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Ponies
Topic Started: Sep 8 2011, 04:12:30 PM (3,246 Views)
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TheFinalEnigma
Oct 9 2011, 06:38:32 PM
Come on man, you're making me want to write a pony thing. But knowing me it'll end up as the worst story known to mankind. SO I'LL DO IT ANYWAY!
If you'd like, I'd be happy to help proofread and comment on your story if you try it.
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Axem Red
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Oct 9 2011, 06:41:55 PM
Axem Red
Oct 9 2011, 06:38:30 PM
I am a slow reader. So can I do it tomorrow?
Well, read at your own pace, but at least try the first chapter tonight and see what you think. If the subject matter isn't your thing, don't feel compelled to read the rest of it.
Ok I will. But yeah sorry. I've just been really tired lately. But yeah I'll read the first one tonight.
Edited by Axem Red, Oct 9 2011, 06:44:33 PM.
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Oct 9 2011, 06:42:21 PM
TheFinalEnigma
Oct 9 2011, 06:38:32 PM
Come on man, you're making me want to write a pony thing. But knowing me it'll end up as the worst story known to mankind. SO I'LL DO IT ANYWAY!
If you'd like, I'd be happy to help proofread and comment on your story if you try it.
Thanks, I'd appreciate it.
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VIDGUY!!! THAT FIRST CHAPTER WAS AMAZING!!!

I'll read Chapter 2 tomorrow. I can't wait!!!
Edited by Axem Red, Oct 9 2011, 07:09:55 PM.
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After looking at that episode, I can agree that the whole thing isn't completely overrated. Certainly better then most of the garbage being put out for kids these days.
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Oct 9 2011, 07:04:54 PM
After looking at that episode, I can agree that the whole thing isn't completely overrated. Certainly better then most of the garbage being put out for kids these days.
Hachi, thank you for approaching it with an open mind.

And thanks for your glowing reviews, everyone!
Edited by Steev, Oct 9 2011, 07:14:29 PM.
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While we're on the topic of ponyfics, here's mine that's pending approval:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q3AcE--nRlrtt9QleoSAj0z4aQ4Y_xWMDQu8yj8EOJk/edit?hl=en_US

Steve helped beyond my capability to thank him, correcting my rather atrocious grammar and giving creative feedback and criticism leagues beyond what I expected of him. I'll be sure to give you a credit somewhere in there, Steve.

Anyway, any stuff you guys can give for criticism is appreciated, after you're done reading Steve's amazing story, that is.
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Bullets? Ponies and bullets? BULLETS? YOU PUT VIOLENCE IN MY PONIES?!?!? And I guess I liked it a bit.
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TheFinalEnigma
Oct 9 2011, 08:45:50 PM
Bullets? Ponies and bullets? BULLETS? YOU PUT VIOLENCE IN MY PONIES?!?!? And I guess I liked it a bit.
A bit?

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You only liked it... A bit?...

Also to get technical they're not bullets, they're bolter shots from the boltgun, which are roughly half a fist (or hoof) size mildly explosive rounds.
Edited by Lordraymond, Oct 9 2011, 09:04:01 PM.
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FUCKING BULLETS! WHY MAN WHY! Actually I liked it a lot, just needed to get over the fact that there is violence in my precious ponies.
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I liked the story so far, that much you already know, and I'm sure that it's going to get even better once you finish establishing the setting and backstory and get to the real action.
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TheFinalEnigma
Oct 9 2011, 09:03:08 PM
FUCKING BULLETS! WHY MAN WHY! Actually I liked it a lot, just needed to get over the fact that there is violence in my precious ponies.
Hey, remember that time the main cast would just kick their troubles in the face as their contingency plan for mortal danger? Those ponies ARE violent!
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I'm proud to announce that Vidguy and Ray have inspired me to write my own pony thang, Keep in mind that their's are far superior.
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Goddammit Ray I wanted to join the herd by he was LAY-Z and didn't approve me even though I did the standard initiation! (Summary of first two episodes, 7 Mane characters, My least liked and best liked characters)

So I'm asking Vidguy.
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Vidguysteve
Nov 28 2011, 04:08:11 PM
Well, fuck you, Vidguysteve, because you don't know shit.
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It's not a fraternity. You either like the show or you don't.
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