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Saiyuki Fanfic- Eternal Pain
Topic Started: May 23 2005, 07:32 PM (129 Views)
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Latest Update: May 27, 2005

Chapter 1
Sanzo The Carming Monk

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"Meliane, Meliane!, Meliane!! time for school!" yelled Meliane's mother. Meliane "unn" Meliane was laying on her bed half asleep, she looked over to the alrm clock it was 8:00 AM. Meliane yelled out, "O noooo im going to be late!!". She quickly changed her cloths grabed her back pack and ran out the door. Meliane's mother said, "o my..". Meliane is a fifteen year old in high school girl in Canada, B.C. she is a obeseve anime fan and loves bad boys and is an awsome drawer! Later that day Meliane was sitting in her classroom durning Math. She stared out the window thinking, "what is life any way? is it an ilosion? i geuss i should just live it though..". *Ding Ding Ding* Meliane said, "well i guess its time to go home". It was pooring down rain out side. Meliane thought to herself, "o man...".

While she was walking home Meliane saw a pink flower on the side walk but it wasnt wet at all it was suround by an orb of light. Meliane stared at it for a second, then she reached for it sundenly it pulled her in next thing she knew she was somewere else and the Flower was in her hand still glowing. Meliane looked arounded in fear she was in the middle of a dirt road then suddenly a jeep apaerd with four men inside and almost hit her but stoped just in time. The man with green eyes and brown hair said, " o my god are you ok"? Meliane said, " umm ya just a bit stareled i shouldnt have been standing in the middle of the road sorry". The man smiled lightly and said, " you should keep that in mind". There was also a cute guy with golden eyes and brown hair a long with some one with crimson eyes and hair and a scar on this face, and last but not lest a carming bad boy looking blondy monk with Voitet eyes and wore a scipter on his shoulders like a vest.
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The Monk said, "lets go already". The eyed guy said, "kay, see ya around". They drove off Meliane thought to herself, "that monk was so cute!!! and so was that monkey like guy with the golden eyes, and and... where am I? this is messed up but there cute^^. *sigh* but what am I gonna do?" Meliane looked at the flower in her hand and said, " how do I get back?". Meliane's eye's sudenly sadend, "what am I going to do?".

Chapter 2
Same Old Thing

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Meliane had found a town to say in for a while she was looking around she saw thoughs four guys again going inside a restrunt. Meliane was asking around for job she was acteped in a restrunt as a waitress the same one that the four guys were in. The golden eyed one what chomping down everything then there was only one eggrole left. The crimson and goldenboth grabed it at the same time. the crimson one said, "hey Lego my Eggrole". The golden one said, "No how bout you go find a lake you dried up water sprite!". The crimson one said, "thats it your gona get it!". The golden one said, "any were any place!". The little dragon that was resting on the green eyed guys shoulder jumped on to the table, ate the eggrole and made a cute high piched noise. The crimson eyed guy *sighed* and said, "damn".


Meliane gigled the guy with green eyes said, " hey your that girl we almost ran over im sorry about that". Meliane said, " well you already have apolagised and it was my fault to". The guy with green eyes siad, " I know, i should interduse myself my name is Cho Hakkai, this monk friend of mine is Genjyo Sanzo, the golden eyed one is Son Goku, and the Crimson haired one is Sha Gojyo". Meliane said, " my name is Meliane". Hakkai said, " pleazed to meet you". Meliane smiled, " you too". Sanzo said, " lets go". Hakkai said, "kay see ya around". Meliane said, "bye". The guys left the resturnt while Meliane worked for the rest of the night.

Later that night Sanzo and the others went to a hotel there was only one room left Sanzo said, "I get it". Gojyo said, " why should you get it!" Goku said, " ya i heavn't slept on a bed for days". Sanzo said, "simple I payed for the damn room". Gojyo said, "No the three flouting heads payed for it"! Sanzo pointed a gun at Gojyo's face and said, " do you want to die?". The women at the conuter said, "I know i can lay blankets on the floor and you could all sleep together". They all said at once, " Sleep Together!?".

Later that night in the room. Hakkai said, "one problem theres only one bed so three of us will have to sleep on the floor". Gojyo said, " ill get the cards". Gojyo toke out his cards and said, " Ok the highest card wins". Everybody grabed a card. The little dragon made some noise Gojyo said, "whats up with the pairit?". Hakkai said, "Hakruyuu would like to draw a card too" . Gojyo said, " but your just a stupid car what whould you need a bed for?". Hakkai said, " o come on it wouldn't be nice to leave him out". Gojyo said, " o alright" Hakruyuu grabed a card. Gaku said, "Ha im a King!". Gojyo said, "o no theres no way to beet that unless you got an Ace!". Sanzo, "or an Ace Of Spades". Gojyo said, " aww damn" and threw his card. Hakkai said, " well I geuss were two jokers" Hakkai and Hakruyuu showed there cards. Goku, Gojyo, and Sanzo all turned white. Goku jumped on the bed and said, " no haven't sleped ona bed in weeks!!". Gojyo tried to pull Goku off the bed, "get off!!". Hakkai said, " Hakruyuu your joker covers over mine so the bet is yours". A women opened the door, " i hope you dont mind that i got you some sup...". Sanzo and Hakkai are siting on the floor with cards in there hands, Goku is laying on the bad with Gojyo over top of him. She said, "i'll just leave it here *closes door* im sorry i didn't see anything". Gojyo said, "hey Sanzo does this look BAD?". Goku said, "what what looks bad?". Sanzo said, "depends on what you mean by BAD but yes" Gojyo said, " I dont want her getting the wrong idea or any thing maybe i should chase after her?". Sanzo said, "go to bed". Gojyo said, "ok..". *lights turn off* *Goku's snoreing* Gojyo said, " HEY thats my spot you stupid monkey!!... Wake up!! Wake up!! WAKE UP!!!! and will you stop that inferal snoreing!!".

Chapter 3
Broken Dreams
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(Meliane had sleped in the hotel (she got there before them)) The Next day Meliane waked around the town. Suddenly there was an expostion, Meliane rushed to see what happed, Sanzo and the others were there along with a perple haired demon girl, a red haird demon guy, a ornge haired demon little girl, and a black haired demon guy. The youngist one said, "Sanzo.. ya you this time we will get the scipter from you today!". The red haired guy said, "Yaone, take Lirin back". The perple hair demon said, " but what about-". The red hair demon said, "just do it!". Yaone said, "yes Lord Kuogaiji". Kuogaiji said, "Dokugakuji you ready!". The black hair one said, "yes!". Yaone said, " come on Lirin lets go". Lirin said, "aw but i wanna fight". Yaone said, "pleaze Lirin". Lirin said, "o alright". Yaone and Lirin left.

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Hakkai said, " well i geuss its just you two we have to fight just to let you know you dont stand a chance". Kuogaiji said, "were more than enough for you guys". Hakkai siad, "o realy?". Goku said, "i get Kuogaiji!". Gojyo said, "ill fight Dokugakuji". Sanzo said, "do what you want". Hakkai said, " who are we going fight Sanzo?". Sanzo said, "lets just watch it was always a pain in the @$$ fighting Lirin". Hakkai said, "well ok this should be good". (more to come)
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I like it, but I'll give you the advice everyone gave me. When you start a different person saying something, hit return twice.

Ex. "OI! Get off my chicken, ya pervy water sprite!" (Gokuu)

"What was that monkey boy? I should kick your @$$!" (Gojyo)

"You're just using that as an excuse to touch my @$$!" (Gokuu)

"Shut up, ya little f@&!" (Gojyo)
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Nariko,May 24 2005
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I like it, but I'll give you the advice everyone gave me. When you start a different person saying something, hit return twice.

Ex. "OI! Get off my chicken, ya pervy water sprite!" (Gokuu)

"What was that monkey boy? I should kick your @$$!" (Gojyo)

"You're just using that as an excuse to touch my @$$!" (Gokuu)

"Shut up, ya little f@&!" (Gojyo)

thz for the advice
btw im renameing it so it'll do better with the ending im going to put in some time
..you got the moment worng

"why dont i shove this beer can up your @$$!" (Gojyo)

"your just useing it as an excuse to thouch my @$$" (Goku)

" you two just get a room!" (Sanzo)(i couldn't remeber all he said)

"why is it so quiet over there you two makeing out?" (Hakkai)

"ya right you wish" (Gojyo)
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XD I didn't use the actual scene, I was using a quote from my OWN Saiyuki Fanfic... XD I didn't post it here yet, and I won't til it's finished.
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