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| Topic Started: Mar 5 2008, 10:11 PM (264 Views) | |
| Roku | Mar 5 2008, 10:11 PM Post #1 |
We Are Friends... but I will Kick your ass and laugh
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I couldn't think of a better title,
:P but here I will post fanfics, histories and any stories I wrote that I personally think pwn and are uber godly. Bare with me as one will be coming soon enough Comment on the stories and their tear jerking ways. Then CRY... CRY WITH TEARS OF ITS BEAUTY!!! First Story: The Life and Times of Thor Hyuga. |
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| Keibell | Mar 5 2008, 11:00 PM Post #2 |
Moe Moe Kyun!
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Lmao a story on Xea's character? lmao. |
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| Roku | Mar 6 2008, 01:07 AM Post #3 |
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We Are Friends... but I will Kick your ass and laugh
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Everyone is mixed into it but yeah thats pretty much it HERE IT COMES!!!!!! |
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| Roku | Mar 6 2008, 01:11 AM Post #4 |
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We Are Friends... but I will Kick your ass and laugh
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The Histoy Of Hyugga, Thorganuide Biography: Thor was born a Hyuuga but his birth remained secret for years because of his eye color, and no one knows if he is Main or Side branch. when he was revealed to the leaders of the Hyuuga clan they were outraged that his birth had remained secret for so long, but they didn't kick him out because he had been learning the gentle fist for the years he was hidden and became quite adept with his ability's, so they decided to not include him in any branch but still keep him in the lan. He has a deep hatred for the Uchiha clan, but no one knows why. Thor Is a very understanding person, he can solve arguments VERY quickly, and (although it's wrong) Is a slight pervert and from time to time misuses his Byakugan. Having no family and/or friends Thor became isolated after a while and stared to lose control of himself. He spent days in and out doing nothing and staying as a shut in away from everyone except when he was to do missions. Even then, his missions were usually him alone or had no teamwork. Those who tried to get to know Thor were pushed away by his shell and gave up. He had actually become a magnet for their abuse constantly be abused. Though he fought back and won time to time he suffered wounds both mentally and physically that never truly healed. Until one day that Thor would never forget. One day Thor was on a mission. Of course he was by himself as usual and running full force and hot headed into the field. He was angry about what the villagers said about his clan, his life and HIS MOTHER. He was angry and wanted to take out his frustrations in a mission. He charged into the field dead forward into his opponent he then pulled out a spear and lunged catching his arm. "Haha... My target.... your suppose to be Jonin Rank" Thor mocked, "You should be more careful" THor said trying to pull the spear. "Hey WHAT THE F@*#" Thor yelled as the spear wouldn't release. The Thor saw it, it wasn't his opponent it was someone much stronger. "Who is this boy?" the person turned around. Thor saw his face.... saw knew who he was. His name was a X Rank enemy someone who kages can have problems with. "SH&@!!" Thor exclaimed as the Bandit grabbed the spear flinging him across the field and through three trees. Thor got up bleeding from the mouth, "You'll regret that!" He then charged in pulling out another spear and attacked wildly. The opponent dodged with ease as if he was born knowing of Thor's rhythm of attacks. With one arm he then grabbed that spear holding it steady to the point that Thor could not move it. "Haha.. you think you got me" Thor said launching a Suishouha straight into his face. With the opposite hand the bandit blocked the attack and pushed it back grabbing Thor's face. "SON OF A B*@&" Thor muttered kicking the the Bandits ribs and legs. "You'll die in this spot Konoha shinobi" the bandit muttered as his had started to fill with chakra. Flame started to erupt coming out of the back or knuckle side of his hand. "DIE!" the bandit said as all of Thor's hopes started to disappear. He saw his life and all the things he missed out on such as friends and bonds. He was filled with regret he thought it was over and done. Then out of nowhere a purple kunai came out of the air catching the shinobi in the arm he was attacking with. The kunai bounced of but the shinobi moved back. "D@MN! WHO SHOT THAT" he exclaimed as the poison Kunai would've killed him if not for the chakra pouring from his hand. "DON'T PICK ON THAT GENIN! I'M YOUR OPPONENT!" Thor quickly turned in the direction of the voice. The bandit then looked there and spoke, "Genroku Hyuga Yoshigakure of Snow". He then continued points his flaming hand at Thor, "Why shouldn't I kill this runt hes just Hyugan piece of TRASH...kinda like you huh Genroku". Genroku then laughed, "You have anything to say about that Thor". "Well...." Thor started "we cant be as bad as he looks" the Bandit pissed, turned to attack Thor who had already gotten close enough to catch his gut with a Juken. "DAMN BRAT!" the bandit said splitting some blood and swinging downward with Thor's own spear. Genroku's foot then flew in catching the Bandit in the face stopping the spear attack and knocking him into 5 trees straight. "Ive got it from here Thor" Genroku said walking towards the Bandit. "How do you even know my name?" Thor said looking puzzled. "Haha... I know all Hyuggas in the Clan house... You being alive seems to have caused a little problem over there... don't let it get to you though the Hyuggan elders don't know anything despite their age" Genroku responded still walking towards the bandit. "DAMN YOU GENROKU!" The bandit said kicking of the tree towards Genroku who empty palmed him into another direction. Then the name hit Thor Genroku the Hyugan Murder. The Genin that killed an entire building of Hyugans in one night. Thor thought to himself how powerful the man before him is and will he be next. The bandit the grabbed Thor mid-thought , "Come any closer and Ill kill this Genin" Thor was sure that he was dead. Why would the Hyugan Massacre Shinobi stop from hitting and killing him adding another shinobi to his list. "Why did you have to get me angry... Kaze No Kizu!" Genroku said barley even touching his blade. All of a sudden a large gust moved past Thor catching the bandit in the face. Thor turned looking at the bandit fly back then turned as Genroku seemed to have disappeared. He then turned back looking at the bandit where he saw Genroku already there, "HO MASUBI" Genroku called out and in a flash of light bandit was flying further back faster bleeding from every hole and into a boulder until the point where he moved through it. "You never had a chance" Genroku said with his kage clothing and cape floating in the wind. "Hey Leaf Genin are you alright..." Thor had already picked up his spears and items and started walking towards his village his pride was hurt and he didn't want anything to do with such a shinobi. "Hey! Wait thats now how you treat someone who saved you" Thor continued walking until Genroku reached behind him and thats when he spun holding a Spear towards Genroku. "I know who you are.... the Hyuggan murderer and assasin.... the shinobi that committed the largest Hyuggan Genocide in history.,... Genroku Hyugga". Genroku stayed with his head leaned down, "Yes... I am that Genroku.....BUT I KILLED NO HYUGGA I WAS FRAMED" Genroku screamed. "Likely story Thor" Thor said lunging at Genroku. Genroku was hit in the chest. Thor was baffled a shinobi with his speed could easily dodge that attack. "I did nothing wrong so... I have nothing to fear" Thor pulled back his spear as Genroku's wound soon healed with a green aura. "DAMNIT!" Thor said with a shushin leaving. The next day Thor reached Konoha again and immediately marched straight to the Hokage's office. He then kicked in the door still pretty angry. "DENSETSU~SAMA!" He yelled. "What is it this time Thor!" Densetsu yelled in angry tone having just recieved the bad news about Mizukage Ronarundo. "I'm sick of going to Kumogakure... ESPECIALLY if I have too keep doing missions with Raiken Hyuga. He knows nothing of teamwork and is just a waste of my time!" Thor said with a firm voice. "TOO BAD!" Densetsu said packing his medic equipment. "HEY LISTEN TOO ME YOU..." Thor was cut short as Densetsu eyes turned blood red with veins and Thor's head started to spin feeling as if it was about to split on half. "I must go to leaf Mizukage Ronarundo is badly ill... me and Genroku will go to Mist and attempt to aid him." Dnesetsu said looking away from Thor. "If you have any problems...... handle it like a shinobi really should..." Densetsu said putting the bag on his back. He then shushined leaving a blue flash in his wake getting out the village. By the time he had left Thor's head had stopped spinning as a large ball of sweat ran down his face. Death even though it was for a mere moment felt so close....... so scary. He had never seen Hokage-Sama in such a mood. He would usually yell and joke with the Hokage with little problem, but today just looking into that man's eyes.... almost pulled up and out his lunch for the past 3 days. The guard behind Thor actually did throw up without even seeing Densetsu. Thor then for the first time in his time in the village saw how strong a Hokage can truly be. But then Thor remembered what Densetsu had said, "Handle it like...a shinobi". Thor then screamed out loud, "YATTA... I know exactly what to do" The next night Thor picked up all his items spears and weapons and traveled back to Kumogakure. He then kicked down Raiken's door, :"RAIKEN YOU BASTARD GET OUT HERE!" as soon as Thor finished Raiken's foot came flying with a Dynamic Entry type kick knocking Thor back outside. Thor with his instincts was fast enough to pull up a spear and block but was still pushed back a large amount of space, ' Damn his power hes unbelievably strong, but Ill handle this like a real shinobi ' Thor said to himself recovering from the attack. Raiken then came out looking at his broken door, "Just for this..... I'm cant let you get away..." Raiken said in a clear voice to Thor. "I'd like to see you stop me" mocked Thor, "ENOUGH TALK TIME FOR ACTION!" Raiken shouted. "YOUR GONNA PAY FOR MY DOOR WITH YOUR BLOOD!". Thor stood silent for a while, "Well then.... lets get started..." Thor then pulled out a spear and ran wildly towards Raiken. Thor spun it so wildly that it was almost impossible to tell the correct direction. Thor then lunged into Raiken, but as soon it made impact a sword was blocking it without Raiken even holding it. "You really think you can take me out with such a weak attack" Raiken mocked with a laugh, "Your blood would only soil my blade". Thor was so angry that he attmpted again but was blocked and slashed by Raiken's Hosangi. Thor moved back with his slight move thinking to himself once again, "Damn he's too fast and too strong!... I lost". Then words rang through his mind. {Handle it like a shinobi... Handle it like a warrior.... Handle it.... like...A HYUGA!} Thor rose from the ground with his gash bleeding. "Raise your head and fall... you were a fool to mess with the future Raikage... now DIE!" Raiken quickly said slashing with Hosangi. At the last moment Thor spun his spear pulling Raikens blade into the floor and bunting then slashing Raiken in the chest. "Now.... I'M SERIOUS" Thor said raising his voice. Raiken didn't even hear Thor as he wiped off the blood, "You dare... YOU DARE ATTACK THE FUTURE RAIKAGE" Raiken exclaimed with chakra pouring from him. "WELL IM NOT ASKING YOU TO DANCE!" Thor said as Chakra poured from him. The chakra that poured from them met each other in the center with an explosion of colors and pressure. Raiken pulled up Hosangi as his Byakugen turned on full blast with pure power. Thor's eyes also turned on as he gripped his spear and faced it forward towards Raiken. A brick from the roof of Raiken's house fell off due to the pressure and as soon as it hit the ground the shinobis were in front of each other and with full power swung with all they could. The force of their chakras and the weapon combined knocked away there weapons. Thor was prepared to pull his second spear but said to himself, NO! I'M GONNA END THIS LIKE A SHINOBI LIKE A HYUGA!" He then dropped the spear and charged into Raiken with a Juken. For an hour straight they were dodging, receiving and giving damage and chakra filled Jukens to each other until finally. They both through a chakra empty palm attack, both were hit simultaneously in the gut flying back. Raiken deep into the wall of his house while Thor flew into a tree cracking its stump. Raiken stood back up, but Thor couldnt move. The shock caught him worse then it did Raiken. Raiken stood up and walked towards Thor as if he wasnt even hurt pulling his sword and pointed it at Thor, "Its over! You lost" He then sheathed it and walked. Thor passed out afterwards and woke up in Kumogakure bandaged and bruised in disgrace he stood up, but the pain made him lean and fall. But he didnt hit the ground. Someone was holdig him up he then looked and saw her face, it was the first time he met her, his life was bound to change, his life anew, his life with Kumiko (eternal beautiful child) Minawa (three circles) Posted Image She was the most beatiful thing Thor had ever seen and as he stared with a gaping look as Thor glared at her. Then *WHAP* she slapped Thor. "Stop it... I know you hyuggans can look through close she said moving back and blocking herself. Thor hit the floor and didnt move for quite a while then finally said, "Ack... thats just a myth... All I see is your chakra... not through your clothing.". "Oh sorry then" she said propping him up and dropping him on the futon with a oof. "Wheres Raiken" Thor then shouted in rememberance. "Raiken... oh that shinobi he left... last I saw him he was fixing his house and told me to stay away from the trash" She giggled pointing at Thor, "Guess what the trash was". Thor sighed remembering his defeat, "Well he wasnt too far off... look at me I couldnt even take him down..." Kumiko then bent over hugging Thor. "No one has been able to beat Raiken as of yet... but I believe you can" Thor heard none of the words she said as his face filled with blood to the point where he got a nosebleed. "Thanks" he said to make sure he wasnt slapped again. She then changed Thor's bandages healing his wounds and they both spoke all night telling stories and getting to know each others name. Kumiko was hers and it stood for Eternaly Beautiful Child and her last name Minawa standing for three circles. Slowly the two became closer. By three weeks Thor was completely healed, but didnt want to leave. He found excuses and attempted to stay until finally he spit it out after and hour of excuses to Kumiko, "Uhhhh...ahh...*ahem*....who...w..wi.....*sigh* Kum... kumi-chan... can I stay with you just a bit longe.... longer... please" Kumiko hugged Thor and accepted his proposal as the two contnued to live with each other. Kumiko time to time would come watch him train and would bring snacks along with her and they would eat. Thor went to Konoha less and less. Yet, Hokage Densetsu... did not mind even a bit... he had known the trials and tribulations of love and had worked. After about a months time Thor had returned to Konoha, but only temporarily soon he would return to his Kumi-chan again. Thor was enchanted and couldnt wait to return back, but he knew as a shinobi his job came first. Thor came into the village where he soon found Densetsu-sama, "Hai, Hai Densetsu-sama". "Ah Thor you are finally back in the village huh... hows it going lover boy" Densetsu sama laughed making kissy faces. Thor rubbed his head as his cheeks turned red, "Dont you have a mission for me or not". "Actually no" said Densetsu, "I said I'd call to you for a mission, but none have been... really needed to complete. "Well then" Thor said, "Im going to Kumogakur..." Densetsu quickly grabbed his collar, "WHOAH! Your a Konoha shinobi... thats barely here at least stay a while." Thor shook Densetsu off, "WHAT DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH ANYTHING!" Thor yelled with anger and for a quick seconds his eye had a changed yellow and beastly with a crescent, but quickly changed back. "Whatever" Densetsu said releasing him, "Just be weary Lightning is known for its cruelty" Densetsu said walking away, "I have a meeting to attend... we have anew Kage". Thor stopped and turned, "A new kage.... whats the name" "Ahh interested all of suddent *hmph* his name is..... Hyuga Raiken" Thor's eyes became big "WHAT!". "Yeah Hyuga Raiken... Irony sucks doesnt it" Densetsu laughed knowing of the sityuation as he shushined away. So fast that Thor barely saw him, yet for some reason Thor could smell him. Thor sniffed the air and smelled Densetsus exact direction and started walking . He didnt understand what was happening to him, but he had to confront Raiken just one more time. After three or four houres Thor had reached a building. He had shushined and was out of breath, but soon caught it as he entered the building the meetin was over and Genroku, Desetsu and him Raiken were theres and on there way out. Both Densetsu and Genroku greeted Thor. Densetsu more shocked that him the Blue Flash was tracked by his a genin, but that soon was over as he remembered that it was his genin and all his Genin are amazing in his own opinion. WIth his head inflated on how good a Hokage he is he soon wlked out of the office along with Genroku who was in a rush to report to the Mizukage. Then all that was left was Thor and Raiken alone again. Thor walked up to Raiken as Raiken said, "You again... what do you want" Raiken said moving back prepared to assume a fight posture. Thor then extened his hand to Raiken's confusion. "You won... I cant be a sore loser about that we are both Shinobi and.... I ..... suppose.... hehe... Im sorry for destroying you house door." "I accept your apology" Raiken said shaking his hand. "Well I dont need the house anyway the mansion Im moving too is much better." Raiken smirked rubbing it in. Thor then comically attacked him making a bump onhis head, "haha look at the raikage... maybe you can live in that lump" Raiken rubbed the bump then returned the hit creating two on Thor. They then fought back in a comical dust cloud hitting each other till they were both filled with lumps. Then without knowing Thor had made another friend. Thor returned to leaf and was walking gathering items to head bac to Kumiko, but then an Anbu shinobi fell coming up right behind him. Thor spun with spear, but the shinobi dodged as he was on one knee towards Thor, "Genroku-Sama & Densetsu-sama has asked for you presense immediately" The shinobi then grabbed Thors hand shushining with him and reaching the office. "Pshh was that the fastest you could go" Thor mocked even though the shushin movement jumbled his stomach. The Anbu grinded his teeth and returned to the shadows. "Thor" Densetsu yelled from the front of the room. "Because of someone" Densetsu said looking at Genroku, " I REGRET NOTHING!" Genroku yelled in a funny manner. "Because of someone you have a new member in your squad... His name his Hokkashi Takahashi....yet more importantly me and Genroku have deicided to allow you to take the Chunnin exam" Thor's jaw dropped, "I have a chance at ranking in my village.... of course ill take it... YOU CAN COUNT ON ME TO WIN ALL THE WAY DENSETSU-SAMA..... GENROKU-SAMA.... THANK YOU SO MUCH" a tear then ran down Thor's eye as he bowed not because he could simply become chunnin, but because once he had become chunnin a new door would open. Then he could leave Konoha.... forever and live only with Kumiko as a Chunnin of Lightning. . |
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| Roku | Mar 6 2008, 01:11 AM Post #5 |
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Thor ran into the Chunnin Exams a month later having trained and spent all that time with Densetsu and Genroku training and what not. Yet, as soon as Thor pushed the door open the first words to come out his mouth were, "SO WHOS ASS DO I HAVE TO KICK!" he shouted with two new spears both fixed, shined and fortified by Genroku were one his back, one called Aqua Lance and the other called Midnight Bolt. While he created a new stance of using them while training with Densetsu. Not only that but Thor also had amazing armors creafted by Genroku once again and some strategies and tips by Densetsu. All of this support tore Thor apart since he was and still is planning on leaving the village. Even though it was only those two who supported him in an entire village to the point where his clan even rejected him. Those two alone had done enough to be a village of support. Yet, unluckily for Thor, he had walked in during the exam and was minused points. The test was hard, but he percerveered and passed, just barely, but none the less he did. Thor had succesfully made it to the second part and was pumped and ready. He was given an Earth Scroll and around 12:00 PM Noon was allowed into the forest. Thor immediately ran straight into the forest reaching about halfway then dived into the nearest hollow tree where he prepared his weapons. He then enlarged his eyes with the use of the Byakugan and looked for the nearest presnce. He had found it, but was unsure what scroll they had. Thor dispatched hot blooded in their direction and saw the three Genin shinobi. He charged, but IT WAS A TRAP. As soon as he got close enough he struck the shinobi with the scroll. Yet, it had popped, "$hiat! They know Shadow Clone Jutsu how is that even possible" Thor exclaimed holding a kunai. The shinobi then came out the floor all with Nodachi long swords and struck him in the chest. Thor smiled as the Nodachis all broke on his armor. "You obviously dont know who made this for me" he mocked striking the shinobi with the scroll with and open palm blast locking all his Tenketsu points and dropping him to the ground like trash, "Damn he has some good armor... retreat we cant take him" One of the otheres yelled, but then tthey saw that Thor had the scroll. "DAMN!" WE GOTTA TAKE HIM!" Both shinobi charged, "AIM FOR HIS HEAD ITS NOT PROTECTED!!" One yelled. "You should ran" Thor said with an evil smirk "Kaiten" Spinning and blasting the rest had firstinto a log, "DAMN!... Im becoming more and more like Densetsu and Genroku...thats not good" Thor thought to himself opening the backpack. "Crap... wrong scroll..." Thor said about to rip the scroll. "Wait! I got it" Thor said, tieing the scroll to a string after touching it and placing it on the floor. Thor then hid himself in the hollow of a tree watching. Many shinobi passed but none stopped as they saw the scroll was what they already had. Then a group of shinobi came, perfect its just what we need. As soon as they lifted it the scroll imploded. Thor lined it with so many tags that it could barely be toughed. No doubt a strategy Densetsu-sama taught him. He then shushined in between the three shinobi who were knocked back, "Eight Trigrams 128 Palms", He then hit each shinobi and catapulted them all to the ground but not before taking their heaven scroll in mid air durring the barrage. "Thanks... Ill call you when Im chunnin" Thor mocked as the shinobi started to stand. Yet, as soon as they did their floor gave way dropping them into a smooth pit. "Always have a back up" Thor said fixing himself. Thor with both scrolls ran towards the building and was now in view of it. Thor ran up and jumped heading straight for the doors, but in mid air. A large blast of winds knocked him to the side and into a tree breaking it in half. "$hiat! Nothing is easy." Thor thought as three Shinobi apeared. "Haha its only one shinobi kill him" the shinobi then charged up another blast and launched it blowing up alot of dust, but when it cleared there was no Thor. "Where did he go" one yelled. Then from behind that one, "I dont know" Thor said right behind the shinobi who spoke. By the time that shinobi spun around Thor blasted him with a palm of chakra, but his leg from the sneak attack was injured and he did not want to loser here. Thor quickly quicked the other Genin, but the strain on his leg was to great as the third blasted him with a gust of air he coul not defend himself from it. Thor thought it was over for him, he closed his eyes and said, "At least I can sleep" yet as soon as Thor said this within his mind and in his eyes he saw her, Kumiko, "Thor...." She said, "Thor wake up... THOR DONT GIVE UP!" the shinobi then swung his blade down onto Thor's neck, but Kumiko's voice got through. Thor pulled of a handstand dodging the slash, "Kumiko..... KUMIKO THIS IS FOR YOU" Thor said springing off that hand and above the shinobi, "Double SPEAR DEATH DANCE... DRAGOON STRIKE!" Thor exclaimed in barrage as he landed facing th tower and the Genin bruised and batter fell to his knees, "Dam... n... so ...ahh... close..." The genin with his last strength pulled up his arm and blasted one last wind attack Thor hear and saw it but couldnt dodge, "Wait I dont need to" thor thought himself. He then spun the spears in unison as the wind hit and for the most part was diverted. The rest actually launchedThor forward and through the Tower's door. Thor did spit up blood though, but to him it wasnt a steep price. Thor was done and had completed the second part as a Jonin came from the scroll and congratulated. Too bad Thor was unconcious after congratulation. Thor woke up in Konoha and was told that the last match would be in one week. His opponent was an unknown shinobi from Star Village who had no name. Thor's spent half of the week healing and the rest asking for advice from his Kage friends Raiken, Densetsu and Genroku. After speaking for an hour it was obvious that Thor was in a bad spot. He was against a long range opponent with no long range moves. Yet, not only that but the shinobi had accomplished 2 A Ranks and has been on an S Rank with his Jonin leader. Thor thought it was over and that he had no chance, but once again he heard her voice, "Thor... dont give up... never give up" "I WONT EVER!" Thor yelled out looking random and quite stiupid as he was in a public area. The day before the tournament all three kages appeared again with Genroku speaking, "Thor we have an idea" he said interrupting Thor's Death Spear Dancing. They then spoke and Thor was enlightened as they spent the whole night training the new technique and move. Thor was accompanied the next day to the arena by all three kages before they departed to view the match from the balcony above the field. The crowd was filled iwth people rootiing some for Thor and some for the Unknown Shinobi. Yet, Thor didnt care who they were rooting for as he would win no matter what. A jonin stepped in between the two shinobi, "GO!" Thor immediately ran passing the Jonin and kicked the unknown shinobi in the face. The shinobi blocked and stepped back with sweep. Thor jumpe over the sweep and landing with an Axe Kick right on him, "BAKA" the shinobi said as he made his beast come and launch Thro into the wall. Blood dripped from Thor's face as he staggered forward. The beats grabbed him and pulled him into the air draining his as Thor screamed and struggled. Thor stayed fighting for four minutes as his Chakra hit almost zero then shinobi squeezed tighter attempting to kill him. Thor thought it was over and was blacking out, but it happened again, "Thor Dont Die On ME!" Thor eyes awakened withe the presence of a demon. " I WONT!!!" Thor said breaking the squeeze grip and landing on his feet. "So what you broke lose... you have no chakra." The shinobi said laughing. "Heheh" Thor laughed "Whats so funny?" said the shinobi. Thor then responded I dont need any. Thor said pulling out his two spears Midnight Bolt and Water Lance. "Hahaha with your chakra added my beast can reach past your spears distance FOOL" The shinobi commented. "BAKA!" Thor said as the spears droped with the strings of diamond attached, "DOUBLE DEATH DANCE STAGE ONE!" Shouted Thor as the spears were spinning and reaching a rather long distance. Thor bashed the floor to hit the Shinobi but he had shushined, "DAMN THAT WAS FAST" the shinobi thought to himself. "ITS NOT OVER" yelled Thor as roocks catapulted into the shinobi making him cock over and spit blood. "DAMN YOU LEAF-NIN" the shinobi said charging in making his beast into spikes that attacked Thor. Thor easily dodged and countered with a large bash sending the shinobi to the floor. The shinobi got up and went close range attack with a kunai. Thor jumped spinning pulling bakc the spears, "DOUBLE DEATH DANCE STAGE TWO" Thor shouted as the shinobi jumped towards him. Thor kicked him in the face sending him straight up then thor barraged the opponent in the air with a baarrage from the double eneded as the last hit was an Axe kick into the ground by boosting of the spear as if doing a pole vault. The shinobi hit the ground and the crowd went crazy ,"THOR! THOR! THOR THOR!" They yelled madly. Thor turned looking at them but for that split moment beast spikes came up impaling him in the ribs and arms then tossed to the side. Thor fell bleeding as the SHinobi got up and the beast took over his whole body with a purple aura, "In this form I am god you had no chance Thor.." the shinobi said walking over to the dieing Thor. "You could never win you'll never be Chunnin" The Shinobi said grabbing Thor's throat and squeezing. He then threw up Thor and allowed Thor to come down on an upward fist that exploded sending a beast straight upwards into him. Thor flew even higher in a cold unconcious daze and the shinobi then made a pit of long spikes right under Thor with his Demon Beast. Raiken to the suprise of Genroku and Densetsu screamed, "DUMBASS DONT DARE DIE ON ME!" Genroku then got up joining in, "IS THAT ALL YOU GOT I THOUGHT YOU HAD MORE THEN THAT WHEN I MADE YOU THOSE WEAPONS!". Densetsu joined in with the biggest comment of all, "THOR GET THE HELL UP! WILL SHE BE HAPPY ABOUT THIS?!" Thor still unconcious started to fall downward thinking to himself, "Kumiko Im sorry I just cant win.... Im sorry....so...rry" A voive then appeared in a deep dark beast like tone, "EMBRACE IT YOU KNOW ITS THERE... THE SNIFFING... THE STRONG NOSE.... THE NEW SPEED AND POWER! EMBRACE IT THOR! EMBRACE IT NOW!" . "Damn" said Genroku "We gotta stop th-" Genroku was cut short as a large bust of chakra flowed out of Thor. He became hairy, his muscles doiubled, his eyes became white he became a beast. "$hiat" muttered Densetsu, "His instincts came out to this extent. This is gonna be bad" Thor fell in between the holding himself from falling into the rest he then flipped into the land as the crowd was scared in silence. Posted Image The Wolf then howled in a large echo within the stadium. The crowd went crazy screaming his name again in a chant, "BRING IT THOR!!BRING IT THOR!!BRING IT THOR!!BRING IT THOR!!BRING IT THOR!!BRING IT THOR!!". "SHUTUP" yelled the SHinobi "THAT FORM DOESNT MEAN S&@T THOR YOU CAN'T BEAT ME! iM GOD IN THIS FORM! GO-" The shinobi was cut short as Thor was in front of him sn his eyes froze the shinobi in fear. Thor punched the Shinobi so hard he broke 3 trees before htitting the wall. Thor then grabbed him by then neck and punched him insanely before slamming him into the ground and hitting him even more, while in his mind he screams, "KUMIKO IM COMING! KUMIKO WAIT FOR ME ME! KKKKUUUMMMMMIIIIIKKKKKOOO!" and with that Thors hand glew chakra blue slamming him into the ground in an explosion of chakra and dust. Thor then appeared in human form in extreme pain on his knees panting. In the ground was the shinobi wrecked, destroyed and horribly beaten as Medic-nin came and picked him up. Genroku came and raised the beaten and bruised Thor's hand. "And the winner" shouted Genroku, "THOR!!!!" The crows went crazy rooting and calling to him. While the semi concious Thor yelled, "YATTA!!!! IM COMING KUMIKO!!!" One month later Thor fully healed went to the Hokage office to find his supposed group member Densetsu spoke of. He reache the office and found Densetsu speaking to some Genin, "Ahh Thor just in time... This is Takahashi the squad member I spoke of before" said Densetsu. Takahashi spun around recealing a small scrawny boy, "Afternoon Thor-Kun" said Takahashi with a corgial greeting. "Oh you gotta be F*^$in with me Densetsu-sama you serious" he whispered to Densetsu. "He's your partner like it or not... expect another one pretty soon" Densetsu said "You two can go on a mission... I have things to do" Densetsu said throwing them a scroll "No problem" Thor aid walking out with the Genin following him. "Alright Gen-" Thor was cut short by the Genin tapping his shoulder, "Dont slow me down" Takahashi said walking past him. "What the @**#@ 8@#*@# **@*#@*#*@#* @*#@#*#@*#" Thor muttered profanities wildly while following the Genin. The scroll spoke of a riot giving a map to the destination supposebly 5 SHinobi started it maybe trying to create a Coup Detat, but that much is still unknow. Once Reaching their destination, Takahashi pulled out a bamboo stick with kunai on each hollow end after they had reached their destination, "hmmm" Thor looked in interest suprised of such an awkward weapon. Yet, he just ignored it and continued. "Alright Ill start up North... You start south lets end this riot" Takahashi said heading North. Thor really didnt care Takahashi was a bit of a jerk, but could show respect and... HE REALLY WANTED THIS MISSION OVER WITH. Thor charged South using jutsus and scaring away the villagers. "Well, Thats that" Thor said clapping his hands together. Yet, his Feral Sense said different as he felt and smelt danger. Thor quickly moved his head right as a kunai passed him and slammed into the ground."Ah there you are" Thor said looking back seeing three shinobis on a rooftop, "I thought you got scared and ran away with your tails between your legs... well.... they wouldn't have much problems going there.... since there nothing there to begin with" Thor said GREATLY insulting the three male shinobis stating that they are missing their penises or never had them to begin with. "YOU BRATTY SON OF A B@&$" yelled one of the shinobi as he jumped downwards and dahsed towards Thor pulling out a naginata. Thor leaned fforward with a yawn, "Come on... Your really gonna try this?" Thor said as the shinobi approached, *well it can't be helped* he thought to himself as he spun using his spear to parry off the attack and strike the opponents chakra coil with a Juken. The shinobi flinched, but continued. Thor had been through worse so he easiloy dodged having his fun. "ENOUGH!" he finally yelled as he ducked an attack and struck with an upperward palm thrust to the chin. Lobbing him in midair he followed this with a spear strike to the opponents ribs in mid-air and into the ground creating a minature crater in the cement, "NEXT!" He yelled spinning his spear overhead. A shinobi then flew by crashing head first into a tree, *hmm Takahashi must be doing a good job* Thor thought to himself. A shinobi then came up from behin Thor with a dual katana. Thor was caught, but the blades broke as they struck his strong armor. "You obviously over your head" Thor said catching his amr and striking him with Sixty Four Palms and sending him flying into house as a corpse. Thor then shushined ending up right behind the finalo shinobi, "Im sorry, but I have no time" Thor said catching him wih a Spinning Cane barrage sending him into the tiled boards of the roof. "Hey... Takahashi you ok?" Thor yelled heading in his direction and finding an unconcious Takahashi and one last shinobi left. The shinobi graabed Takahhashi, "MOVE ANY CLOSER AND YOUR PARTNER GETS IT!" the shinobi yelled holding him. *F@&%* Thor thought he couldn't do anything without Takahashi's life being in danger. All of a sudden Takahashi awoke grabbing his waist. He the pulled out one his ribs and thrusted back stabbing the shinobi in the neck. At first Thor had no idea what had happened, but then he knew. His research in the past with densetsu-sama had come over a clan able to manipulate their bones. They would forge their bones into the most menacing of weapons and harm any enemies in their way. The shinobi cursed Takahashi as blood gushed from his neck, "F&@KING KONOHA NINJA...DIE!!" Thor quickly moved bashing the shinobi with a Mizurappa and Dynamic Entry. "Ahh so your from the lost clan of Kaguya" Thor said lifting the uncincious Takahashi. "DAMNIT!" a voice said from far behind Thor dashing towards him, "YOU KILLED ALL OF MY FRIENDS!!" shouted the shinobi. "ANOTHER ONE! DON WASTE MY TIME!!" yelled Thor looking into the shinobi's eyes as a Genjutsu of unbelievable proportions locked him SHATTERING his mind from the inside out followed with a Konoha Renpu sending the shinobi head first through the building. Takahashi the got up, "Oh.... damn what happened" asked Takahashi in a haze. Thor thought about explaining the fact about his Kekkei Genkai, but instead said, "You were caught of guard mid fight... nice try though you took a good majority of em down... I think you coulda done this without me" Thor said with a grin. "Awww,,,, You know that bull" Takahashi laughed wobbling in the direction of Konoha. Thor propped up Takahashi and aided him walk until they finally reached konoha and dropped Takahashi off at the Hospital. "What shinobis... Leaf has... Im really gonna miss it" Thor said heading in the direction Kumogakure. Thor finally reached and was quickly hugged and kissed (on the cheek) by Kumiko. Once again they staye dtogether for close to a years time enjoying each other's company and having fun. On some nights they would even go out on dates. They would joke and watch movies all while talking and playing games with each other. They would walk the streets day, night and even afternoon with no fear for they had finally had each other. One night they were walking hand and hand & arm and arm as Kumiko leaned onto Thor's shoulder. All of a sudden a man seemingly important with either the Yakuza or the mob. Neither even cared as they passed the man with his large group behind him. As soon as they were about to pass the so called leader grabbed Kumiko's arm and pulled her away from Thor. "Ahh Thor!" exclaime Kumiko as she was man handled and pulled away. "Kumi-chan!" yelled Thor with anger in his voice. "You better just let us have her" one of the men said. "You'll just get hurt trying to saver your girlfriend" one man said advancing towards Thor. The wind blew past Thor revealing his headband, "BECAREFUL" another man yelled, "HE'S A SHINOBI!" but it was too late Thor pulled out his spear and used it to create a whiplash cracking the rib cage of the approaching man. "YOU ALL JUST F@&KED UP NOW" Thor said dashing forward bashing open the next ones skull. He then barraged all the rest in one swift circular movement using the Double Death Dance. The leader backed up releasing Kumiko's arm, "HEY, HEY, HEY STOP THERE.... DONT YOU KNOW WHO I AM!" the leader screamed. "Your scum who is about to get his ass handed to him" Thor said. He then started slashing with Midnight Bolt, "HOW DARE YOU LAY YOUR FILTHY LEFT HAND ON KUMIKO-CHAN!" He said with a lunge going straight through the left hand,"YOU DONT HAVE THE RIGHT TO EVEN LIVE ANY MORE!" He saidw ith an diagnol slash straight through the left arm literally cutting it in half straight from the palm to the shoulder. "THOR STOP!" Kumiko screamed with tears, "You know I hate seeing you this way as she charged clutching his arm, "PLEASE STOP! STOP FOR ME!" she pleaded filled with tears and choking over her own tears. "Im sorry Kumiko" Thor said sheathing his spear and hugging her, "Lets go ho-..." Thor was quickly cut off as Kumiko kisseed him (yes, on he lips). She then pulled Thor away as they continued there date. Thor was lost on Cloud Nine basically unconcios from the sheer confusuion of what the hell happened. He slowly added it up in his mind *They touched Kumiko + I kill them + I disgrace them = I get kissed.... Damn Im lost?*. The rest of the night went perfectly as they completed their date. In the next week Thor was called back to Konoha, he hadnt't left the village just yet so officially he was still a Konoha Ninja and was called in by Densetsu. Thor reached the office, "Im here Densetsu-sama,,,, Oh Im sorry your busy" Thor said seeing another girl speaking to Densetsu. "Ahh Thor just in time" Genroku exclaimed. "Densetsu-sama whos the weird spear dude?" The girl said in a whisper. Thor didnt hear her comment enough to care the least bit. Densetsu laughed, "Thor this is Miwa... your newest and final partner!" Thor wasnt really surpised as he knew his last partner was bound to arrive. Miwa had caught Thor's eyes and he really thought of being his old pervert self again. Yet, he decided not to since he had his Kumiko-chan plus the fact that she pulled out a kunai and was spinning it as he spoke staring carefully at his eyes. "You guys should do a mission... your very first one as a group!" Densetsu said throwing each of em a scroll. "Ahh only if your sure this fool could do C- Ranks" said Miwa. "I look more powerful then I am!" Thor said spinning a spear, He then stamped it into the floor feeling powerful as his new cloak created by Kumiko flowed in the wind. Miwa was gone as only Densetsu stood there watching and feeling embarrased for Thor. Miwa had passed him while he was spinning the kunai and it seemed the the kunai had hooked his pant thus cutting the belt. *OF ALL THE LUCK* Thor thought folding his pants up so that Densetsu doesnt feel even worse as the Chunnin was left behind with ease by a genin. Thor quickly transformed into Feral Form while shushing catching up to Miwa, but for some reason he just couldn't pass her no matter what form he was in. *DAMNIT* Thor thought * out of all the Genin I have the once TWICE my speed*. They soon reached a meadow where searching for the shinobi they had to dispatch. Thor came out of his form as his Byakugan searched around for him. They soon found him walking with a bloody suite and many headbands through a tree filled area. Miwa signled Thor to stay steady as she shushined to the top of a tree and hung down over his head. All of sudden lightning bolts ran down from the sky hitting the tree and almost striking Thor. Miwa luckily flipped off before hand as Thor kicked off a tree away from the bolt, "I think he saw you" Thor yelled through the headset in his ear. "OH Is this really the time" She yelled diving into the base of a tree as another bolt struck. "Damn.... Sorry Thor.....but get back" Miwa said as her headset died. All of a sudden Thor saw Miwa jumped tree from tree with each one she touched falling down and crashing. The shinobi jumped into the air "GOT EM!" Thor screamed shooting a Mizurapa catching the shinobi and slamming him into the floor. The shinobi spit blood and shushined as more bolts rained down mostly onto Thor. " IM BACK" called Miwa on the headset. "A little help would be nice!" called Thor flipping bacwards and to the side dodging the bolts. "MIWA ALL I NEED IS ON GLANCE INTO HIS EYES AND HE's DONE!" Thor exclaimed thinking he could end it. "Ewww what are you gay" Miwa yelled from her headset. "IM SERIOUS!" but before Miwa coulde respond back a lightning bolt struck her area. "MIWA MIWA!" Yelled Thor *damn I dont have enough chakra to transform* he thought still dodginging bolts."I gotta give this another try!" Thor yelled "MIZURAPA" The attack came full speed at the shinobi. He quickly kicked of a stump and into the air dodging it. Miwa then appeared no longer wearing her headset which was destroyed by the bolt, "YOU SON OF A B&@*!!!" exclaimed Miwa as she was handstanding on his shoulders. "MIWA GET HIS EYES OPEN!" Yelled Thor from a distance. "Easy!" Miwa said as she extended a blade Thor could not see from her wrist right into the shinobi's shoulders. The shinobi cried in pain as his eyes opened and Thor's genjutsu caught him destroying him from the inside of his mind. The shinobi and MIwa commenced to fall, but Miwa pulled back and with a Goken punched him in the face causing his head to fly to the ground first. MIwa the used his corpse to coushin her fall. "Miwa your alive when that bolt hit I thought you were gone for sure" He said putting his hand on her shoulder. Miwa quickly pulled out a kunai, but put it away leaving his hand there. "Thanks for your concern.... Th...Thor-kun" Miwa said moving forward back to Konoha. "Come on lets go!" She said as her wounds turned green healing with medical chakra. "Oh by the way Miwa" asked Thor, "What were those blades you pulled out mid battle... from his wounds it looks like you caught him straight through the shoulder with it" Miwa's eyes turned red staring at Thor. She then flicked her hand as a bone extended out of her skin. "Your a Kaguya?!?!" Thor said with abut of shock. "Yeah... thats what I am.... but.... you gotta keep it queit no one else should no about this AT ALL!" She said with a powerful one. "Im serious Thor... No one can know". "Ill keep the secret dont worry Miwa" said Thor with a grin. A bone then was up ahaimst Thor's throat, "I'll kill you if your not careful" she said becoming scary and serious. "Now" she said pulling away the kunai, "TO THE RAMEN SHOP!" a scared Thor didnt really know what to say so he ended the mission with a phrase that will probably be heard each and every team, "TIME TO EAT....do I have to pay?". "HEELLLLLLLLLLL YEAH!" exclaimed Miwa running giddily down the path. Yet again, with another sigh Thor gained another friend. One month had passed as Thor reached Kumogakure once again. After completeing his missions in Leaf Thor spoke to Densetsu and Genroku who had happen to be there at the time. "Hey Thor congratulations on your last mission so why are you here ready for another one already" asked Genroku. "Not exactly" answered Thor with his head down, "I... I..... I WISH TO RESIGN FROM THIS VILLAGE!". Densetsu and Genroku were stunned. Genroku moved back leaning on the wall in silence as he knew this affected Densetsu more then himself. "Your joking right Thor?" Densetsu said focusing on his face. "No Densetsu-sama, not at all I am serious and wish to leave this village for Kumogakure." Thor said firmly. Genoku but in, "Thor make sure you are posotive because once you do... you wont be able to come back." "Im posotive Genroku-sama and Densetsu-sama thank you both for everything up to now..... ill be gone before the sunsets this afternoon" Thor said disapearing with a shushin, "Konoha must be good at losing Hyugas.... huh Densetsu-sama'' Genroku said sucking on a lolipop, "Shutup Genroku" Densetsu said with his head down. By the afternoon Thor was gone lucky for him both Miwa and Takahashi had been on missions that day confronting them would be a bit more of a problem Miwa already drawing kunais towards him and Takashi with his new weapon that he found on a mission. Thor cried a bit filled with tears and his bags on his back he shushined out the village..... forever. About four months past again as Thor reach Kumogakure. He had been walking a bit slow. He then reached Kumiko's House. His face was lightened as his problems would melt away once he saw her angelic face again. "Kumiko-chan Im finally back... and Im here to stay" Thor said in a high bright tone. Yet, there was no response at all. He then opened the front door completely and gasped in shock. The house was ravaged and raided from a first glance as Thor stared in. "KUMIKO, KUMIKO!" he said chraging in expecting the worse. Thor checked the house for about six minutes, but didnt find her which kind of relieved him as there was still a chance she was ok. Thor reached the kitchen and on the table was a old dusty note. {Dear, Thor....I hope you remember me I was the mob leader that you tore my arm apart. THAT DAY YOU MADE AN ENEMY THOR. AND AS SOON AS YOU LEFT I TOOK YOUR WOMAN.... I HAVENT TOUCHED HER.... YET! BUT I HAVE HAD TO SLAP HER AROUND TO KEEP HER QUIET. IF YOU WANT TO SEE HER ALIVE COME TO THE DOTOU PRISON FAR OFF THE COAST OF YUKI NO KUNI. From cloud you should make it fast... but hurry I dont know how much more she can take.} Thor stopped reading as the paper quivered in his hand. His rage took control along with his Feral Form and on all four he charged towards the ocean... towards the complex... towards his love. Thor reached the Thor, but there was no boat and the sea was rough. Without thinking Thor jumped into the ocean paddling with all four. He paddled for days one end only resting when he found a cave or barge. After five days he reached wet and soggy bleeding slightly from wounds from animals in the ocean and the rough waves. Thor walked into the compound and kicked down the door sending them flying in, "KUMIKO!!!!!!" He howled upwards. Then with a low call he heard, ".... T...horr.... THOR...get away.... its a-" Boom the door behind Thor shut. Thor slashed at the door, but it was made of pure diamond and impenrable. Thor ignoredi it still fully transformed and looked around for Kumiko and saw her, she was tied to a plank of wood at the very top of the spiral staircase. Thor started on all four to find a way up to Kumiko, but then hundreds of shinobi appeared and attacked the already wounded Thor dropping him to his knees, yet Thor didnt care. He continued anyway slashing them heading up. He gained wounds on top of his previous wounds as he was stabbed by kunai and swords. Yet, he perserveered attacking wildly taking down many of them and finally was closer to Kumiko. Thor took a step forward as behind him corpses of disembowled shinobi laid on the floor. Thor then planted his foot on the next step, but the step moved. It was a trap as it exploded dropping the whole staircase with Thor being right on the explosion. Thor wasnt fased but the explosion did destroy his left arm ravaging it as he jumped and block feeling unsafe as his instincts reacted. He then dived forward grabbing Kumiko and jumping to the very top plateou which was not falling. Kumiko's clothing was ripped, but only from time. Thor went to break the chains, but as soon as he touched them he heard, "KATON: GOUKAKYUU NO JUTSU!!!" Thor dived forward placing his entire body on Kumiko as all of the fire hit him and him alone knocking him out Feral Version. His eyes were almost blank with pain as he was then kicked and sent into a wall. "Poor little Hyugga" the shinobi said as his eyes twirled... he was an Uchiha. "You lost the girl and now your both gonna loser your lif-" The shinobi was then hit in the chest being cut short and knocked back. Kumiko with what liitle energy she could must hit him, "YOU BI@$*!!" The shinobi said smacking her to the floor and then picking her up by the chain again. "LEAVE HER ALONE" Thor sasid charging in with a kunai in his only good arm. The shinobi with ease dodged and kicked him in the face lunging him back, "You obviously dont know what these eyes can do fool... you either you whorelet" He said to both of them, "but I do like your determination" he said with a menacing grin. He then lifted Kumiko's head and looked hinto her eyes locking her in a Genjutsu. "LEAVE HER ALONE YOU SON OF A A BI&#@" Thor shouted again, "SHE HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THIS!!". The shinobi rubbed his chin, "I guess your right.... you better go get her.... Thor" he said tossing her through a glass window. Thor looked in fear as she fell through the window and with all he had left of chakra kicked of the ground and out the window trying to catch her. Thor caught her , "Im sorry Kumiko this is my fault.... Its always my fault" Thor said kissing her as they crashed into the water and everything went black the only thought that went through Thor's mind was, *Though I regret it.... and resent it.... and wish for it not to happend.... at least....at least.... at least I died..... holding you* More then five months passed and Thor woke up after his long sleep. He woke up dazed and confused as his eyes were out of focus and he was full of bruises, scars, burns, cuts and pain, plus his left eye wouldnt open. *What happened?* He thought as his mind started to clear, he then remembered, "KOMIKO!" he shouted looking frantically. There she was sitting with even more pains, scars and bruises then he himself had, plus she had taken a direct hit from a Sharingan. It was unknown how well she was, "So your awake?" a voice said as Thor turned. It was Genroku, Raiken and Densetsu. "You guys... you saved us?" He asked. "Why are you shocked dumbass... people said they saw a beast leaving a villagers house I had to check... especially since you were coming to Cloud" Raiken answered looking away. "You washed up in my village with the girl.... If I didn't help what type of monster would I be" Genroku said handing Thor his kunai pack and spears. "Im one of the best medics when Genroku called me I had to come.... Baka how could you worry us like that" Densetsu said staring away. Thor began to cry as his friends though he abandonded two of them while the other started as his enemy. "SUCK IT UP!" Genroku yelled, "I always knew he was gay" Raiken said pulling down his Raikage hat. Densetsu laughed, but then all became quiet. "Thor... that girl.... she hasnt waken up since.... her lungs stopped contracting many times..... and her heartbeat stopped too... I have healled her so currently shes ok.... Me, Genroku and Raiken also gave her some of our life force, but it would be a miracle if she made it" Densetsu said gloomily. Thor stood silent in shock, "Those bastards how coul d they do this!" he yelled. "IM GONNA KILL EM.... IM GONNA KILL THEM!" Thor shouted pulling his spear out. Yet, as soon as he did he fell down. "Your just too weak Thor, your gonna have to wait a while" Genroku said. "DAMNIT YOU DONT UNDERSTAND!" but Thor then reflected and did notice, as Genroku had Nova and Densetsu had Hinata, while even Raiken had..... almsot every female in his village. They would understand more then anything. "Sorry" Thor said passing out. once again. For the next many months Thor woke up slowly getting back his energy and power until about one and a half years passed. He was back to full energy, but Kumiko had never waken up since that day. Thor still had unhealed wounds and was still angry full of revenge. One day he woke up and tied his headband nice and tight on his head picking up all his weapons, "So where you going?" Densetsu said from behind him as he packed. "I cant let them get away with this Densetsu and you know it, "Even if I die then I must at least try" Thor replied still packing, "I thought that I taught all my Genin correctly and that revenge wasnt the way" Thor briefly stopped, "Im not your genin anymore remember he said picking up all his things, "Take care of Kumiko" he said with a shushin out the window. Dnesetsu remained silent as Thor left and simply watched him disapear into the night. Thor soon stole one of Genroku's boats and was on his way to the HQ of the syndakit, Sea Country, the smallest island in between Kumogakure & Yukigakure. It made the most sense for them to be there, so Thor charged forward full speed with the motor boat because even though he was by himself he would surely end this. Thor reached the building his idea was correct as he looked and saw the building. He checked the boat and found a Fubbuki bomb. With all his force he tossed it into the door with a large *CLANK*. Some shinobis came to the door and opened it angrily, "WHO THE F*&K IS IT!" they then saw nothing and turned towards the door. The Fubbuki bomb exploded killing them instantly as spike came out made of ice and killed them. "Im sorry to crash the party...... NOT REALLY!" He said stabbing one of the shinobi with his spear through the throat of one still alive and boosted in a Polevault like motion into the other shinobis there who came because of the noise. Thor used the Double Spear Death Dance and struck many down and rached the sixth floor, being just one floor away, but his energy was wearing thin. He then struck at a shinobi, but his spear moved wide and he was knocked back into the wall, "Damn.... just...too..many" Thor said thinking it was over, he couldnt come out the way he came as they had been coming through there and the stairs were full of shinobi as he was surrounded. Then out of thin air a portal opened before Thor, "AIR VACCUM!" all the shinobi around him were sucked in. He had known this jutsu, "Densetsu-sama?" he said as in a blue flash of lightning Densetsu came in front ofhim, "In the flesh" Densetsu said looking around as they were both surrounded. "Densetsu-sama why'd you come?" Thor asked in confusion, "Why do you still call me Densetsu-sama and sensei... I came for that reason... plus I couldnt let another Hyugga member die without help" Densetsu said with a smirk. "Thanks Densetsu, but alone we cant get out of here" all of a sudden men from outside piling in started screaming, "ITS RAINING... DONT TOUCH THE RAIN, IT BURNS!" "SUZAKU BURST INTO FLAMES AND ERUPT!" another voice was heard as a flaming phoenix flew through the door way burning and exploding taking out many of them. Genroku and Raiken then walked in with umbrellas. "Sorry we're late" Genroku started, "but those damn ninjas wouldnt move out our way" Raiken finished. Bones and bone bullets also flew past the door as Miwa and Takahashi walked in fighting the shinobis too. Everyone who had gained a relationship with Thor had come to help him, "I CAME TO WHOOP YOUR @SS FOR NOT TELLING ME YOU WERE LEAVING!" exclaimed Miwa. While Takahashi said, "Cant you do anything right damn Konoha ninjas....." Though Miwa did glare at him he turned his head and acted ignorant of what he said whisltling. "NO TIME" Densetsu yelled, "Thor you gotta get to the top and end this... this is your battle afterall!" "We'll hold em off" Said Genroku with Reiki in hand. Thor then turned and ran up the stairs going at full speed. All of a sudden Thor came to a sliding stop, "ITS YOU!" Thor exclaimed angrily. "Oh nice to meet you again Thor" said the shinobi who stood there. He then turned showing his face it was the Uchiha that hurt Kumiko. "DAMN YOU I'LL KILL YOU WITH MY OWN TWO HANDS" exclaimed Thor charging in. Thor still using his two spear ran and barraged him repeatively with lunges and stabs. The ninja dodged with ease as his sharingan saw the attacks he dodged them and kickd Thor with a backflip kcik with his hand still in his pockets, "Give up weakling" the Uchiha said. Thor swung his spear at his legs but the Uchiha simply jumped and kicked him sending him back. "AHHHHH!!" Thor screamed running forward slashing with both spears and implanting one in the ground. The Uchiha dodge and retalitated as usual, but unlike before Thor didnt move back and instead grabbed his leg. "WHAT THE HELL! YOU STILL HAD THIS MUCH ENERGY!" yelled the Uchiha. "Love and anger...ARE WHAT MAKE ME STRONG!" Thor said pickin up the shinobi by his leg and slamming again head long on the walls and cylinder then releasing him followed up with a Mizurapa. The Uchiha was blasted hard and flew into the wall. "HOW YA LIKE THAT!" Thor shouted triumphantly. The Uchiha stood up bruised and battered, "DIE!" Hesaid catching Thor's eyes in a Genrjutsu. Thor fell to his knees and everything became black as it seemed that he was paper. He was slowly trapped and couldnt escape, " DONT WORRY THOR... I'LL KILL YOU WITH YOUR OWN SPEAR!!!!". *DAMNIT* Thor thought to himself, *I got to get ut damnit... DAMINT..... DAMNIT!!!!*. The Uchiha then charged stabbing Thor. but the hit barely missed as Thor started growing hair and became a wolf "PEE KA BOO!" Thor said grabbing his arm. The Uchiha was shocked, "DAMNIT! KATON-" He was cut short as Thor grabbed his face with the other hand adn started to squeeze crushing his skull, "You caused Kumiko so much pain.... so I shall be your judge and jury.... and I say.... DEATH!" THor said locking the arm with one hand while the second hand glowed a scary black energy that moved like a flame yet it wasn't, " I cant do this well so bare with me...EAT MY RAGE!... DRAGKIRI!" he slammed it into his chest making a large explosion breaking the Uchiha's chest and the floor with such force that he was knocked fromg the Ninth floor to the basement in a bloody mess. "Though I beat you down.... I'm never gonna like you damn Uchiha's" Thor said continuing to the top and kicking the door in. The leader who was seen before in the village stood there. "WHAT... WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!?!". Thor ignored him and continued walking closer as he was back in human form. "WHERES THE UCHIHA BOY!" yelled the man. Thor finally stopped , "In hell.... TRUST ME YOU'LL MEET HIM SOON!" Thor said taking up his spear. "PLEASE .... NO I CAN MAKE YOU A RICH MAN.. JUST STOP!" the man pleaded throwing his money at Thor. "I DONT CARE ABOUT YOUR F*#&ING DIRTY MONEY!" Thor said throwing his chakra filled spear impaling him in the heart and lungs. The chakra then caused it to explode catapulting the corpse out the window and into the ocean. Since that day three months have passed and Thor never left Kumiko's side. He stroked her hand and even brushed her hand as none of his negative thoughts even came to to mind. He basically lived by that bedside. Until one day, Kumiko's eyes opened and she slowly sat up, ÉVERYONE GET IN HERE SHE IS AWAKE!" Thor exclaimed releasing her hand. Everyone from the Hokages to Genins walked in. "Welcome Back Kumiko!" They all said almost in unison just they way Thor had forced them too in practices. "Thank You all very much" she said in a sweet voice as she focused on Thor with a large smile. Thor smiled back grinning as wide as possible, everyone thought that a moment to remember was coming. "Who are you?" She said just as sweetly. Everyones face went completely blank as they were left speechless. "Stop joking Kumiko its me Th,,," Thor thought about it remembering the Genjutsu she was hit with. "It caught you that bad huh" Thor muttered again.Kumiko was confused and stood looking around. " Dont worry Thor" Densetsu said with his hand glowing I think I can fix it" Thor grabbed his hand and looked at Kumiko, "We are just some shinobis who found you hurt and healed you nothing else" he said with a tear "Raiken can ya take her back to Kumogakure" "Of course" Raiken said with no snappy come back. Raiken and her then were about to leave, but as she left a tear ran down her eye that she couldnt control and didnt understand why, "Ummm Thor-Kun.....right... are you sure I dont know you?." She asked a bit confused, "Im posotive" Thor replied, "Oh.... ok" she said turning her back for the last time on Thor and leaving. "You ok Thor" Densetsu asked, "I could've really fixed her and-" "No Densetsu its cause of me she was like this... cause of me she got..... got hurt" Thor started to choke up "I can never see her again....... PLEASE CAN I BE YOUR SHINOBI AGAIN!" Thor fell to his knees begging. "You know damn well you didnt have to ask that" Genroku said extending his hand to Thor. "You are my student and no matter how stupid you are..... That will never change!" "Same here!" Genroku shouted "And you'll always be my dumbass partner" Takahashi said with coming forward "and my perverted partner.... that I will stab sooner or later" Miwa said with a smile "Oh but dont forget my unintelligent rival a Raiken clone came out of the shadow saying. They then put their hands over each other in the center Kages, Genins, and chunnins all together, "WE'LL DIE FRIENDS TILL THE END!" They exclaimed breaking apart with a mild explosion of heir chakras mixing. Though he made his choice, Thor does reflect on what could've been and never foregts of that beautiful women, that no one could ever match. |
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| Pain | Mar 6 2008, 09:46 AM Post #6 |
Bringer of Hope
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Why was i the bad guy :( |
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| X-Drake | Mar 6 2008, 01:47 PM Post #7 |
Kaizuko
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you made me do stuff i never done without my permission
:P i ain't even met miwa nut i was a tough mist shinobi :ph43r: mist rules what's Kumogakure???? |
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| BHM | Mar 6 2008, 02:42 PM Post #8 |
Silver Eagle
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dang rapid, ur a beast
:blink: and once again you outdone yourself |
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| Roku | Mar 6 2008, 03:37 PM Post #9 |
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We Are Friends... but I will Kick your ass and laugh
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To Dark I got carried away with it lmao. Basically he said he wanted to show that he had met you... which he did and leaving you out at the end of the story wouldnt have made it good Kumogakure= Cloud Village {Its literally next to mist} As for Raiken Your not a bad guy Your the cool, cocky shinobi who whooped his ass and killing is what you do with ease, but in the end dislike too Plus have you seen Raiken's latest moves.... They dont call mr nice guy XD but overall you still are good... like the sasuke with less flash but still gets the girls as I saw in your Bio :P PLus you being Thor's rival made the most sense Genroku damn well cant XD To Cool yes I did! |
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| Xeaoun | Mar 6 2008, 03:46 PM Post #10 |
Xea, The Random
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I thank you for making my guys life seem AMAZING! Tears of joy and sorrow are falling down my cheeks! |
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| Roku | Mar 6 2008, 03:47 PM Post #11 |
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We Are Friends... but I will Kick your ass and laugh
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lol your welcome sorry it took so long, but I think you can see why it did of course lmao. |
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| Xeaoun | Mar 6 2008, 03:52 PM Post #12 |
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Xea, The Random
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I think I should leave it in here though :blink: it IS kinda long |
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