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taylorjeanjn Jun 4 2009, 05:27 PM
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That's good ^_^ It was ten million times harder to write than "Mr. Dating Machine" and I'm still not quite sure why. -shrugs-

Thanks for your review though. It seemed good to me lol. I was excited when you pointed out the name thing because that was one of those Mary-Sue traps that I really worked hard to avoid with Patricia.
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