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Celestra	Jun 17 2009, 08:48 PM
Future Greaser Posts: 146 Group: Member Member #582 Joined: June 11, 2009 Favourite Outsiders Character Johnny Cade Favourite Outsiders Character Ponyboy Curtis Fanfiction.net Username Celestra	stereochick Jun 17 2009, 08:20 PM At first the grammar and choppiness kind of put me off too, but once I got into the meat of the story I kind of forgot about it. Same here. But I kept in mind that it was from 2002. Even though it was choppy, it put really clear images into my head and every once in a while there would be a line I found particularly evocative that would make me teary. Even though it was a tad cheesy, when Ponyboy goes "I'm not gonna grow up" or something similar, I was like "ohnuuuu Ponyyyyy." The parts I liked best were actually the Steve parts. I try not to read too many things about illness because I find depressing (duh), but I liked that he was anger-based because I feel like anger and blame are seldom covered by writers for this kind of thing. Mind you, I don't do well with tearjerkers anyways since I can be pretty emotional. I can't watch people cry because it makes me teary too, both in real life and movies. I'm also paranoid that I'm going to get cancer because I know it runs in my family on both sides :'( Edited by Celestra, Jun 17 2009, 08:50 PM.
	The green faerie blinked. "What in the world are condoms?" "Defenders of virginity. The lead one is called 'Trojan Man'." "Wow. Like knights or something?" Wisp asked, innocently. ". . . . yes. Knights," Saba muttered, not quite sure how to explain it all to him. "How the heck am I supposed to hand out knights?" "Miniature knights. Made of rubber." ". . . I don't quite follow you." "Wisp? Why don't you go and find ToonQueen before something else does?" "Should I bring condoms with me?" "JUST GO!!!" ~excerpt from The Pirates' Cove In Neverland Interactive Story

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