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| Topic Started: Jun 13 2010, 11:43 PM (150 Views) | |
| Ulgania | Jun 13 2010, 11:43 PM Post #1 |
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A better Zarathustra has never rode a horse
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I need some ideas on how to finish it. I'd rather not post here, but if anyone has any ideas that they'd like to bounce around, then please PM me or give me a shout on AIM. And if you haven't read it, I highly suggest you do read it. I'm a little proud of it. |
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| Ulgania | Jun 15 2010, 01:25 AM Post #2 |
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A better Zarathustra has never rode a horse
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No one, then? :lol: |
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| Leselier | Jun 15 2010, 07:52 AM Post #3 |
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I read it and wish I'd come in early enough to be a part of it, but I have no real ideas for it. xD. |
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| Telosan | Jun 15 2010, 01:46 PM Post #4 |
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I've been following it. Ideas I have aren't that great though. Remember the Telosanti guard that attempted to help the main character? He was kind of forgotten and only mentioned in a few brief posts. What if he was reintroduced? Maybe he was caught being friendly towards the prisoners or helping some escape and ended up having to escape himself, following much the same route as the main character did on foot and eventually catching up because of all the time Chenzira spent in Camizu's lab. Eh, it's unlikely and cliche, but I want to get back into the RP! |
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| Leselier | Jun 15 2010, 01:48 PM Post #5 |
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I think something should happen with the twins, at least. They sort of fell off of the face of the earth. |
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| Ulgania | Jun 15 2010, 02:13 PM Post #6 |
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I've been dreading the day that someone calls me out on that little point. I dropped them like Dostoevsky dropped Luzhin. It would be a poor literary move, but I could have the twins be a part of the attacks into Dominion territory, and have the Telosanti guard be positioned in Judas' lab. I could work with that. |
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| Telosan | Jun 15 2010, 02:26 PM Post #7 |
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I called you out on the early characters before. If the Telosanti is stationed in the lab, how would he get away to fight alongside Chenzira? Remember, he doesn't particularly like the Dominion and Telosan Africa only gave in to the Dominion to avoid their annihilation. |
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| Ulgania | Jun 15 2010, 02:34 PM Post #8 |
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Okay maybe you did :lol: The Telosanti guard may recognize Chen, and may have been stationed in the lab because he had prior experience with this sort of task. You could also imagine a reshuffling of soldiery within the Dominion at some point or another. The guard recognizes Chen, is already disenfranchised by the Dominion for being stationed in an area where a revolt would mean death, and is thusly willing to be of some assistance. |
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| Telosan | Jun 15 2010, 02:40 PM Post #9 |
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I guess he could be one of the replacement guards, but Chen is already free of the lab, isn't he? |
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| Ulgania | Jun 15 2010, 07:11 PM Post #10 |
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In the last update he was being recaptured |
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| Telosan | Jun 15 2010, 07:25 PM Post #11 |
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Oh, duh, right. I did read it, don't worry. Just forgot. :P |
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