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| The Fourth Piece Review Thread | |
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| Topic Started: Aug 25 2008, 01:00 PM (268 Views) | |
| CourageWisdomPower | Aug 25 2008, 01:00 PM Post #1 |
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In this thread you may post feedback for The Legend of Zelda: The Fourth Piece. The Legend of Zelda: The Fourth Piece begins my series of Zelda fiction, also titled The Fourth Piece. This story follows a young man as he gets caught up in the middle of a turn of events happening in the world around him. Realizing that he is chosen to be a hero, he embarks on a quest to save the kingdom from an evil thief after the secret of a fabled power. To face the trials of this quest, he must accept both the help of an important stranger and the uncanny form of a wolf! That's it for your author's summary. As for acknowledgments, I'd like to take the time to name just a few of the things that have inspired my writing. First and foremost, The Legend of Zelda series by Nintendo influenced the main idea of the story, of course. Likewise, it was thanks to the media (i.e. books, movies, music, even people) that the world of fantasy was brought to life for me, allowing me to write this. I also thank my friends online for the support they've offered ever since the early days of my writing. It is appreciated! Now, please enjoy the story. C H A P T E R S 1 - Onslaught 2 - On Raven's Wings 3 - A Walk to Remember 4 - Chosen 5 - Enter Caelan 6 - The Wolf and His Boy 7 - Twilight Fugitives 8 - A Question in Black 9 - Tales by the Torchlight 10 - The Test 11 - Return 12 - Behind Closed Doors 13 - The End Begins 14 - Vale of Corpses 15 - Sonrise Edited by CourageWisdomPower, Jun 2 2010, 05:48 PM.
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| sleepy*beauty | Aug 26 2008, 04:10 AM Post #2 |
 
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Wow! I really like the story so far! You have a unique style of writing that provides just enough detail to keep the readers' attention without becoming boring. The use of descriptive verbs is also very well-balanced. Keep on writing! (I'll keep on reading ^_^) |
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| sleepy*beauty | Aug 27 2008, 11:59 AM Post #3 |
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Chapter 3 was very good! I liked the description of the scenery - it was quite realistic! And now I'm all worried about Link. D: |
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| sleepy*beauty | Sep 1 2008, 09:42 PM Post #4 |
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The story is getting really exciting! I like the characters' differing personalities. It makes the story seem more realistic. Keep up the good work! ^_^ |
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| CourageWisdomPower | Sep 3 2008, 02:10 PM Post #5 |
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Thanks for your comments, S*B. I just got chapter ten up. Please note that this will be my last update to the story for over a couple of weeks while I'm on vacation. Edited by CourageWisdomPower, Apr 14 2010, 04:39 PM.
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| sleepy*beauty | Sep 19 2008, 06:31 PM Post #6 |
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ooh, I love the new chapters! They're all exciting and stuff! But I wish Caelan was still in it... Anyway, keep up the good work! "No, I'm the fairy imposter that broke into your house" <- best line yet. XD |
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