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| The Tk Private Island With A Beach Vacation!; 5/6::Chapter 7: The rise of Rieven | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Dec 28 2004, 06:49 PM (571 Views) | |
| Larxene | Dec 28 2004, 06:49 PM Post #1 |
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Well, as promised, I will put up the first chapter of the sequal to 'The TK Apartment Building Complex' even though I have to watch foamy or I might just pass out. And you better read the last chapter of the previous story, unless you want to be totally confused. So, here we go... THE TK BEACH VACATION Chapter 1 Yes, all of Ty Kamara was having a wonderful day. Hot sand, good temperature, admins and mods being forced to do all members bidding. Yes, everyone was having fun. EXCEPT for a pretty 14-year old girl who was slaving away in a cabin, writing how the lovely beach vacation went. This girls name was Goddess_of_Death, or GD. Now, GD was very annoyed at the fact everyone was having fun while she wrote about how great a time they were having. So, she called upon her assistant. This assistant was an evil cat named Yowser. Now, the only reason the TKers were having fun was because GD had torn out the last parts of the sentence that stated about the 'during one month'. So, GD gave the remaining page th her assistant, with strict orders to get it to any admin in ONE PIECE. So, as wanted, Yowser got the piece of paper to Ice, then ran back to the cabin. Ice read the paper, looked down at her salmon costume she was being forced to wear, then took it off and walked over to Elisa. "Hey, look at this.." Ice said, then shoved the paper under Elisa's nose. Elisa read it, then looked up at Ice. "Oh, this is gonna be good...." "But we have to find the member that sent it to us." Ice pointed out. "We'll figure it out."Elisa said, smiling and tucking the paper into the pocket of her waitress costume. "Hey, waitress, get me a soda!"Haruna shouted to Elisa. Elisa glared. "Don't worry about it." Ice said, then gave Haruna a soda before Elisa did a complete 360 and turned into a dragon. Meanwhile, GD sat in a cabin, laughing her head off. "Seriosly, yowser, this is MY island that is SO cursed to turn everyone except myself into there total opposites..." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Admin/Mod handbook continuation...."...if the mods and admins are forced to do totally stupid things and then get ahold of this paper with it ripped out, and can locate whoever gave it to them, they may totrture the members for the rest of the duration of the month." well???? Sorry, this is a rough draft, and i have writers block, so that's why it's short. |
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| nessi | Dec 28 2004, 07:02 PM Post #2 |
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So that was the continuation of that phrase! XD Looks good.^^ Update soon! |
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| Seraphiel | Dec 28 2004, 07:02 PM Post #3 |
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Happy Go Lucky Me
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I honestly nearly spat a mouthful of cherryade out when I saw that title >_<; *made the TK beach trip story, but never finished it XD* Good start. |
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| Sarutobi Sasuke | Dec 28 2004, 07:04 PM Post #4 |
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Very lovely fic. I wish to read more in the near future. With your fic, you made New Year (and summer with the beach part) extra happy
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| Larxene | Dec 28 2004, 07:04 PM Post #5 |
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*yelps* you're kidding, right??? I better change the title.... I don't want to be up all night feeling guilty... swy. *Flinches* |
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| Nicky | Dec 28 2004, 11:28 PM Post #6 |
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Great story GD, I can tell this will be good ^.^ |
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| Kurisutaru | Dec 29 2004, 12:05 AM Post #7 |
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| Silence |
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Ooh... Member torture! This will be good... you're witty, GD! Continue soon! *Takes out flute and threatens Writer's Block with it* |
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| Elisa | Dec 29 2004, 12:08 AM Post #8 |
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You will all suffer the wrath of the admin! Mwahahaha! Er... I mean... Good story! I looks forward to seeing some more. *skips away in maids outfit*
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| Haruka | Dec 29 2004, 03:21 AM Post #9 |
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melt away~
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Awesome start! ^^" Update soon! Very good fic by the way! |
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| Umi-chii | Dec 29 2004, 05:08 AM Post #10 |
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I shall now be like Sieg *enters WTF Moment*
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O.O No wonder!! So that was the continuation! XD! kewlies!! ^-^ A sequel!! I'm looking for this!! (with a poporn on hand too! ^.^) Update soon!! |
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| Mizuka | Dec 29 2004, 10:10 AM Post #11 |
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[ .REDEMPTION. ]
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Good start! Please continute!! |
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| Pyroclasm | Dec 29 2004, 10:12 AM Post #12 |
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INDIGNATION
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Nice sequel G_D!! youre really good at this!! i'll bewaitng for the next installment^^ |
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| Truus | Dec 30 2004, 08:26 PM Post #13 |
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Sugar-High
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Funny. xD Can't wait for more chapters! ^^ (Argh... I still haven't finished that fic of yours... --;; Sowwy.)
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| Larxene | Mar 14 2005, 05:43 PM Post #14 |
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Hi people! Sorry I didn’t write in awhile…. I’ve been busy. Anywho, here it is. Chapter 2 Diary of Larxene, day 5 of beach vacation. Dear Diary, Yep, today is the day of suffering. All will suffer. They THINK they’re having a beach vacation… Just wait. “AHHHHHHHH!!!!!” the scream of Truus was heard from one side of the island to the other. People ran out of their cabins and to Truus’s, only to find her not there. “What happened?” “Where is she?” “Who screamed?” “We have to find her!!!” No one noticed a small kitten slink around a corner of Truus’s cabin… 5 Hours later… “Okay? Did anyone make any headway?” Haruna, the head of the search party, shouted. Everyone shook his or her heads. Haruna growled under her breath. “People, we NEED TO FIND HER!!” No sooner did she say the words than a certain sugar-high freak said “Find who?” Everyone turned around. “Truus?” Cagalli Athha asked, looking at her with a peculiar look on her face. “One and only.” “Where were you?” nessi asked tentivly. If you’re wondering why something isn’t quite right, here’s why. Truus was wearing total black instead of her usual pink. Fishnet stockings, a short skirt, a black halter-top and boots that went up to her knees completed the outfit. (No, Truus is NOT supposed to resemble anything except an experiment gone wrong. Don’t you dare flame me.)? Yep, something was definatly wrong. So, night comes. Crickets chirp, grass is green, everyone’s asleep, Truus is tied up in a closet… Whoah. Hold up…. A shadow slipped into the closet (which was a big one) and un-gagged Truus, who glared. “You’ll never get away with it, Larxene.” She hissed through clenched teeth. “ I beg to differ, Truus-chan. I already did.” “They’ll figure it out. They’ll come to rescue me, Elisa, Ethe, Ice, Leina-“ “Yeah, right. They’re on the island….but in here. No one will look for you until It’s to late. ANY of you.” “YOU EVIL BITC-“ “Now, Elisa, that’s not proper admin language, is it?” Larxene said, turning her attentuion to the admin that was tied up in a corner. “You should watch you’re mouth, I have more sleeping gas where that came from. And I don’t think you want to break out in hives again, do you?” Elisa stayed silent. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ man, my clone is evil…. that was short. oh well. well? reviewness! |
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| nessi | Mar 14 2005, 10:34 PM Post #15 |
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Coolies.^^ Evil Larxene... *tries to remember the first fic* I thought most of us were dead. o.O; Update soon!^^ |
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