Story: The Adventures of Lollipop Curtis

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Story: The Adventures of Lollipop Curtis; by Mars, Artemis, Confusingly Amusing and Big Town Avenue
Topic Started: Dec 16 2007, 07:21 PM (3,088 Views)
Artemis	Sep 1 2008, 02:49 PM Post #141
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	Your self-insert really got screwed, poor thing.
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


Mars	Sep 1 2008, 02:51 PM Post #142
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	haha. I kind of love her a little.
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Artemis	Sep 1 2008, 05:00 PM Post #143
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	They're like our ugly, wart-infested, STD-carrying children.
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


zevie	Sep 1 2008, 05:07 PM Post #144
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	I seem to remember sporking this at one point ... were you the Femme-Dally, Artemis?
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


Mars	Sep 1 2008, 05:18 PM Post #145
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	You did spork and I can't find it. I suspect it may be a casualty of my horrendous fuck ups in the Bad Fic Awards forum (I accidentally deleted a few threads instead of freezing them). I remember you described them in such a way that made us all go "OMG that's exactly how they are" lol.
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Artemis	Sep 1 2008, 05:57 PM Post #146
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	I've looked for that spork, too. It was insanely excellent; I think zevie threatened violence against the characters at one point. I laughed so damn hard. No, I was not Texas Bertha.
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


MisoSoop	Sep 1 2008, 06:35 PM Post #147
Greaser Posts: 340 Group: Senior Member Member #112 Joined: January 5, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username MisoSoop	I actually found reading the reviews just as entertaining as reading the story. All of you guys being chastised for an intentionally bad story amuses me. Lol.
	Jesus can walk on water. So what? Chuck Norris can swim through land.


Artemis	Sep 1 2008, 07:23 PM Post #148
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	It was frikkin hilarious. We loved all those reviews, because at least not everyone was saying how awesome it was.
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


Mars	Sep 1 2008, 07:40 PM Post #149
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	My favourite review was in response to an author's note that said we never saw Lolli/Dally coming lol: You didn't see it coming?!? You're the flippin' author, how could you not see it coming? JK, it was still good! I loved that lol.
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Artemis	Sep 2 2008, 04:35 PM Post #150
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	All like "please don't flip out on me."
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


Mars	Sep 2 2008, 04:44 PM Post #151
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I re-read the last few chapters last night and just laughed my ass off. Some of my new favourites were: "I liked Curly okay, but if I had sex, I wanted to know about it." "Pathetic. Sad. Touch their dicks." and of course: "I mean, srsly? Get a pair." If I'm ever depressed, I'm reading this story. "I get to name the baby, bitch."
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BlindedxxFalcon	Sep 2 2008, 05:43 PM Post #152
Gang Leader Posts: 2,046 Group: Senior Member Member #14 Joined: September 9, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username BlindedxxFalcon	"To hell with them," Tex said, pushing me away. "TWINZZZ POWERS!!" I didn't stop laughing at that for a good five minutes.
	I told Seven the Bartender that true love is felonious. "Not if they're over eighteen," he said, shutting the till of the cash register. By then the bar itself had become an appendage, a second torso holding up my first. "You take someone's breath away," I stressed. "You rob them of the ability to utter a single word." I tipped the neck of the empty liquor bottle toward him. "You steal a heart." He wiped up in front of me with a dishrag. "Any judge would toss that case out on it's ass." "You'd be surprised." Seven spreads the rag out on the brass bar to dry. "Sounds like a misdemeanor, if you ask me." I rested my cheek on the cool, damp wood. "No way," I said. "Once you're in, it's for life." ~ My Sister's Keeper, Jodi Picoult


Big Town Avenue	Sep 2 2008, 06:37 PM Post #153
K-Dawg, the Destroyer Posts: 1,276 Group: Admin Member #2 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username Big Town Avenue and co-author of A Sideways Smile	Oh, I love our stupid Mary Sue sisters.



Confusingly Amusing	Sep 2 2008, 06:50 PM Post #154
Kroi, Maker of Awesome Posts: 1,697 Group: Admin Member #4 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username A Sideways Smile (co-author account) and So Confusingly Amusing	I don't know which one I liked best. I was quite partial to my twin Sue, but still, the others are great.
	Ninjas Roll Four Deep SSOSB Go Bucks! One Headlight: The next installment of Tender is the Night is coming one day soon. 4000 words down, X amount to go.


Mars	Sep 2 2008, 06:53 PM Post #155
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I actually would write my twin Sue for fun.
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zevie	Sep 2 2008, 09:13 PM Post #156
Slashy Queen ... GET IT?! Queen? Hahaha Posts: 3,505 Group: Senior Member Member #8 Joined: September 7, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Fanfiction.net Username zevie/Midori Cha	Artemis Sep 1 2008, 05:57 PM I've looked for that spork, too. It was insanely excellent; I think zevie threatened violence against the characters at one point. I laughed so damn hard. No, I was not Texas Bertha. Oh, no. Are you Ree-ree?
	sugar is a fuckiung vegetbale. sugar cane, bitrch! Jesus didn't have fun dip. - Artemis, on Gertrude Stein Sorry to break it to you over Facebook, but look at this way: How much more awkward would it be in person -- for me, anyway. - Artemis, from FaceStalk where I stalked her God gave man Free Will so that man could choose between good and evil. Sadly, God did not give man the knowledge to distinguish good from evil. He only gave that to apples. - Betty Bowers (ish)


fairlane	Sep 3 2008, 01:51 AM Post #157
Gang Leader Posts: 552 Group: Senior Member Member #18 Joined: September 10, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard	This part made me lol; He was really good. It lasted about two or three minutes, which was fine with me. I'm not really into long relationships and stuff, you know? "That was great." I told him. "Stick around for awhile longer." he said. "I can go again pretty quick. I'm talented. We could do it a whole bunch of different ways. I got the car, we could go to the lake or something."



Mars	Sep 3 2008, 09:30 AM Post #158
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Don't worry folks, Tim was redeemed later on lol.
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Artemis	Sep 3 2008, 10:04 AM Post #159
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	He was?!
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


Mars	Sep 3 2008, 10:12 AM Post #160
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Well, later on .... We got another bottle of malt liquor and got really drunk and had us some wild-after-rumble-sex. Because I beat him at the rumble, I let him win in bed. But really, we both won. And this tiem it was more than two or three minutes. Plus, he had, like, 16 kids.
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ShotgunOpera	Sep 3 2008, 11:45 AM Post #161
shepard gang member, bee-yotch Posts: 3,824 Group: Senior Member Member #348 Joined: August 23, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username ShotgunOpera	when i first started reading it, i thought it was being serious...thank god you posted that last chapter! lol and this is possibly my favorite line, ever... "To hell with them," Tex said, pushing me away. "TWINZZZ POWERS!!"
	"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight


Mars	Sep 3 2008, 11:57 AM Post #162
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	It was hard to write really bad at first, the first chapter, while riddled with Mary Sues, is actually not that crappy lol. As we went on, we discovered we could literally do anything we wanted. It became a game of making each other laugh with how ridiculous we could get lol. Then there was the sadness when all the good reviews would come in lol.
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Artemis	Sep 3 2008, 12:16 PM Post #163
The Red Queen Posts: 4,686 Group: Admin Member #3 Joined: September 6, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Dallas Winston Favourite Outsiders Character Angela Shepard Fanfiction.net Username Artemis_Rex	zevie Sep 2 2008, 09:13 PM Artemis Sep 1 2008, 05:57 PM I've looked for that spork, too. It was insanely excellent; I think zevie threatened violence against the characters at one point. I laughed so damn hard. No, I was not Texas Bertha. Oh, no. Are you Ree-ree? Only after a pipe full of crack cocaine and a lobtomy, dear.
	Go, then; there are other worlds than these. If, at his counsel, I should turn aside into that ominous tract which, all agree, hides the Dark Tower. Yet acquiescingly I did turn as he pointed: neither pride nor hope rekindling at the end descried, so much as gladness that some end might be.


Mars	Sep 3 2008, 12:18 PM Post #164
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Aw. I love Ree-ree and her stalkerish obsession with ponyboy lol.
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Mars	Sep 3 2008, 12:21 PM Post #165
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Ha, I just went through my "How to Write Better Fic" LJ post and of the 51 tips to improve, we did 27 of the "don't do this" things lol. Awesome.
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ShotgunOpera	Sep 3 2008, 12:22 PM Post #166
shepard gang member, bee-yotch Posts: 3,824 Group: Senior Member Member #348 Joined: August 23, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username ShotgunOpera	Mars Sep 3 2008, 11:57 AM It was hard to write really bad at first, the first chapter, while riddled with Mary Sues, is actually not that crappy lol. As we went on, we discovered we could literally do anything we wanted. It became a game of making each other laugh with how ridiculous we could get lol. damn i think that would be really really really fun to do, just to blow off steam and have fun and make something utterly rediculous. if you ever want to do another sue fic, count me in! lol
	"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight


ShotgunOpera	Sep 3 2008, 12:23 PM Post #167
shepard gang member, bee-yotch Posts: 3,824 Group: Senior Member Member #348 Joined: August 23, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username ShotgunOpera	Mars Sep 3 2008, 12:21 PM Ha, I just went through my "How to Write Better Fic" LJ post and of the 51 tips to improve, we did 27 of the "don't do this" things lol. Awesome. i loved that post of yours, besides the tim shepard post it's probably one of my favorites
	"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight


Mars	Sep 3 2008, 12:28 PM Post #168
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I love me some Tim Shepard, as my LJ can attest to =)
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BlindedxxFalcon	Sep 3 2008, 04:39 PM Post #169
Gang Leader Posts: 2,046 Group: Senior Member Member #14 Joined: September 9, 2007 Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Favourite Outsiders Character Sodapop Curtis Fanfiction.net Username BlindedxxFalcon	We should all write one. Like, each write one chapter. We don't even have to post it on ff.net. It would just be for fun.
	I told Seven the Bartender that true love is felonious. "Not if they're over eighteen," he said, shutting the till of the cash register. By then the bar itself had become an appendage, a second torso holding up my first. "You take someone's breath away," I stressed. "You rob them of the ability to utter a single word." I tipped the neck of the empty liquor bottle toward him. "You steal a heart." He wiped up in front of me with a dishrag. "Any judge would toss that case out on it's ass." "You'd be surprised." Seven spreads the rag out on the brass bar to dry. "Sounds like a misdemeanor, if you ask me." I rested my cheek on the cool, damp wood. "No way," I said. "Once you're in, it's for life." ~ My Sister's Keeper, Jodi Picoult


ShotgunOpera	Sep 3 2008, 04:53 PM Post #170
shepard gang member, bee-yotch Posts: 3,824 Group: Senior Member Member #348 Joined: August 23, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username ShotgunOpera	oo, that sounds like fun!
	"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight


Mars	Nov 16 2008, 11:46 PM Post #171
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	Texas - Confusingly Amusing Ree-ree - Artemis Lollipop - Mars Sissy - Big Town Avenue Are you surprised? lol.
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ShotgunOpera	Nov 17 2008, 07:50 AM Post #172
shepard gang member, bee-yotch Posts: 3,824 Group: Senior Member Member #348 Joined: August 23, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Two-Bit Mathews Fanfiction.net Username ShotgunOpera	not really :P it was great
	"If you can't take a little bloody nose, maybe you oughta go back home and crawl under your bed. It's not safe out here. It's wondrous, with treasures to satiate desires both subtle and gross; but it's not for the timid." -- Q -- "madness is like gravity; all it takes is a little push." - the joker, the dark knight


Mars	Nov 17 2008, 09:14 PM Post #173
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	So there are questions as to who wrote what. Ch 1 - Who I Am - Mars Ch 2 - Jumpings - Mars Ch 3 - Surprises! - Artemis Ch 4 - Everybody Gets Some But Me - Mars Ch 5 - TOUCHDOWN! - Confusingly Amusing Ch 6 - Crazy bitches - Big Town Avenue Ch 7 - Wild Things' Cruel Intentions - Artemis Rex Ch 8 - Humping Around - Mars Ch 9 - Rumble In The Urban Jungle - All (and for the life of me, I honestly can't remember who wrote what lol. In general, we probably wrote our own character's POV, but I think we switched up too lol) Ch 10 - Epilog - All (We each wrote the epilogue for our self insert lol)
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bronxxxy	Nov 17 2008, 10:48 PM Post #174
Future Greaser Posts: 122 Group: Member Member #435 Joined: November 14, 2008 Favourite Outsiders Character Tim Shepard Favourite Outsiders Character Steve Randle Fanfiction.net Username bronxxxy	Thank you, Mars for putting that up as I wanted to know who wrote the sex scene. I give credit to Artemis for making that chapter the only time in my whole life where I've laughed and puked a little in my mouth. I salute you.
	MEH LIFE!!!!!1!! I loves it. I hates it. I needs it.


Mars	Nov 18 2008, 12:00 AM Post #175
Gang Leader Posts: 8,711 Group: Senior Member Member #1 Joined: September 6, 2007	I have to say, the lines she stole from "Wild Things" were my favourite part. I still can't believe no one caught that lol.
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