Super Smash Story

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Super Smash Story
Topic Started: Jun 25 2008, 03:29 AM (95 Views)
BHM	Jun 25 2008, 03:29 AM Post #1
Silver Eagle Posts: 367 Group: Adamant Member Member #44 Joined: December 13, 2007	a little fanfic I made a ew motnhs ago, it goes from 64-brawl, but so far I been going slow with it Chapter 1-The beginning Back then in the 64 days Mario and Luigi just finished their games and went home to talk about them, until mario ask the question... Mario:Luigi why you have to be everything lika me? Luigi:What do you meana? Mario:You always copy what I doa, my player toa. The only difference is that you gota higher pitched voice than mines. Luigi just shruggs But then something fell out of the sky far away, but stopped at a cloud... Luigi:Wahh, what was that? Mario:Lets go check it out! Luigi:Ill be there later, ...really busy! Mario:shruggs Okie Dokie... Mario run out then jumps from cloud to cloud looking down on mushroom kingdom and nobody was there and was thinking whats going on, then finally got to the cloud where he seen a guy wearing a green tunic named Link Mario:Who are you? Link:My name is- Mario:Whats going ona? Link:...I dont really know myself, it all start when I finished my quest. I was on my way home before I got transported to this weird land. A yellow mouse suddenly attacked me and we battled for 3 minutes till I sent him flying and for no reason, he got destroyed in the middle of the air. I never saw him again. Mario:We lets get outta here! Link:Wait a second... Mario:Fine but whats your name? Link has a flashback of 3 retards saying his name over and over. Link:They call me Link. Mario:Link? What kind of name is that? Link:Well actually me real name is- Announcer:3-2-1 GO! Mario:Wahh! What was that sound? Link:Its happening again! We must fight! Mario:Suddenly- feel the urge- to punch you in the face! Mario and Link both charge at each other Chapter 2-Mario vs Link Link slices mario with his sword sending mario to a wall with a star on it. Mario gets up and shoots a fireball. Link jumped out of the way and onto a platform and sees a pokeball and throws it at mario, and a snorlax came out. The snorlax jumped into the air and landed down on mario, but mario dodged it. Mario:Whaa! What was a thata? Link:Shut up and fight! Mario 18% Link 0% Mario got angry and uppercutted link in the air. Then did a smash attack sending link to a cliff. But then link grabbed a warpstar and flew up in the air and lands on mario with an explosion. Mario gets sent flying to the top of the other star wall. Mario suddenly sees a beam sword and picks it up. Mario:Well if you cana use random stuff spins the beam sword then so cana I! Mario 48% Link 30% Link charges at Mario and they both clashed their swords. Link stepped backs and Mario threw his sword at Link and did whirlwind attack followed by another uppercut. Link falls and mario jumps over him, then link did a smash attack to send mario up in the air. Link jumps up in the air to do a kick sending mario almost out of the ring. Link:Red suit man, lets finish this with one final attack. Mario:Okie. Mario 70% Link 70% Link starts to run after mario but a bob-omb came out of nowhere and sends him flying out of the ring and into the flash of light. Game! Mario won but confused on where Link gone and what just happened. Then a tree with a face almost blown him of the stage by just whistling. Mario:Wah! I got to get outta here! Kirby came from a warpstar in told maro to get on. So kirby and mario flew to a airship which a fox and a robot named samus came out of. Chapter 3-The Story and Yoshi Story Fox:You must be mario. Mario:Wha! A talking fox! How did ya know my name? Fox:Samus told me all about you! Mario:Who? Fox:The person behind me. Mario:But thatsa robot! Samus:Im not a robot! I just cant get this damn helmet off! Mario:Whats going ona here? Fox:I'll explain everything, our worlds have been connected by some strange creature called master hand. He pick the best fighter from each world to fight each other, and put as in these fake versions of our worlds. Master Hand makes us fight for his enjoyment but theres another reason he wants us to fight. Mario:And whats that? Fox:Thats what im going to find out. Kirby:Pyo! Mario:Whats with the littlea ball thingy? Samus:Hes saying were there! Fox:Yeah, but what is that? Mario:Hey! Thats yoshi's island! Meanwhile on yoshi's isand... Donkey Kong:Rah Rah! Yoshi:Yoshi! Chapter 4-Yoshi vs Donkey Kong Yoshi kicks donkey kong twice, then donkey kong moved back and started charging for his strong punch. Yoshi went up in the air and used groundpound. Donkey Kong roll-dodged then hit yoshi with his strong punch. Yoshi 23% DK 9% Donkey Kong jumps and tries to use a smash move on yoshi, but yoshi throws a egg. Donkey Kong recovers and starts slapping on the ground. DK accidently hit a red shell and it started going back and forth, hitting yoshi and DK. Yoshi 37% DK 17% Yoshi lands on a platform while DK was still getting hits by the shell. Donkey Kong gets on the same platform yoshi was on but yoshi hits donkey kong with a charged smash attack. Donkey Kong hangs on the ledge but yoshi hits DK with a flutter kick. Donkey Kong counters with his rolling punches. Yoshi 45% DK 63% Donkey Kong sees a ray gun then starts shooting yoshi with it. Yoshi tries to recover on the stage but DK throws the ray gun at him, and yoshi starts falling. Game! Donkey Kong was about to run the island but seen a ship crashing down and it hit him. Fox:This must be the place. Mario:Holy Crap! A talkinga fox! Samus:Shut up, Mario... Kirby:Poyo! (Look over there!) They all see donkey kong with his head in the ground. He pulls it out and sees mario. DK:Grr Mario:Finally! We cana settle this! Samus:Settle down, mario. He looks like he wants to join us. Right fox? Fox:Heh Heh Heh... Samus:Fox? Chapter 6-Master Hand Fox punches samus in the ocean, and samus' suit electrocutes her forcing her to drown. Mario:Fox, what wasa that all abouta? Fox:Heh, mario. Always clueless... Fox opens his mouth and a hand makes its way out. Mario:Soa you're this masta hand everyone was talking about? Master Hand:No im santa claus! Mario:Really? Master Hand:... Master Hand makes a portal leaing to his home place, mario jumps in. Kirby and DK was about to jump in but was intercepted by another forced fight. Mario lands on a platform in space, or what is called Final Destination! Chapter 7-Final Battle Part 1 Master Hand:Hahahahahaha! So you actually followed me! Mario: Letsa do this! Mario jumps at master hand and punches master hand. Master hand intercepts by grabbing mario and throws him. Mario does a whirlwind attack above master hand. Master Hand goes above mario and slaps down, but mario uppercuts master hand. Mario 24% Master Hand 112/150 HP Mario spents a while doing some blows on master hand, till master hand turns himself into a rocket goes up, into the background. Then comes back and hits mario which set mario in the air, then comes back down and hits the ground and faints. To be Continued?



Minato Arisato	Oct 9 2008, 10:45 AM Post #2
~Seizon no Kodoku~ 'I am a being of Solitude' Posts: 1,704 Group: Administrator Member #30 Joined: November 27, 2007 Gender Male Favorite Anime Rozen Maiden / Tsubasa ReSERVOIR Chronicles Favorite Genre ~DESU~ Anime Currently Watching n/a Manga Currently Reading Kanna / Chibi Vampire / Princess Ressurection Age 7071	If only he was still here lol I never saw this before today, and what I have to say is with a bit of Italian know-how it would be better. Change some of Mario's Dialogue to sound authentic, and it would be excellent



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