his reviews - if they think it's funny, or if they are taking it seriously lol. I mean, his reviews are more in character than their stories.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 11 2008, 09:43 PM Post #11
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	Mars...do you have any links to his reviews? I'd love to read some. I just read Dallas' letter...AMAZING!
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 09:53 PM Post #12
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	HK has a way of finding them on google! I was just going down the page and clicking on "reviews" for any story that mentioned Dally to find them lol.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


Hahukum Konn	Jan 11 2008, 10:07 PM Post #13
Admiral-Engineer Second Rank Posts: 3,452 Group: Senior Member Member #28 Joined: September 14, 2007	Go to google, punch in "DallasWinston" site:fanfiction.net Et voila.
	"They don't just lean to the Gary Stu side, they bloody topple over from the lopsided weight." - barbarienne from Livejournal, in a discussion regarding John Grisham's main characters. "In their own way, they have us beat. It's like a secret code. They're probably really trying to take over the world and we literate people are out of the loop." - Latch, on fanbrats and bad spelling.


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 10:09 PM Post #14
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I have SUCH a hard time remembering that for some reason.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


zevie	Jan 11 2008, 10:12 PM Post #15
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	It's the colon. It does it to me too lol. I automatically think it's more complicated than it really is.
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 11 2008, 10:12 PM Post #16
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	thanks guys!
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 10:13 PM Post #17
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	DallasWinston has a forum where you can ask him questions lol. http://www.fanfiction.net/myforums/DallasWinston/1467827/ I am too scared.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


zevie	Jan 11 2008, 10:14 PM Post #18
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	Do you have a question? Cuz I don't, but I want to ask him something just to poke at him. =P (I belong in the second grade. I really, really do.)
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 11 2008, 10:17 PM Post #19
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	I know what you mean zevie. Poke the big grizzle bear with a stick. Man ask him if he was gonna hurt cherry that night at the theater if ponyboy hadnt stepped in. see how in character he stays with that.
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 11 2008, 10:20 PM Post #20
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	oops not PB brain seizure...I mean if jOhnny hadnt stepped in.
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


zevie	Jan 11 2008, 10:22 PM Post #21
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	You don't want to ask?
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


Latch	Jan 11 2008, 11:02 PM Post #22
Gang Leader Posts: 2,170 Group: Senior Member Member #15 Joined: September 9, 2007	Birdie asked a question.
	"Look, if we�re going to have some stupid heart-to-heart, then I�m going to need my pants." - GBTA. "If you are huffin' and puffin', protect your muffin!" - Sue Johanson. J/T fo lyfe!


Mars	Jan 11 2008, 11:07 PM Post #23
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	oh my GOD lol.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 11 2008, 11:10 PM Post #24
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	Quote: You don't want to ask? haha too lazy...I'll let one of you poke the bear and then you gotta tell me about it.
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


Latch	Jan 12 2008, 07:20 AM Post #25
Gang Leader Posts: 2,170 Group: Senior Member Member #15 Joined: September 9, 2007	I wonder how many others are lurking out there. I'd love to see Steve. Maybe the girls, too.
	"Look, if we�re going to have some stupid heart-to-heart, then I�m going to need my pants." - GBTA. "If you are huffin' and puffin', protect your muffin!" - Sue Johanson. J/T fo lyfe!


Latch	Jan 12 2008, 07:20 AM Post #26
Gang Leader Posts: 2,170 Group: Senior Member Member #15 Joined: September 9, 2007	http://www.fanfiction.net/r/3950482/ It's made up of tons of asterisks. I love it.
	"Look, if we�re going to have some stupid heart-to-heart, then I�m going to need my pants." - GBTA. "If you are huffin' and puffin', protect your muffin!" - Sue Johanson. J/T fo lyfe!


Mars	Jan 12 2008, 09:46 AM Post #27
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Mine's not filtered, so if he ever hits me, you'd see it in all its glory lol.
	Glenn Withrow Fansite


byebyebirdie	Jan 12 2008, 11:01 AM Post #28
Gang Leader Posts: 2,565 Group: Senior Member Member #65 Joined: October 25, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Evie Fanfiction.net Username byebyebirdie58	Oh, I'd like to see one of the girls, too. Perhaps Evie?



Another Illusion	Jan 12 2008, 12:24 PM Post #29
Gang Leader Posts: 2,141 Group: Senior Member Member #11 Joined: September 9, 2007	I didn't notice Darry too. I love this, I seriously do. It's making me laugh, a lot.
	http://www.fanfiction.net/~AnotherIllusion Hugh-I'm waiting for it [Harry Potter] to be translated into Parselmouth. Russel-That's Parseltongue. Five points from Hufflepuff! Mock The Week


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 12 2008, 01:15 PM Post #30
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	I like how you say lurking....floating around waiting to pounce. Poor Steve may not get a chance to show up though considering most people dont write about him.
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


EmilineHarris	Jan 12 2008, 01:39 PM Post #31
Greaser Posts: 416 Group: Senior Member Member #41 Joined: September 21, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston	Sodapop_rox2000 Jan 12 2008, 01:10 AM Quote: You don't want to ask? haha too lazy...I'll let one of you poke the bear and then you gotta tell me about it. I'll ask for you ... I need a break from working on lesson plans and this is as good an excuse as any! :)
	"Luckily, I was wearing my thermal bat-underwear!"


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 12 2008, 01:41 PM Post #32
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	Well thank you Emiline! Let me know how it goes!
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


EmilineHarris	Jan 12 2008, 01:44 PM Post #33
Greaser Posts: 416 Group: Senior Member Member #41 Joined: September 21, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston	I posted it... It's short and to the point (I couldn't think of anything creative for the life of me... I've never communicated with the Dallas Winston before). Now we wait and see if he decides to reply.
	"Luckily, I was wearing my thermal bat-underwear!"


Sodapop_rox2000	Jan 12 2008, 01:50 PM Post #34
Greaser Posts: 232 Group: Senior Member Member #114 Joined: January 10, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis	Picky dallas.
	MyFF.net ~~~~~ "I give you fair warning, before you attempt me further. I'm not what you seemed, but far different."- Walt Whitman ~~~~~ I can see Dally's mind holding violence and sex, love and hate, very close together- The Marvelous Marsonfire! ~~~~~ There are people who in this world get shoved around and there are people who do the shoving!- Jo ~~~~~ Where I come from, you squeal, they ship your tongue to Cleveland- Jo


TheLorax	Jan 12 2008, 02:12 PM Post #35
Gang Leader Posts: 1,521 Group: Senior Member Member #55 Joined: October 13, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username FlaminSquirrelz	Latch Jan 12 2008, 06:20 AM I'd love to see Steve. Me too! That'd be hilarious.
	"I got my Mark Walhberg hat! I got my brothers! We're gonna go shoot some people up!" "I'm so upset, I was gonna commit suicide, but then I remembered we live on the first floor." Unless someone like you cares a whole awful lot, nothing is going to get better. It's not. The Lorax


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