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Ponies
Topic Started: Sep 8 2011, 04:12:30 PM (3,245 Views)
TheFinalEnigma
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Wait Vidguy, let's pretend it is and keep him out of it.
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TheBurrowingHippo
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That...

would not be kind.

YOU DARE DEFY THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY?
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Vidguysteve
Nov 28 2011, 04:08:11 PM
Well, fuck you, Vidguysteve, because you don't know shit.
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TheFinalEnigma
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TheBurrowingHippo
Oct 10 2011, 08:27:59 AM
That...

would not be kind.

YOU DARE DEFY THE ELEMENTS OF HARMONY?
It would only be a small prank. Pinkie Pie would approve of me.
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Alright, fine. *grumble*
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Vidguysteve
Nov 28 2011, 04:08:11 PM
Well, fuck you, Vidguysteve, because you don't know shit.
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TheFinalEnigma
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And you would be defying the element of laughter.
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TO MANY ELEPHANTS TO FOLLOW

Wat
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Vidguysteve
Nov 28 2011, 04:08:11 PM
Well, fuck you, Vidguysteve, because you don't know shit.
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SoulofHachi
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Steve, so I looked at your writing. Despite not caring about the pony thing, I think it was pretty well written. I like how you describe Discord being filled in with color like a coloring book.

But at that same point, I also had difficulty imagining how he would look as you also described him as squiggly lines that reached out. I couldn't decide if he was 2-d or 3-d.

Now, not knowing this Celestia, I couldn't really feel concern for her situation. You're writing for fans of that show, so I'm sure you don't have to change anything there, but as an outsider, I don't really feel a bond yet with Celestia, why I should care for her well being. But, that might just be because I'm not the friendliest of person anyways.

On the flip side, I am impressed with Discord. I think you gotten him to be believable as a malicious prankster. Despite the criticism, I will be waiting to see what you got next. I think that's pretty good that you can write a story that's interesting even to someone who isn't a fan of the show.
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Thanks, hachi! Yeah, a few people commented on how Discord was hard to picture in their heads, but I wanted the situation to seem surreal which is why I left out those details.
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Forgot to add this. I'm sure I don't feel any concern for Celestia at the moment since you've only just started. But as it goes on I'll be able to know her better and sympathize with the situation.
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Well, I don't know if you read the second chapter or not, but there's more in there.
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So...

WHY HAVEN'T THEY SENT MY DAMNED FIC TO THE PREREADERS YET????? GAWSH
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Let me in on something I've learned from experience. No matter how much you insult people, your dick is still going to be small.

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Maybe because it's terrible.
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Lordraymond
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Maybe because you should shut your whore mouth, Steve.

Your's is... Um... It's... FUCK I CAN'T FIND ANYTHING BAD TO SAY ABOUT IT
TheFinalEnigma
 
Let me in on something I've learned from experience. No matter how much you insult people, your dick is still going to be small.

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Your's is so good it's too good.

See Ray, say something like that.
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Lordraymond
Oct 13 2011, 02:20:49 PM
So...

WHY HAVEN'T THEY SENT MY DAMNED FIC TO THE PREREADERS YET????? GAWSH
Some shit takes time man. How long have you been waiting?
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