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The Tk Private Island With A Beach Vacation!; 5/6::Chapter 7: The rise of Rieven
Topic Started: Dec 28 2004, 06:49 PM (572 Views)
Dark_Devil
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I know where your username is from XD, nice avatar/banner ^_~. Axel-sama, whee hehe.

Anyways nice story so far ^^, very interesting. I like the next part you added o__o, wow Truus mostly all in black....scary XD. Update soon =3.
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oooo, can't wait to see what happens next x3
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Truus and black? *tries very hard to imagine it*

... Admin being manipulated?
XD continue, it's very interesting.
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Seraphiel
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Truus in black?
Elisa cursing?
Crickets chirping?
*Crickets chirp some more*
What is this world coming to?! TT___TT *Runs away from the evil stories and refridgerators out to get her*


...Nice chapter, update soon. ^^
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Oh my, I sound coffee deprived! XD

Who is the gothic/punk Truss imposter? I look forward to finding out ^_~
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*Pulls out paper*

Okay, this might be a little short, here we go….


Chapter 3

“Umm…Kai-V? Are you feeling okay?” Nicky asked, then ducking under the table to hide from the flower-throwing admin. “My GOD, Kai-v, I only wanted to know where the phone was!”

“Up the stairs, straight up to the top, mind your step and please don’t hop!” Kai-V sang then skipped off, probably to inflict the horror of rhyme and flowers on others. Nicky came out and immeiadtly got hit in the face with a bouquet. Nicky screamed bloody murder and ran out the door, jumping into the nearest dumpster. She heard Kai-V follow her out, then say “Hello, pretty bee, would you like a flower? Ow! That isn’t very nice, Mr.Bee!”

Nicky shook her head, wondering what the world was coming to.
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“Ahhhhhh! Stay away from me, you freak!” Callgi Agatha screamed, running away from Truus, who was shooting off a water gun.

“Muhhaha! Sugar is BAD! You shall never eat it again!” She shouted, trashing the snack bar and soaking random people.

Meanwhile, Elisa had turned into a Dragon and was blowing fire at random people, shouting, “You shall all suffer the wrath of the Admin! HAHAHA!!”

“Run away!” Random TKers yelled, and everyone took cover in the middle of a dry bush.

“This is an awesome idea, She’ll never find us here!” CRL whispered to Reiven, who nodded.

“I agree…. wait, is that smoke?”

Everyone ran as the bushes caught on fire. Gee, I wonder who did that…


Meanwhile, in the super-secret cabin, Larxene was whispering to Ice, who had turned traitor and was helping her terrorize all of TK.

“I still don’t get why we have to have HER.” Ice pouted, pointing at Truus.

“Two Reasons. One, she never finished my Secret Santa fic, and two, she’s a favorite, so makes good bait if we need her.”

“I AM NOT BAIT!” Truus shouted from a corner.

“Wanna bet?” Ice said, pulling out a Fishing pole and hook. Truus fell silent.

“So,” Ice continued, “The torture’s just beginning, but when do we get to-“

“Next Chapter.” Larxene cut her off. “And EVERYONE will suffer.”

“Can I get out of here YET? I have to go tour-“ Elisa started, poking her head out, holding tow turbo water guns.

“NEXT CHAPTER!”
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Short but good.^^ That is definetly not Kai-V... or Truus... Update soon!^^
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XD Oh my....

An MSN extract:
Elisa says:
and this story... I've turned into a dragon! XD
"Meanwhile, Elisa had turned into a Dragon and was blowing fire at random people, shouting, “You shall all suffer the wrath of the Admin! HAHAHA!!”"
Tva says:
sure that isent a documentry rather than a story?

I'm a dragon! ROAR! Or not XD

Good chapter! ^^
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Okay, here's an xtra long 4th chapter for you!


Chapter 4: TK Fic

“Everyone on this island has gone mad!” Uki shouted, then ducked behind a tree avoid a mad cow that was charging at him. “Honestly…”

What had started as a nice, quiet vacation was in chaos. Like most of you have predicted, the admin and mod had gone on strike and were administering all sorts of torture. Chairs, pizza, pillows, and little annoying faeries were flying around. As if that wasn’t enough, the flying refrigerators had made a comeback, along with some sidekicks: mad cows, a bunch of psychotic paper airplanes, and shrinks who were putting random members in straight jackets.

Yes, our rulers were indeed having fun.

And all members were running for the hills.
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“Who’s a good little refrigerator? You are!” the evil shadow Truus cooed, petting the refrigerator, of which purred.

Everybody looked at her like she was insane- which, I will admit, she was- and she stared back.

“What? All they need is a little tenderness!” She exclaimed, staring. “I may be Truus’s evil side, but honestly, I can be nice…”

“So if you’re Truus’s evil side, who has Truus?” Riona asked, taking a brave step forward.

“Weeell…. Do you know the muffin man?”

“The muffin man?”

“The muffin man!”

“Yes, I know the muffin man…. Who lives on Drewrylane?”

“Well, she’s married to the muffin man...”

“The muffin man?”

“The muffin man!”

“She’s married to the muffin ma-HEY!”

Evil Truus giggled. “I’ll never te-ell…”

“Oh yes you will!”

“Wanna bet?”

“With pleasure.”

“Okay. Willfred, get her.”

Suddenly, a huge hamster popped up out of nowhere.
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“Oh, oh, oh! Look, Nicky, look!” Hakura said happily, pointing to a sign. Nicky sighed.

“Shouldn’t we be running for the hills like everyone else?”

“But LOOK!”

The sign that Hakura was pointing to said ‘super-secret hideout this way’.

“Well, that sounds kind of safe…”

“So let’s go!”

The two skipped off down the red-bricked road, screaming at the top of their lungs the lyrics to ‘Follow the yellow-brick road’. Strange much?

Two figures moved on either side of the path the two were skipping along.

Nicky stopped by a crashed plane, staring at the wreckage.

“Hakura, are you sure this is safe? Look, there’s a crashed plane over there…”

“Of course it’s safe, look at that house!”

The ‘house’ (which was actually the super-secret hideout) was a log cabin with candy all over the outside walls. A huge porch was out front, with two chairs, a pail of water, and two eyedroppers on it. A ton of satellites and random things people don’t need but have anyway were on the roof.

“Yeah! Someone to help us!” Nicky and Hakura shouted at the same time and ran onto the porch.

“Wanna bet?” Ethe stepped out from around the corner, holding a straight jacket.

“Don’t move.” Kai-V added, stepping around the opposite corner, also holding a straight jacket.

“Um…Kai-V? Why aren’t you doing something else?”
“Well, you see, force-feeding me sugar by the pound for the last 3 days has made me go on a sugar-high. So now, Ethe and I here are going to totally and completely administer Chinese water torture on you.”

“Oh s-“

*insert violent scene in which members get stuffed into straight jackets here*

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“Ulp!”

“Hello?” Unigirl yelled, looking around.

“ELP!”

“What?”

“EEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!”

Uni walked over to a bush, in which she pulled out a tied-and gagged Larxene.

“Larxene?”

Larxene shook her head.

“GD?”

Nod.

“Why isn’t your name changed?”

Eye roll to the sky.

“Oops… Sorry.”

Unigirl ungagged and un-tied GD.

“Why isn’t you’re name changed?”

“Because, you idiot, Larxene’s my evil twin sister.”

“Oh. And she’s the one dong this to TK?”

“No. She’s helping the mods and admins do this to TK.”

“What?”

“Long story. First we have to get to the super-secret hideout.”

“Oh, you’ll get there all right. Just not the way you want to.”

Elisa stepped onto the path, holding two turbo water guns.

“I think it’s time for some member- or, in this case, a member and a member’s evil twin sister- torture.”

“And how exactly do you plan on doing that?”

“Simple.”

Elisa pulled the triggers and the one member and a member’s evil twin sister were soaked.

“Oh, that really hurt.” GD piped up. Elisa smirked.

“It will soon…”

And then there was one. And two icicles.

Hmm…Elisa thought.Okay, better get these two to the hideout. What the heck made me go from calling Larxene a female dog to helping her anyway. Probably because she’s writing this chapter that’s allowing me to do tons of horrible things to members. But hey, who cares, anyway? I have a date in one of Reiven’s fics. I wonder how Evan’s hamster virus is doing?..

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“RUN, CRL, RUN!!!”

“I’m working on it, Rieven!”

“Good Ice, that’s right, good dragon…”

“ROOOOOOOOOOOOOOAR!”

“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!”

“Special delivery for CRL, from the admin team!” Ice announced, shrinking back to her normal size. The TTwins froze.

“Um….What is it?” CRL asked, stepping forward.
Ice held out a shiny ‘moderator’ pin.

“Oh! I’m a mod! Yeah!”

“Duh. Oh, and you get to help the rest of us torture random members. Anywho, bye, I have to go deliver one of these to Raging Phoenix Rising!”

Ice turned into a dragon and flew off.

“She’s not much for sarcasm today, is she?” Rieven remarked. CRL smirked and looked at Rieven, then her shiny pin, then back at Rieven.

“Member torture, huh?”

“CRL…no… you wouldn’t! We’re the TTwins, remember.”

“Terrible twins...well, might as well live up to the name, right?”

“CRL! NO!”

“HAHAHAHAHA!”

“HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELP!”

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Oh, poor Rieven. Someone should help her….. Right. Maybe.

Okay, next episode:

~Evil Truus reveals the plot!
~CRL and RPR join the fight against the members!
~Alpha Test saves Rieven!


Make sure to tune in! But, for now:

[align=center]AN INTERVIEW WITH EVIL TRUUS!!!!!!!!!![/align]

Interviewer: Anonymous
Interviewee: Evil Truus


A: Hello. I’m sure all of TK is eager to hear Truus’s evil side, so let’s get started! Question one: Who exactly are you and where do you come from?

ET: I’m exactly Evil Truus. My actual name is Evil-Truus-chan-that-hates-sugar-an-is-all-around-evil, but that was too long, so…it’s Evil Truus. I come from the Negative planet Ty Kamara.

A: Negative planet Ty Kamara?

ET: It’s the opposite of the Positive planet Ty Kamara. In this story- well, I can’t tell you, I’d ruin it!

A: And we don’t want that! Now, what was the whole point of putting you in this story?

ET: Larxene-or do you call her GD?- put me in to get revenge on Truus for not finishing her secret santa fic. So she tied and gagged the REAL Truus and stuck me in the story so no one would realize I was missing. Of course, she didn’t count on me being dressed all in black.

A: She’s not still holding a grudge against Truus?

ET: No, she’s willing to compromise. Someday.

A: Okay, next: At what point in time is Truus going to be untied and un-gagged?

ET: Never, if I have my way. I tried to convince GD to leave her like that, but *puts on squeaky voice* ‘Truus and I are working on another fic! I can’t starve her!’*normal voice* Idiots.

A: Well, she has a good point!

ET: They don’t call me ‘Evil’ for any reason, you know.

A: You don’t really seem evil.

ET: Wanna bet? *pulls out chainsaw*

A: Oops. AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
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And that, my friends, is why you don’t mess with Evil Truus. :lol:

Okay, now you can review!






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Lonnie-chan! TT_____TT You betrayed me ... Alpha Test-sama! Help me, help me! ;_;

[Is Reiven ^^;;]
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Funny chapter! New mods to torture the members? This is going to hurt... xD
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XD Pure insanity! A good reason to like it if you ask me!

Wow, Alpha Test gets a part? Nice XD
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Hey. I didn't know you guys were going to like it THIS much...

Preview:

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"Oh my god, is that who I think it is?"*** asked, holding an axe above ******.

****** smiled dreamily.  "I think it is..."

"OH MY GOD, HE'S SOOO DREAMY!" They shouted at the same time.


*'s inditcate names you are not to know yet. If you've been paying attention, you already know who they are. ^_^


EDIT: Okay, Here's chapter 5:


Chapter 5


“Umm…Evil Truus? What is that?” Bunny-Chan asked, staring at the hamster wide-eyed.

Evil Truus smirked…well, evilly. “Oh, you mean Willfred? He’s Evan’s little creation. A nice little virus that is out to tickle members of TK to death. Very nice touch to the scenery, don’t you think? Hey, don’t even think about it.”

BC, who was trying to sneak off, stopped suddenly.

“…”

“…”

{…}

“Hey, is Willfred thinking?”

“I think so! Why else would GD put that up!”

“Probably to confuse us. Wanna go to Burger King?”

“Sure! Two all-beef patties, special sauce, lettuce, cheese-“

“Onions, pickles on a-HEY! Don’t distract me! Willfred! Get her!”

Bunny-Chan fainted.

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“Wh-Where am I?” BC said, trying to sit up.

“Someplace safe.”

“Hey, AT, we found some more members in need of help.”

“On my way.”

It was then that BC got a look at the person beside her. Her jaw dropped.

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“No! Don’t! Please!” Nicky pleaded.

“That’s what you get when you put me on a sugar high! MUHHAHAHAHAHA!”

I must stay silent before I too, lose my sanity.Hakura thought.

Drip. Drip. Drip.

Too late.

“Help! Somebody help us! I don’t want to go senile! I’m still young!” she shouted, eyes as wide a quarters.

“No one can hear you, doll.” Ethe pointed out.

“And you’re ours for the rest of the month.” Kai-V added.

Suddenly, a mouse popped up from out of nowhere. The two (now almost insane) members disappeared in a puff of smoke.

Kai-V and Ethe looked at each other.

“S****!” Kai-V swore. “That was enough to put me off that sugar-high.”

“Where did he come from? Elisa banished him!” Ethe exclaimed.

“I don’t know. We HAVE to tell her…”

“Tell me what?”

Elisa appeared out of nowhere, dragging the icicles of GD and Unigirl.

“Alpha Test is out of banishment from the Netherworld.” Ethe said solemnly.

Elisa’s jaw dropped. “W-what? How?”

“No idea.”

“I know, I know, and I’ll never te-ell!” Evil Truus exclaimed, walking up the path. Elisa looked at her.

“Yes, you will, or you’ll never see negative Ty Kamara again.

ET’s eyes went wide. “You wouldn’t! I mean, this place is to goody-goody! Where I come from, SPAM is a delicacy! And everyone is evil! The total opposite of this place!”

“Then you’ll tell us what you know.”

ET stayed silent for a minute.

“Fine. When you banished Alpha Test to the Netherworld, you opened a ton of portals. When I came through, Alpha Test followed.”

“And you didn’t tell us this because?...” Kai-V asked.

“How was I supposed to know he was evil?”

Kai-V banged her head against a wall.

“Well, anyway, He’s going to try to overthrow you and take over TK.”

Elisa’s eyes went wide. “And if he does that-“

Evil Truus nodded. “TK is a toaster pastry.”

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“Lonnie! No! Please! Don’t! Lonnie-Chan, we’re the TTwins, remember?”

“So? I think it’s time for a solo act!”

“Lonnie! No!”

“Don’t worry, Reiven, I’ll save you!” a voice shouted. It was then that a guy stepped out of the woods.

“Is that who I think it is?” CRL asked Reiven, dropping the axe she was holding on Reiven’s foot.

“OW! Yes, I think it is…”

CRL looked at Reiven. “Oh my god, it’s Alpha Test!”

“HE’S SOOOO DREAMY!” They shouted at the same time.

And, of course, he was. When Elisa, Ice, and Leina had created him, there was a sore abundance of guys on TK. Like, zero. So, they made Alpha Test a really hot moderator. And they did a very good job. Just imagine the hottest guy you can think of, and then multiply by 10. Yep, REALLY hot. Yes, are rulers did do a good job… Too bad he’s 100% evil…Hey! Stop distracting me!

Anyway, Alpha Test leaned against a tree. Reiven fell to the ground in a faint. Lonnie, however, knew better. Becoming a moderator had given her lots of knowledge, and she knew AT was evil. She may think he was hot, but geese, a girl does have her limits!

“Don’t even think about it.”

“Think about what?”

“Touch Reiven and you die.”

“Okay.”

Before CRL could react, AT darted forward, grabbed Reiven and disappeared in a puff of smoke.

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“Alright, Larxene, I’m sick of this. YOU interrogate her.” Raging Phoenix Rising said, throwing GD on the floor in front of her.

“You know, I do have to figure out a way to write Alpha…AHHH! W-Where’d you come from?”

“I AM you, you twerp. I am your inner demon. My shadow lingers…”

“I must be playing too much Kingdom Hearts. Okay, first things first.” Larxene remarked as the mod come into the room. “Why are you here?”

“Why do you want to know?”

“What does Alpha Test want with Reiven?” CRL asked desperately. The mascara runs down her cheeks and Ethe’s arm around her in a comforting gesture was enough to show she had been crying.

“Like I would tell YOU.”

“Where did Alpha Test take the members?”

“Sorry, your call cannot be completed as dialed. Please hang up and try your call again, or press 1 for more options.”

“Grr… THAT’S IT!” Kai-V shouted, then strode over to GD, grabbed her by the throat, and slammed her against the wall. Everyone backed off against the opposite wall, sweat dropping. “Now, where did you come from?”

“L-arxene. She may have changed, but I’m still there… would you let me go, please?”

“No. What does Alpha Test want with Reiven?”

“He knows that Reiven would make a good queen when he is King of TK.”

CRL fainted.

“And he’s turning the members against us to take over TK, I presume?

“Exactly.”

Kai-V opened her mouth to say something else, but GD disappeared in a puff of smoke.

“Alright, I’m sick of this. No more Ms. Nice moderator.” Kai-V turned around. “Get the admin down here. Security on full lockdown- nothing in, nothing out except for Ice, Leina and Elisa. Get Willfred, the refrigerators, chairs, pizza, and whatever else is out there down here as guards. And for god’s sake, will someone PLEASE untie Truus?”

No one was about to argue with that moderator.

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“So, you’re going to help us take over TK?” nessi asked Alpha Test skeptically.

“Yep.”

“Man, I do NOT like this guy.” Andy said in an undertone to Kira.

“I agree. He’s stealing all the girls!”

“I’m in!” a random person shouted.

“Me too!”

“Don’t forget me!”

Pretty soon, all the girls were in and clamoring with ideas as to how to overthrow the admin. All but one…

“What about you, Reiven? You’d make an excellent queen…”

Reiven thought for a moment.

“What’s in it for me?”

“Admin torture?”

“Nah. I want Lonnie.”

“Anything you want, you get.”


Reiven smiled. “Yeah! I get Lonnie, I get Lonnie…”

Alpha Test rolled his eyes to the ceiling. Maybe I should have chosen someone else…“Alright. Here’s our first plan of action…”

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“Ne-Ne-Neesan! I’m so s-s-s-sorry! Come back!” Lonnie bawled her eyes out in the control room, while Ethe and the now untied Truus tried to comfort her.

“It’s okay, Lonnie, she’ll be back…”

“Don’t cry…”

Eventually, the dubbed her a ‘lost cause’ and talked to each other over her head.

“I’ve never seen Kai-V act like that.” Ethe remarked. “She may be seen and not heard, but she did teach us an important lesson. If only I knew what it was…”

“That the violent turn violent when they need to protect their planet?”

“You know, Truus, you could be right. I guess we’ll never know…”

Lonnie stooped crying and looked up at the two of them. “I miss Neesan.”

“We do too, hon. Except, we’re not her twins. So you probably miss her more.”

“But now she’s going to be queen!”

“It’s okay, Lonnie, she’ll come to her senses and realize that Alpha Test is a jerk.” Truus said, hugging her.

“Agreed.” Ethe said, hugging Lonnie and Truus.

The three of them- Truus, Ethe, and Lonnie- looked at the each other, knowing the others would always be there for them, knowing they could count on each other, that they were on the same side. Words cannot describe the feeling going through the room, the bond that only trying to save your planet from an Evil Moderator and someone’s evil sister can forge. So I, Larxene, am going to leave this chapter off here, with warm fuzzies and happiness, and the calm before the storm.

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*sniff* my god, I’ve made myself cry…

okay, next chapter:

~Our rulers and tow member’s happiness and fuzzies disappear when then members attack. Will our rulers be able to save the future of TK? Tune in to find out!

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Alpha Test taking over the wolrd? xD Good chap, Update soon!^^
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AYIII!! Finally found it!! ^-^ OMG!! Its hilarious!! xD I laughed my ass off!!

....But the part of Lonnie and Rei-chan reminded me of me and Neechan ;_; It happened to us once, when we couldn't talk to each other for nearly a whole month and yesh, it can make a person cry coz you did to me!! T.T

But yesh... UPDATE SOON!! ^____^ You're up to the angst and comedy!!
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