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| Akai Yume (red Dream); UPDATED JUNE 17TH | |
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| King of Darkness | Jan 25 2005, 03:50 PM Post #46 |
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Keep it up. It's getting more and more interesting each time ^^ |
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| Sinia | Jan 28 2005, 08:11 PM Post #47 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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HOT TOPIC NOW! HOOT! |
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| lyrikkal | Jan 28 2005, 09:14 PM Post #48 |
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return those bitter days
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xD Congrats! And keep on writing! |
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| Sinia | Feb 4 2005, 01:18 PM Post #49 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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Sorry, it's been awhile and my birthday just passed. XD A whole year older. I'll put up the bext chapter soon, I promise. |
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| arndisb | Feb 5 2005, 07:15 PM Post #50 |
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The most powerful sorceress there ever was
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Just have to say this...Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!! |
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| Sinia | Feb 8 2005, 09:52 PM Post #51 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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Sorry it took me so long. I just discovered yesterday the reason I was so sick was because I have bronchitis.... ==U. Evil, horrible allergies and what not. Anywho, this is one of my favorite chapters! ^^ Hope you like! Tadaima ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Akira-Ri and Mr. Ishiyama were only gone for about twenty minutes. Before he went, he greatly apologized again for the inconveniance. Ryou sighed. "I am so sorry old friend. Please--" "Come now! Your daughters are more importanat than a little game. Go. Make sure she is alright..." Mr. Dickenson smiled. "Arigato-nasai...." The dark-haired man smiled and left with Akira-Ri. When they returned, Ryou was smiling. "She's fine. Just some bruised muscle tissue. Though, the doctor did say for her to take it easy." A warning glance was shot at the girl. "I'll stay off my feet. Which is bad for Masha. She'll have to be my slave..." The girl smiled affectoinately at her father, and sat next to the ice-blue haired girl that was her sister. "All right then. Let's get back home and get you in bed," He pointed at Akira-Ri, "And back to my discovery." He turned to Mr. Dickenson. Ryou started the bus and they were off to the Ishiyama estate. The drive seemed to take lesser time with the new arrivals. "Akira-Ri. You look familiar to me. Have we met before?" Hiromi wanted to find if this was, infact, Nakira. The raven-haired tenn looked up and her eyebrows forked down. "No; I don't think I have. Sorry." "Okay. I thought you looked like someone I knew." Hiromi smiled and sat next to the two. Masha reached out a hand. "I'm Masha, and you already know the trouble-maker, Akira-Ri. And the rest of you are?" Her lavender eyes looked around at the new faces. "Oh! I forgot your meeting us for the first time. I'm Hiromi. That's Kai, Rei, Yuriy, Mariah, Max, Emily, Daichi, and Tyson." The girl smiled. As each name was said, the girls looked around to find each person. They seemed lost in thought. "Home!" All of them looked up as Ryou stopped the bus and stood up. "Welcome home my musume." Both of the girls stood and got off the bus as fast as possible. "They do so adore being home....." Mr. Ishiyama strode down the steps followed by the others. When they entered the large home, the girls and their bags were nowhere to be seen. The clock chimed six p.m., making a few of the children jump from the sudden noise. "Maybe dinner first?" The younger man headed turned to look at them. "Please?!" Tyson was drooling. "I'm so hungry!" "Stop that! You're embarrassing us!" Hiromi whacked Tyson over the head. Ryou chuckled. "It's quite alright. Make yourselves at home, and feel free to wonder around. Mr. Dickenson, I wouldn't mind some company while I cook, care to join me?" "Certainly Ryou." Mr. Dickenson followed Mr. Ishiyama's lead into the kitchen. As though on cue of her father's leave, Masha slid down the rail and landed on her feet. "So, Tou-san making dinner?" She inquired. "Yeah." Tyson drooled once again. "Ummm, just a warning. Unless you want a flood, don't mention food to Tyson." Max joked. Masha smiled and gave a small chuckle. "Thanks. Come on, we can chill in the living room." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry for the shortness. I am super tired, cause I'm taking this pill called tussel. It makes me so friggin sleepy! Sayonara, all my fans! |
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| nessi | Feb 9 2005, 12:30 AM Post #52 |
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Don't worry about shortness. It is good.^^ But that is Nakira...How can they not be sure? Update soon!^^ |
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| Nyassa Kai's Clone | Feb 9 2005, 12:35 AM Post #53 |
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Azarath's Prime
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Cool. I don't have much time to check this thing out, but because you've been so nice to me in the RPG and the fuss I've made over it I figured it was only polite. |
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| Sinia | Feb 9 2005, 02:10 AM Post #54 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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Thanks. And it may or may not be Nakira...... I ain't saying. Only time will tell. |
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| crisia | Feb 9 2005, 02:55 PM Post #55 |
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Lieutenant
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i like it^^ it's getting interesting xD |
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| Sinia | Feb 13 2005, 01:14 AM Post #56 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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Thanks. The shortness is blamed on my being unwell. -coughs and weezes- I have bronchitis, don't know what it is.. google it. Anywho, thanks alot again. You all rock! |
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| Airo | Feb 13 2005, 05:10 AM Post #57 |
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Elite
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That's an amazing fanfic. I want to read more
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| Sinia | Feb 21 2005, 03:18 PM Post #58 |
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I can save the Universe with a kettle and some string, and look
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Anywho, short chapter... Sorry! Tou-san ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Akira-Ri came down a few minutes later. "Masha, can you watch Mina?" A small, black kitten was held in the girl's gentle hands. She sat next to Kai on the couch, the kitten being then held in her lap. "I hurt and need a soothing bath.." "I'm entertaining everyone..." Masha blinked. Akira's pretty eyes bore into her sister's. "Oh..." Mina had crawled of Akira's lap and into Kai's. She rubbed gaianst his hands and purred. The slate haired teen scratched one of her soft, little ears. Akira-Ri looked at him. "Kai, could you..?" With an absent wave of the hand, the girl smiled. "Thanks...." She left and headed upstairs. The hot water soothed the girl's aching body. Her soaked, raven hair clung to her skin. Akira-Ri sighed. "This feels so good...." A scratch at the door told her Dimitri and Dorian wanted to come in. "In a few my puppies...." She called to them softly. Footsteps on the stairs signaled Akira was done her bath. Two black dogs followed her. Masha smiled. "Here Dorian! Here Dimitri!" The big dogs bounded over to her, whimpering in happiness. Akira-Ri sat down next to Kai and tok Mina. "Thanks Kai... I had no clue you liked cats." He said nothing. A small sigh and she quickly braided her red-black hair. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry again! |
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| crisia | Feb 21 2005, 05:29 PM Post #59 |
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yay! you updated^^ it's always getting greater and greater =3 i really like it^^ keep on writing!
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| King of Darkness | Feb 21 2005, 09:03 PM Post #60 |
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Seems ok, though short. Not so focused on the main story, but it covers some sides and little details about those characters. Maybe you could put more chapters together when they're smaller. I'll be looking foward for the next chapter ^^ |
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