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Celestra
Jun 17 2009, 08:48 PM
stereochick
Jun 17 2009, 08:20 PM
At first the grammar and choppiness kind of put me off too, but once I got into the meat of the story I kind of forgot about it.
Same here. But I kept in mind that it was from 2002. Even though it was choppy, it put really clear images into my head and every once in a while there would be a line I found particularly evocative that would make me teary. Even though it was a tad cheesy, when Ponyboy goes "I'm not gonna grow up" or something similar, I was like "ohnuuuu Ponyyyyy."
The parts I liked best were actually the Steve parts. I try not to read too many things about illness because I find depressing (duh), but I liked that he was anger-based because I feel like anger and blame are seldom covered by writers for this kind of thing.

Mind you, I don't do well with tearjerkers anyways since I can be pretty emotional. I can't watch people cry because it makes me teary too, both in real life and movies. I'm also paranoid that I'm going to get cancer because I know it runs in my family on both sides :'(
That story actually started to mame me more paranoid about cancer >>

But it was one of the better stories I've read.
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