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Topic Started: Jun 4 2010, 02:39 PM (283 Views)
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Lightsworn

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"Hmph, so this is the boy" said the man, staring at the on-screen monitor. "My lord," a shadowy figure stated in the darkness, "Squadron X is ready for combat." "Good, good, prepare for dispatch." "Yes, my lord" the shadowy figure disapeared out of sight.
"Um, excuse me, lord sir? Do you think we should hold off the attack until later? We are short on supplies and..." "Shut your trap you measly bucket of bolts! I command this ship and when I say attack I mean attack!" The man shouted. "Of course, my lord..." the small robot disapeared as well.
The man shifted positions in his uncomfortable chair. He turned on the ship's intercom and shouted "Squadron X commence operation extermination!"

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"Now class, can anyone tell me what an exponent is?" My math teacher Mr. Clover asked. He scanned around the room until he met my eyes. "How about you Joe?" "Um... I don't know." I replied. To be honest, i'm not very good at math in case you haven't figured it out already. "Quite, anyone else care to share what they know?"
Mr. Clover was about to call on someone else when the intercom cam aloud. "Good morning students..." the principal said in a shakey voice. "I am afraid a... comotion, is going on outside. So school is out for the time being." Once the sentance ended everyone jumped out of their seats and cheered. They piled through the halls out into the courtyard. Trying not to be flattened, I followed too.
When I got outside I realised what the "commotion" was. Up on top of the school roof were five men wearing black robes and pitch-dark swords at their waists. The leader looked straight at me and said "target aquired, commencing battle."

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So that's all for now. Tell me what you think of it below. I'll continue the story if you guys like it.
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Well? Is my story so bad it dosen't even deserve any comments?
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No. This happens to most stories. even mine. I honestly think EAC does not have the creative effort to spend a few seconds writing something as short as feedback or character form :/

But it's a good story. Can't wait to see more
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Well thanks for the feedback hopefully you will influence other people to do the same.

I'll get started on the seccond part soon
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I wish I could influence people. But I was waiting for over 2 months for just a few character submissions and I only got 1. :/
But I'll read this :L
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