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| Love Stinks; Short and cliché ^^o | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Apr 15 2005, 04:45 AM (126 Views) | |
| Leina | Apr 15 2005, 04:45 AM Post #1 |
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This was for an exercise for my expressive writing class ^^o We had to write a short story (300-350 words) using clichés XD And this is what I came up with ~_^ Note: noble seamstress* I hope all of you know that the original word wasn't noble seamstress.. XD And if not, the original word was the other way to say female dog! ^^o Love Stinks “Rise and shine!” “Fat chance,” muttered Jen, burying her head in her pillow. “Well, at least I tried.” Jen heard her nanny walk across her room and soon, the curtains were thrown open. Sunlight streamed into the room and Jen groaned. “Life is a noble seamstress*,” she declared, her voice muffled by the pillow. Her nanny, Mary Sue, laughed like a school girl. “Oh Jen, don’t worry! Be happy! Today is the first day of the rest of your life!” “You say that every morning,” Jen complained, finally sitting up. “Besides, life sucks, and then you die.” “Touché! But you know, when God gives you lemons, make lemonade!” “God? Please.” Jen snorted, crawling out of her bed and heading into the hallway. “We are all alone Mary Sue. In fact, I am better off alone.” Mary Sue walked beside her, shaking her head. “Don’t say that sweetie. Are you still upset because of the boy that broke your heart? You know there are plenty of fish in the sea. Plus, beauty is in the eye of the beholder, and he was superficial! It is the inside that really matters.” Jen stomped down the stairs, waving her hand in an offhanded manner. “I know, I know. And you can’t tell a book by its outside cover, right? I know. But life’s still unfair.” She walked into the living room and plopped onto the couch. Mary Sue quickly came beside her. “I know love hurts Jen. Parting is such sweet sorrow, but you will survive! Whatever doesn’t kill you only makes you stronger. It is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all.” Jen sighed. “It has to get worse before it gets better, huh?” “Just remember sweetie, there is a light at the end of the tunnel. All good things come to those that wait.” “I guess only time will tell.” The end! ![]() Edit: I encourage all you writer's to try this! It's fun and amusing to read at the end
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| Kutoria | Apr 15 2005, 04:55 AM Post #2 |
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^Laughs with Shinneth.
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X_x The famous quote-ness. Great job! =D I like it. It was short, and I always are into quotes. Very good. 8/10 :3 |
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| Leina | Apr 15 2005, 05:13 AM Post #3 |
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Ha, thanks Kutoria! Quotes are so much fun! ^__^ I actually stared at a list while I wrote this >D Some of the people in my class wrote longer stories O.O The topic of love seems to be the biggest cliche ^^o I editted the post to make a note about the noble seamstress bit XD |
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| sweetpikachu | Apr 15 2005, 05:29 AM Post #4 |
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that was a good story ^-^ 8.5/10 |
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| Sarutobi Sasuke | Apr 15 2005, 11:49 AM Post #5 |
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Ah! the memories at school which reminds me of 300 words only story. Very good job, Leina-san! I like the quotations! I wish to see more of works like these. |
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| Elisa | Apr 15 2005, 02:10 PM Post #6 |
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Don't you just love the word filter XD; XD Short but sweet Leina-chan. I recognised all of the clichés I think. Wish we'd had interesting projects like that ^^; |
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| Shanni-chan | Apr 15 2005, 09:31 PM Post #7 |
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..Beauty is believing..
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Great story Leina! ^-^ 10/10 |
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| Sinia | Apr 15 2005, 09:39 PM Post #8 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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10/10 I WUVVLES IT! XD Dude, it so rocks >< |
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| Haruna | Apr 15 2005, 10:01 PM Post #9 |
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Hazama = waifu
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I like it^^ 8/10. |
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| Dark_Devil | Apr 15 2005, 10:10 PM Post #10 |
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That was so cool ^^. Interesting concept and the clichés you chose were all good choices ^^;, hope you get a good mark on it. |
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| Nicky | Apr 16 2005, 03:53 AM Post #11 |
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Great story Leina ^-^ So much quotatiosness 0.o; If that's a word XD; |
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