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| The Tk Private Island With A Beach Vacation!; 5/6::Chapter 7: The rise of Rieven | |
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| Elisa | Apr 23 2005, 04:04 PM Post #31 |
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I love that part XD I can't begin to tell you how much I'm laughing at Alpha Test XD I nearly choked on my coffee! Alpha Test a male... well there's something I didn't expect! XD Good chapter! ^^ |
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| Kurisutaru | Apr 24 2005, 10:32 PM Post #32 |
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That *was* really creative of you - the alpha test turn. But I always thought Alpha Test was a male. ... before I realized who AT really was. Wow, I laughed my head off. It's so hilarious! XDDD Update soon |
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| Truus | Apr 25 2005, 03:26 PM Post #33 |
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Bwahahaha! XD I love it! I love it! *cries tears of laughter* The Evil Truus cracked me up... Not to mention that her name in short is ET. ^^; *gets memories of a certain movie* I adored that tiny interview! XD Alpha Test a bishie?! Well, that was the last thing I had seen coming up. ^^;; Update soon! *-* |
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| Larxene | Apr 25 2005, 07:05 PM Post #34 |
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Wow. I've just read through this, and I've relized my writings improved....alot. The AT thing: I took after the dog thing. 'Alpha Male.'. So, hence, 'Alpha Test'. *coughhinthintcough* Well, here's chapter 6: Chapter 6 “MUHAHAHAHA!” Alpha Test cackled for the millionth time. “Taking over this puny planet was much easier than I thought it would be. MUHAHAHAHA!!” Reiven sighed. Man, being queen of Ty Kamara has A LOT of downsides…. [ALIGN= center]Two hours earlier:[/ALIGN] “Mommy! Elisa shouted, running away from a flying…that was a dog??? Well, it was. A chinchilla, to be exact. And Elisa was near a Starbucks. Use your imagination. “Drown, you little rat, drown!...On second thought, GET OUT OF MY COFFEE!!! MY COFFEE! MINE! ALL MINE! MUHAHAHAHA!!!” The dog, which was ACTUALLY a time bomb, exploded. [align=center]***[/align] Kai-V was NOT happy. First, she got accused by some MANIAC saying she was singing Britney Spears, and they had it on tape. THEN, she got chased around by a bunch of sugar-crazed cats. NOW she was tied to a pole by a bunch of Kai fans saying ‘die, Kai-V, DIE!’. No, our beloved moderator was NOT having the best time of her life. “THAT’S IT! YOU ARE ALL OFFICIALLY WARNED!!!” She shouted. Four members froze, having reached their warning limit and being banned. Fortunately, for Kai-V of course, those four were the ones tying her to the pole. “MUHAHAHAHA!!!” She cackled, jumping off the pole. “Kai-V prevails once more!” “Don’t think so.” “What the-“ [align=center]***[/align] “NO! I’m NOT GOING TO DIE YET!” CRL shouted, attempting not to drown. “CRL, SHUT UP!! You’re not going to drown!” RPR shouted from behind her. “God, the water is two feet deep, for crying out loud!!” Or so they thought. “YOU ARE NOW GOING TO DROWN! MUHAHAHAHA!!” “Neesan, how could you!” CRL shouted. “Since you decided to try and lkill me with an axe.” [align=center]***[/align] “HURRY UP!” Truus, Liena, and Ice shouted at the same time to Larxene. “I’m Trying!” “You are GOING to fix this!” “Fine!” Larxene was just about to hit ‘print’, which would have solved all problems. But, of course, that would have been to easy. The power went out, and the four of them were covered in total blackness, and…. “AHHH!!” Ice screamed. ….spiders. 3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 back to the present….. “So, what are we gonna do with this planet? That remember, I Helped you take over.” Reiven banged her head on the round table. man, I hate this job. CRL, where are you when I need you… 33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 Alright, Review away! |
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| Kurisutaru | Apr 26 2005, 03:45 AM Post #35 |
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Spiders? *cackles* She hates them, don't she? *pokes Icy* Where are you? You're quite good. There's some spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, and it's random (which is good) I like it. ^^ |
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| Elisa | Apr 26 2005, 03:18 PM Post #36 |
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Poor Ice, spiders! ^^; |
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| nessi | Apr 26 2005, 06:51 PM Post #37 |
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This chapter was purely... random. xD |
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| Larxene | May 6 2005, 07:00 PM Post #38 |
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Wee-who! Chapter 7! Three more chapters after this! Chapter 7 Elisa stared at Ice huddled in a corner, shaking and wide-eyed. “Get…away…will…squish…you …don’t…touch…me…AHHH!” Larxene walked up to Elisa. “Well, she’s not going to be much help, is she?” Elisa slapped her. “OW! What was that for? It wasn’t in the script!” “Has she shown any sign of life? Besides that, I mean.” “Yep!” Truus bounced happily into the room. “But only if you do this.” She walked over to Ice and tapped her fingers against her upper arm. “EEEK! SPIDER!! GET IT OFF!” Ice ran to another corner and huddled up again, sucking her thumb. “THAT wasn’t in the script either!!” Elisa held up a huge book with ‘THE SCRPIT’ written on it, took out a match, and set it on fire. 33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 “ARF! ARF!” “Are you telling me, that for the past TWO WEEKS, I have been ruling beside A DOG???” Reiven shouted, glaring out at the court. No one was stupid enough to argue. “Okay, so let’s get this straight.” Reiven started to pace. “The admin DIDN’T make a bishie, they made an adorable puppy! A stupid, cuddly, adorable, cute, shape-shifting PUPPY!” “Well, DUH.” A person- Dizzara, to be exact- shouted. Unfortunatly, she was incinerated moments later. “Anyone else wanna go?” Reiven hissed, glaring at everyone. No one said anything or moved. 3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 “WHERE is Kai-V?” “Do we look like geniuses, genius?” Truus responded, glancing up from a book. “Don’t go there, miss smarty pants. I need to ask her something IMPORTANT.” “I’ll go play Personal Message deliverer.” Elisa’s eyes went wide. “Would you?” Truus nodded. “Considering people with personal message deliveries can find anyone at any time. And you need to stay here, in this secret cave, AKA ‘the almost last safe place’. So you don’t get killed, and all that jazz. Now, the question is, do you speak my language?” Elisa thought. “A whole room devoted to the discussion of sugar?” Truus looked up, obviously thinking. “Plus a minibar with a sugar-filled menu?” “Okay! What’s the message?” 333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 “Okay. So here’s how it’s gonna work.” Reiven, newly crowned queen of TK, looked at her subjects. “First, someone get that dog OUT of here! I was forced to listen to his cheesy pickup lines way too long.” Someone led Alpha Test by the collar out the door. “Now, Yoh Asokura, you are my footman. Bleu Blizzard, the courtly artist person. Flame Kira, everyone will hate you from now on because you collect taxes. Yuffie, you can be the chef… Who are you?” A person who looked eerily like Larxene bowed down on one knee. “GD at your service.” Reiven tapped her chin thoughtfully. “That name sounds familiar. Oh, well. You might come in handy for something…” 333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 “WHERE is GD?” Kai-V stormed into the almost-almost last safe place, obviously not in a good mood. Ethe looked up from her laptop. “No Idea. I thought you were drowning her.” “No! I left her in that room.” Ethe’s eyes went wide. “You don’t think…” “Don’t think what?” CRL walked into the room. “GD told Alpha Test…” “Where the last safe place is? Nah, I told someone MUCH worse.” The three of them turned around to see GD standing at the door, evil smirk on her face. “Okay, CRL, you have to come with me. AND you’re going to tell me where the fluffy, kawii Kai-V is.” 3333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 Who-who! Three more chapters! Then it’s all done with ‘The TK Apartment Building’ trilogy! But for now: Interview with the Fluffy, kawii Kai-V!!! Interviewer: Anonymous (A) Interviewee: Fluffy kawii Kai-V(FKV) A: Have you appeared in this story yet? FKV: Yep! Of course, my polar opposite and the normal Kai-V are in here too. A: Polar opposite? FKV: Duh! You have me, the fluffy, kawii, cut and cuddly Kai-V. Then there’s the normal Kai-V that doesn’t talk much. Then there’s my polar opposite, the Evil and Untouchable Kai-V. You don’t want to mess with her. A: *blinks* Are there any other opposites of TK members in here we should know of? FKV: Yep! There’s the Evil Truus, The normal Truus, The Super-Fluffy Truus- she’s coming- and some characters aren’t accu- HEY! Don’t try and make me tell you things I’m not supposed to tell! *sticks out tongue* A: And this is supposed to mean??? FKV: Nothing to you! There IS a curse to the island. GD never could figure it out, but it’s not what she thinks. A: Another thing you’re not going to explain? FKV: Duh. Of course I’m not! But ‘Planet TK’ isn’t exactly a planet. A: Meaning? FKV: Not telling! Want to go to this new minibar Elisa set up? It has a totally sugar menu! 33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333 ….Man, I gave you too much info in THAT interview…. Ah, well. Reviewness! |
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| Dark_Devil | May 6 2005, 11:28 PM Post #39 |
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Nice new chapter Larxene ^^, it was really good and hilarious as well. Keep it up. |
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| Seraphiel | May 7 2005, 08:35 AM Post #40 |
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*Just read 3 chapters* Okay, am I the only one reeeally confused about this whole evil/good/fluffy person thing? @__@ I really can't tell who's who anymore x_X;. Good story apart from that though ^^; |
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| nessi | May 7 2005, 01:17 PM Post #41 |
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Elite
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Alpha Test is a dog? o.O;; Funny chap.^^ |
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| Larxene | May 11 2005, 10:38 AM Post #42 |
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that's the point. If you can't tell who's who, obviously the TKers in the story can't tell who's who either, can they???? (<Just gave away MAJOR point) |
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| metal-sonic | May 11 2005, 11:28 AM Post #43 |
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Your story is good yea, but you know what?Not that I have nothing against them, but, you guys really should stop always using the same peoples.Not because they are very poppular that you always have to introduce them in all the story possible. |
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| Elisa | May 11 2005, 02:27 PM Post #44 |
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XD I love that bit. Alpha Test is a puppy now? o_o Scary! XD |
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