Leviathen Dragon Chapter 1

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Leviathen Dragon Chapter 1; First chapter of a manga Im writing
Topic Started: Mar 9 2008, 09:33 AM (141 Views)
Tobizilla	Mar 9 2008, 09:33 AM Post #1
Silver Eagle Posts: 240 Group: Regular Members Member #89 Joined: February 25, 2008	Here is the first chapter of a manga Im writing.Please leave comments and Enjoy! Laviathen Dragon: Chapter 1 Title: The best place to start is at the beggining (Shows Chapter Page) Shows 8 men standing arund in a circle at a clearing in the forest a hissing sound heard around them Man #1: It begins!The quest to conquer the world All of the other men:Y ea!!!! Man #1: The first part of the plan is to capture the 7 Giga Beasts and there Masters Shows a young boy walking through a meadow with a small red dragon flying by his shoulder Shows another young boy riding on a small elephant Shows a boy sleeping against a tree with a Monkey sleeping next to him Shows a small girl with a small green bird on her shoulder playing with another girl thaat is a bit older than her and has a small white jaguar on theother girls lap Shows a small nerdy looking boy with an octopus on his head reading a book Shows a boy oplder than everyone els(though not by much) leaning against a wall a purple snake wrapped up his arm All of the other men(louder this time):Yea!!! Man #1:Then once we have captured the Giga Beasts we will retrieve the shards of Lavaithan All the other men(even louder):Yeaaa!! Man #1:Then we will reform Leviathin's necklace and trap the beasts inside.And once we have the ultimate and unlimited power of the Leviathan Beast we will rule the world Man #1 lets out a maniacle laugh All the other men(loudest yet):Yea!!!! Man #1: Now go capture your Giga Beast and let get one step closer to acceving our goal! All of the other 8 men dissapear Man #1: I will rule the world Man #1 dissapears Shows four black people standing holding out shimmeringblue shards attaches to a peice of string Black Man#1: So the battle begins Black Man #2: Heh they are so stupid.They think we are going to let them take over the world Women #3: Dont be so cocky,Sethron Sethron: Shut Up!,Mijma Man #1: Mijma is right Sethron These people are not to be underestimated Man #4: Wow! Thats something coming from you ,Enel.Your like the 2nd strongest person in the world Enel: I know Kuniwu but somethings not right.I can sense it. Sethron: Well we have nothing to worry about as long as the old man around.I mean no one can beat him.Not even you Enel.Hes unstopable.Those guys barely stand a chance against us let alone him Sethron Mijma and Kuniwu dissapear Enel: I wish that were true Sethron.I wish that were true Enel dissapears (a few years later) Shows a boy walking through a city a red dragon floating by his sholder holding grocery bags(the same boy and same dragon that were in the meadow) The boy walks up to a house Boy: Mom Im home! The boy sees his house in spliters The boy falls to both knees crying The dragon begins to cry as well Boy:No! Boy:Nooooooo! An old man appears next to the boy form out of no were Old Man puts his hand on the boys shoulder Old Man: Dont cry Arashi Arashi looks up at the old man: H-How do you know my name? Old Man: That is of no importance now heres what I want you to do.You need to apply to enter the Koharu Academy.You must learn to hone your abilities.After that you need to enter the Yamashata Tornament.Then and only then we may meet again and I will explain more Arashi: B-But why? Old Man: If you dont rhe people who did this to your parents will be back for you and your dragon Arashi: Ok but let me burry my parents first The Old Man sighs Old Man: Fine but promise me you that after you will do what Im asking you Arashi: I promise Old Man: Ok.Then this good bye Arashi......for now The Old Man dissapears but only to reappear in a tree branch unseen but being able to see Arashi and his dragon Arashi begins digging in all the ruble trying to find his parents bodies to bury them Dragon: Arashi Im going to miss them to but something tells me that what that man said was important and that we need to do what he says besides the thought of those people make me shiver with fear Arashi: I know Drago but I wanted to bury them Drago: Ill give them a burial fit for a king Drago shoots a small fireball out of his mouth at the rubble The fireball hits but nothing happens Drago: Awww! The Old Man in the tree taps his walking stick against the wood and the rubble bursts to flame Arashi: That was Awesome! Arashi throws Drago in the air and catches him Arashi: Lets go Drago: Yea Arashi and Drago leave the house and heads for the entrance to his town Old Man: Stay Safe......grandson The old man dissapears into the wind Shows a group of 7 men sitting at a round table one of the chairs empty Man #1(same man as in the group of 8 before): Were is Sakumoto? Man #2: I dont know Ishimaru Man #3: Well he better be here soon Ishimaru: He is here A large black snake enters the room followed by Sakumoto Ishimaru: What took so long? Sakumoto sits down the snake curled up behind him Sakumoto: I was bored Man #3: Did you bring the boy and his Dragon? Sakumoto: No he wasnt there but I will capture him at Yamashata tournament Man #4: How do you know if he is going to be there?!?!?! Sakumoto: I know.Hachimaba Knows.The leader knows.Isnt that right Ishimaru? Ishimaru nods Ishimaru: He'll be there.Ishimaru so will the other Giga Beasts and there masters Man #5: So its settled then.We are going to the tournament Ishimaru:Yes.This meeting is dissmissed Sakumoto: Lets go Hachimaba Sakumoto get up and leaves the room followed by Hachimaba the snake The rest of the 7 men dissapear (end of chapter)



Keibell	Mar 9 2008, 09:36 AM Post #2
Moe Moe Kyun! Posts: 6,164 Group: Owner Member #1 Joined: October 25, 2007 Gender Male Favorite Anime 5 CM Per Second, School Days, Samurai X, Shuffle!, Sola, Kanon, Clannad, Umisho, Asu no Yoichi! Favorite Genre Romantic Comedy Anime Currently Watching Toradora!, Clannad ~After Story~, To Love-Ru, Shakugan no Shana, Rideback, Asu no Yoichi!, Akikan!.. Manga Currently Reading Naruto Shippuuden, Chibi Vampire Age 16	Wow that's pretty good. Aside from the grammar mistakes, it can be really good :D



Tobizilla	Mar 9 2008, 09:48 AM Post #3
Silver Eagle Posts: 240 Group: Regular Members Member #89 Joined: February 25, 2008	Thanks! ANd I know I hate Grammer Least favorite thing in school I like writing tho :D



Keibell	Mar 9 2008, 09:50 AM Post #4
Moe Moe Kyun! Posts: 6,164 Group: Owner Member #1 Joined: October 25, 2007 Gender Male Favorite Anime 5 CM Per Second, School Days, Samurai X, Shuffle!, Sola, Kanon, Clannad, Umisho, Asu no Yoichi! Favorite Genre Romantic Comedy Anime Currently Watching Toradora!, Clannad ~After Story~, To Love-Ru, Shakugan no Shana, Rideback, Asu no Yoichi!, Akikan!.. Manga Currently Reading Naruto Shippuuden, Chibi Vampire Age 16	You could always write them and I'll help you with the grammar :D



Tobizilla	Mar 9 2008, 09:58 AM Post #5
Silver Eagle Posts: 240 Group: Regular Members Member #89 Joined: February 25, 2008	Thanks that would be awesome!



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