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Topic Started: Sep 8 2011, 04:12:30 PM (3,246 Views)
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Steev
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Oct 9 2011, 06:42:21 PM
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- TheFinalEnigma
- Oct 9 2011, 06:38:32 PM
Come on man, you're making me want to write a pony thing. But knowing me it'll end up as the worst story known to mankind. SO I'LL DO IT ANYWAY! If you'd like, I'd be happy to help proofread and comment on your story if you try it.
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How long has my sig been this ginormous? Gad damn. - lordberfer00 January 16 2014
- 6:01 PM
Blame the Jews.
- Lordraymond
- Sep 6 2011, 10:31:23 PM
Also, I'm obsessed with your penis
- lordberfer00 February 13 2011
- 1:33 AM
That whole topic ended like Germany getting punished after WWI, with Vidguy being the Woodrow Wilson.
- Lordraymond February 13 2011
- 1:34 AM
That whole topic ended like a gaggle of tards in the bathroom throwing shit everywhere, then the tard wrangler comes in and settles them all down
- NeinBarkNobi Apr 29 2014
- 08:01 PM
I was wrong about the ghosts.
- JustaMan Sep 21 2014 3:56 PM
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]The physics in this world are under Vidguysteve's control.
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Axem Red
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Oct 9 2011, 06:44:11 PM
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- Vidguysteve
- Oct 9 2011, 06:41:55 PM
- Axem Red
- Oct 9 2011, 06:38:30 PM
I am a slow reader. So can I do it tomorrow?
Well, read at your own pace, but at least try the first chapter tonight and see what you think. If the subject matter isn't your thing, don't feel compelled to read the rest of it. Ok I will. But yeah sorry. I've just been really tired lately. But yeah I'll read the first one tonight.
Edited by Axem Red, Oct 9 2011, 06:44:33 PM.
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Signature Hobojesus Junk Name: Cobra Commander Age: 56 Appearance:  Trait: Command: He is a vile leader so he strikes fear into his men to make them obey him. Backstory: Cobra Commander is the vile and sinister leader of COBRA, the ruthless terrorist organization determined to rule the world. Spiritual Guide: Hydra Hydra is Cobra Commander’s pet. He is an 8 head dragon-snake and each head holds an element: Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Ice, Forest, Dark, and Light. Personality: Ruthless, cold-hearted, and will cut down any who disagrees with him, even his own men. Alliance: Catholic Morality: Evil Wicked Chaotic Inventory: A Rapier Sword Quotes - lordberfer00
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Bread is terrible, Axem, take shrooms instead.
- lordberfer00
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I talk like that everywhere.
But at least I don't have a slightly repressed horse fetish.
- Lordraymond
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That said, I obviously go for Fluttershy "Faith"; the shy ones are always total screamers in bed.
- Raoul Silva
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We are the two rats left. We can either eat each other...huh? Or eat everyone else.
  
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TheFinalEnigma
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Oct 9 2011, 06:44:37 PM
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- Vidguysteve
- Oct 9 2011, 06:42:21 PM
- TheFinalEnigma
- Oct 9 2011, 06:38:32 PM
Come on man, you're making me want to write a pony thing. But knowing me it'll end up as the worst story known to mankind. SO I'LL DO IT ANYWAY!
If you'd like, I'd be happy to help proofread and comment on your story if you try it. Thanks, I'd appreciate it.
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Spoiler: click to toggle Talking about someone having a small and limpy dick. - TheBurrowingHippo
- Oct 21 2011, 04:55:24 PM
What?
No. I was just being retarded.
AKA being in my natural state
Besides, am I really one to talk?
- lordberfer00
- Jan 22 2012, 04:26:15 PM
I'm threatening Popple
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TheBurrowingHippo Jan 13 2012, 05:28:07 PM I'm not good in bed
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Lordraymond Aug 23 2012, 01:40:19 PM I still totally want to fuck that horse though
- lordberfer00
- May 26 2010, 03:58:31 PM
Just because I can. 
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Axem Red
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Oct 9 2011, 07:04:52 PM
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VIDGUY!!! THAT FIRST CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!!
I'll read Chapter 2 tomorrow. I can't wait!!!
Edited by Axem Red, Oct 9 2011, 07:09:55 PM.
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Signature Hobojesus Junk Name: Cobra Commander Age: 56 Appearance:  Trait: Command: He is a vile leader so he strikes fear into his men to make them obey him. Backstory: Cobra Commander is the vile and sinister leader of COBRA, the ruthless terrorist organization determined to rule the world. Spiritual Guide: Hydra Hydra is Cobra Commander’s pet. He is an 8 head dragon-snake and each head holds an element: Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, Ice, Forest, Dark, and Light. Personality: Ruthless, cold-hearted, and will cut down any who disagrees with him, even his own men. Alliance: Catholic Morality: Evil Wicked Chaotic Inventory: A Rapier Sword Quotes - lordberfer00
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Bread is terrible, Axem, take shrooms instead.
- lordberfer00
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I talk like that everywhere.
But at least I don't have a slightly repressed horse fetish.
- Lordraymond
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That said, I obviously go for Fluttershy "Faith"; the shy ones are always total screamers in bed.
- Raoul Silva
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We are the two rats left. We can either eat each other...huh? Or eat everyone else.
  
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SoulofHachi
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Oct 9 2011, 07:04:54 PM
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After looking at that episode, I can agree that the whole thing isn't completely overrated. Certainly better then most of the garbage being put out for kids these days.
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How can I help you?
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Steev
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Oct 9 2011, 07:14:10 PM
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- SoulofHachi
- Oct 9 2011, 07:04:54 PM
After looking at that episode, I can agree that the whole thing isn't completely overrated. Certainly better then most of the garbage being put out for kids these days. Hachi, thank you for approaching it with an open mind.
And thanks for your glowing reviews, everyone!
Edited by Steev, Oct 9 2011, 07:14:29 PM.
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How long has my sig been this ginormous? Gad damn. - lordberfer00 January 16 2014
- 6:01 PM
Blame the Jews.
- Lordraymond
- Sep 6 2011, 10:31:23 PM
Also, I'm obsessed with your penis
- lordberfer00 February 13 2011
- 1:33 AM
That whole topic ended like Germany getting punished after WWI, with Vidguy being the Woodrow Wilson.
- Lordraymond February 13 2011
- 1:34 AM
That whole topic ended like a gaggle of tards in the bathroom throwing shit everywhere, then the tard wrangler comes in and settles them all down
- NeinBarkNobi Apr 29 2014
- 08:01 PM
I was wrong about the ghosts.
- JustaMan Sep 21 2014 3:56 PM
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]The physics in this world are under Vidguysteve's control.
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Lordraymond
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Oct 9 2011, 08:31:09 PM
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While we're on the topic of ponyfics, here's mine that's pending approval:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q3AcE--nRlrtt9QleoSAj0z4aQ4Y_xWMDQu8yj8EOJk/edit?hl=en_US
Steve helped beyond my capability to thank him, correcting my rather atrocious grammar and giving creative feedback and criticism leagues beyond what I expected of him. I'll be sure to give you a credit somewhere in there, Steve.
Anyway, any stuff you guys can give for criticism is appreciated, after you're done reading Steve's amazing story, that is.
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- TheFinalEnigma
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Let me in on something I've learned from experience. No matter how much you insult people, your dick is still going to be small.
- Axem Red
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I'm pathetic I know
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TheFinalEnigma
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Oct 9 2011, 08:45:50 PM
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Bullets? Ponies and bullets? BULLETS? YOU PUT VIOLENCE IN MY PONIES?!?!? And I guess I liked it a bit.
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Spoiler: click to toggle Talking about someone having a small and limpy dick. - TheBurrowingHippo
- Oct 21 2011, 04:55:24 PM
What?
No. I was just being retarded.
AKA being in my natural state
Besides, am I really one to talk?
- lordberfer00
- Jan 22 2012, 04:26:15 PM
I'm threatening Popple
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TheBurrowingHippo Jan 13 2012, 05:28:07 PM I'm not good in bed
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Lordraymond Aug 23 2012, 01:40:19 PM I still totally want to fuck that horse though
- lordberfer00
- May 26 2010, 03:58:31 PM
Just because I can. 
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Lordraymond
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Oct 9 2011, 09:02:00 PM
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- TheFinalEnigma
- Oct 9 2011, 08:45:50 PM
Bullets? Ponies and bullets? BULLETS? YOU PUT VIOLENCE IN MY PONIES?!?!? And I guess I liked it a bit. A bit?

You only liked it... A bit?...
Also to get technical they're not bullets, they're bolter shots from the boltgun, which are roughly half a fist (or hoof) size mildly explosive rounds.
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- TheFinalEnigma
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Let me in on something I've learned from experience. No matter how much you insult people, your dick is still going to be small.
- Axem Red
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I'm pathetic I know
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TheFinalEnigma
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Oct 9 2011, 09:03:08 PM
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FUCKING BULLETS! WHY MAN WHY! Actually I liked it a lot, just needed to get over the fact that there is violence in my precious ponies.
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Spoiler: click to toggle Talking about someone having a small and limpy dick. - TheBurrowingHippo
- Oct 21 2011, 04:55:24 PM
What?
No. I was just being retarded.
AKA being in my natural state
Besides, am I really one to talk?
- lordberfer00
- Jan 22 2012, 04:26:15 PM
I'm threatening Popple
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TheBurrowingHippo Jan 13 2012, 05:28:07 PM I'm not good in bed
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Lordraymond Aug 23 2012, 01:40:19 PM I still totally want to fuck that horse though
- lordberfer00
- May 26 2010, 03:58:31 PM
Just because I can. 
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Steev
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Oct 9 2011, 09:29:01 PM
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I liked the story so far, that much you already know, and I'm sure that it's going to get even better once you finish establishing the setting and backstory and get to the real action.
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How long has my sig been this ginormous? Gad damn. - lordberfer00 January 16 2014
- 6:01 PM
Blame the Jews.
- Lordraymond
- Sep 6 2011, 10:31:23 PM
Also, I'm obsessed with your penis
- lordberfer00 February 13 2011
- 1:33 AM
That whole topic ended like Germany getting punished after WWI, with Vidguy being the Woodrow Wilson.
- Lordraymond February 13 2011
- 1:34 AM
That whole topic ended like a gaggle of tards in the bathroom throwing shit everywhere, then the tard wrangler comes in and settles them all down
- NeinBarkNobi Apr 29 2014
- 08:01 PM
I was wrong about the ghosts.
- JustaMan Sep 21 2014 3:56 PM
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]The physics in this world are under Vidguysteve's control.
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Steev
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Oct 9 2011, 09:30:59 PM
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- TheFinalEnigma
- Oct 9 2011, 09:03:08 PM
FUCKING BULLETS! WHY MAN WHY! Actually I liked it a lot, just needed to get over the fact that there is violence in my precious ponies. Hey, remember that time the main cast would just kick their troubles in the face as their contingency plan for mortal danger? Those ponies ARE violent!
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How long has my sig been this ginormous? Gad damn. - lordberfer00 January 16 2014
- 6:01 PM
Blame the Jews.
- Lordraymond
- Sep 6 2011, 10:31:23 PM
Also, I'm obsessed with your penis
- lordberfer00 February 13 2011
- 1:33 AM
That whole topic ended like Germany getting punished after WWI, with Vidguy being the Woodrow Wilson.
- Lordraymond February 13 2011
- 1:34 AM
That whole topic ended like a gaggle of tards in the bathroom throwing shit everywhere, then the tard wrangler comes in and settles them all down
- NeinBarkNobi Apr 29 2014
- 08:01 PM
I was wrong about the ghosts.
- JustaMan Sep 21 2014 3:56 PM
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]The physics in this world are under Vidguysteve's control.
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TheFinalEnigma
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Oct 9 2011, 09:37:35 PM
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I'm proud to announce that Vidguy and Ray have inspired me to write my own pony thang, Keep in mind that their's are far superior.
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Spoiler: click to toggle Talking about someone having a small and limpy dick. - TheBurrowingHippo
- Oct 21 2011, 04:55:24 PM
What?
No. I was just being retarded.
AKA being in my natural state
Besides, am I really one to talk?
- lordberfer00
- Jan 22 2012, 04:26:15 PM
I'm threatening Popple
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TheBurrowingHippo Jan 13 2012, 05:28:07 PM I'm not good in bed
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Lordraymond Aug 23 2012, 01:40:19 PM I still totally want to fuck that horse though
- lordberfer00
- May 26 2010, 03:58:31 PM
Just because I can. 
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TheBurrowingHippo
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Oct 10 2011, 07:03:13 AM
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Goddammit Ray I wanted to join the herd by he was LAY-Z and didn't approve me even though I did the standard initiation! (Summary of first two episodes, 7 Mane characters, My least liked and best liked characters)
So I'm asking Vidguy.
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- Vidguysteve
- Nov 28 2011, 04:08:11 PM
Well, fuck you, Vidguysteve, because you don't know shit.
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Steev
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Oct 10 2011, 08:18:41 AM
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It's not a fraternity. You either like the show or you don't.
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How long has my sig been this ginormous? Gad damn. - lordberfer00 January 16 2014
- 6:01 PM
Blame the Jews.
- Lordraymond
- Sep 6 2011, 10:31:23 PM
Also, I'm obsessed with your penis
- lordberfer00 February 13 2011
- 1:33 AM
That whole topic ended like Germany getting punished after WWI, with Vidguy being the Woodrow Wilson.
- Lordraymond February 13 2011
- 1:34 AM
That whole topic ended like a gaggle of tards in the bathroom throwing shit everywhere, then the tard wrangler comes in and settles them all down
- NeinBarkNobi Apr 29 2014
- 08:01 PM
I was wrong about the ghosts.
- JustaMan Sep 21 2014 3:56 PM
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]The physics in this world are under Vidguysteve's control.
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