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Akai Yume (red Dream); UPDATED JUNE 17TH
Topic Started: Dec 25 2004, 04:11 AM (1,186 Views)
Sinia
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Thank you Flame! Someone who appreciates it the wat it is! :: quick hug :: Thank Kami (God) that someone likes it the way it is!..... Anywho, thank you for such great comments!
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Nakira,Dec 27 2004
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Thank you Flame! Someone who appreciates it the wat it is! :: quick hug :: Thank Kami (God) that someone likes it the way it is!..... Anywho, thank you for such great comments!

a good writer accepts critical words about his story or fic he / she wrote...
so why won't you?
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Sinia
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Its not that i wont, but rather i like when someone likes the original. So they thought both ideas were and are good...... or am i confusing myself. Well, anywho its not that i wont. i do, but sometimes i get mood swings.
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Nakira,Dec 28 2004
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Its not that i wont, but rather i like when someone likes the original. So they thought both ideas were and are good...... or am i confusing myself. Well, anywho its not that i wont. i do, but sometimes i get mood swings.

it's okay ^_^
i know what ya mean and i still think it's a good fic
so keep on writing and don't let critic take you down! ;) :)
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Thanks! It means alot to me!
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Excellent Fanfic. Keep it up, Nakira.
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Sinia
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Thank you, I wanna get one more post before putting up the next chapter if no one minds. if i dont get one by tomorrow night, I'll post it the day after tomorrw! (thursday i think? O_O)
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I didn't mean I didn't like it. I think it is good.^^ My other post just had some sugestions, some constructive criticism. Don't consider it as a flame. ^.~ I like your fic.^^
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NO! Mom deleted my files with my story! GAH! I have to rewrite Chapter 3 from memory!
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That's bad. T.T Happened something similar to me once, but it was the comp that froze. <.<
I hope it doesn't take long.^^ It wasn't a very big chapter, was it? <.<
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I'm back, suckers! ;D
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I LOVE IT! :wub: :lol: :D :P :bounce: :laugh: :flirt: :hug: :bye: :bow: :rolleyes: B)
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why, fank wu!
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This fic was so cool....couldn't take my eyes of it.......keep up the great work... :hug: :hug: :hug:
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Chapter Three. Sorry it took forever! ~^^~ Okay. This chapter is entitled..... Yume.

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The other's night were peaceful, whereas Akira's dreams stirred her troubled mind farther.


A girl sat silently on the grass as the sun set into evening.

"DIE!" The sound of a sword being unsheathed was heard and the girl acted quickly. She stood; her body turning around as he attacker charged.

"If I must I shall drag you to Hell with me!" She called to him as she side stepped his attack.

"Then so be it!" He snapped. The warrior sheathed his sword, fangs and claws at the ready to attack her. He smirked, as though a snake stumbling upon a paralysed rabbit.

"Come, earth children!" He called. The earth began to shake and rumbled; beings bagan to form themselves from the Earth's foliage and soil.

"What?" She said shocked. Very few of their kind had ever been able to make such minions at their will.

"Daichian! This is not a fair fight!" She called to the Dragon based warrior.

"You are afriad." He said with a smirk.

She shut her mouth. She was a little afriad, but who couldn't be when you stood no chance against such enemies?

"Go!" Said Daichian innocently as he raised his palm and the earth children attacked her. She had brought no weapon, exzpecting to be safe and away from danger.

'How could I be so stupid?' She though as she took a blow in the stomach. It was strong enough to have her fall to the groud and cough blood into her hands.

'Do want you want with her!' He said, his eyes red with blood lust.

"No." She whispered softly as she was pummeled.

"STAND DOWN!" A familiar voice called.

Her body was too weak, and she couldn't open her eyes. But she did hear the fight. It sounded brutal and harsh. And then, it was over.

"Ki-chan." Her old friend said, speaking her pet name softly. She felt the familiar strong arms pick her up and carry her away.

"Unh, I'm sorry to have caused trouble. I didn't bring a weapon, I thought I was-" She broke off as he touched her lips with his finger, telling her to save her strenght. She opened her eyes slowly and saw her savior.


He looked like Kai, and then the girl.... It was herself. The one who attacked them, he was..... Daichi? Akira sat up quickly in bed, panting.

"What... what was that?" She wondered.

She was glad tha she stirred noone. "Calm done, only a dream. Go pack to sleep." She lay down and tried to resume sleep Within an hour, she wsa again sleeping peacully.

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Okays, this is what i could remember from chapter three! ^^ sorry if it seems short!
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Woa...cool...it's even better........keep up that awesome work...
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