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Digimon: Animal Spirits; a rip-off of frontier, but cooler
Topic Started: Sep 23 2008, 04:15 AM (56 Views)
baron z
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I never liked season 4 that much, but I was playing Battlespirit 2 yesterday and sort of got into it, but the season was bad, so I made a rip-off of it. I'll tell you now that some of the chapter titles suck, like the first one, and Brendans clothes are different than in the RP. I hope Kira comes back soon so the RPing can start and someone besides PC can read this. Well, here goes nothing!

Chapter 1: The Wrong Train

Chad yawned as he slapped the snooze alarm and rolled back to face the wall. Just then his memory snapped back and he jumped out of bed, brushed his teeth, and brown hair, got dressed, and ran downstairs. His parents had already left for the race, it was saturday and Chad was on swim team (I think the goggles should be explained just this once).

The crowd was roaring, Chad watched the water sparkle and shimmer. His team mate was coming close to the wall, so Chad pulled his goggles over his eyes and got into a somewhat horizontal diving position. He dove the best dive of his life when his team mate hit the wall, and begun to swim as fast as he could, as the anchor, he was the most important on the team. As he turned his head to get a breath, he saw some one else ahead of him slightly, so he pushed even harder so they were even. When they pushed off the opposite wall, his opponent got ahead of him. He took a deep breath, and rushed as hard as he could to the end. The crowed roared even louder around the time he touched the wall. He looked up and smiled, but his team looked dissapointed. Chad heard the another team yelling happily and looked over to realize he had lost the heat. His opponent looked and him and his smile faded. He then put it back on and walked over to Chad.
"Good race," he said to Chad, "I thought you had me there."
"Congrats," Chad replied, forcing a smile. His opponent walked back to his team. Chad headed for the shower.

"You were great, honey," Chad's mom said to comfort him. Chad didn't respond and continued staring out the window, so his mom gave up. They stopped at the train station, that made Chad smile. They were going on a week-long vacation to Miami. "I'm gonna use he restroom," Chad said when they were inside. (more later)
Edited by baron z, Sep 25 2008, 02:18 PM.
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