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Brotherly Healing; Beyblade fic
Topic Started: Nov 14 2004, 11:42 PM (239 Views)
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I don't own anything beyblade. Slight AU.

Brotherly healing

Four of the five Bladebreakers stared in amazement at the scene. They were at Tyson’s family dojo and for the first time the place was actually clean! ‘Tyson?’ Max called, looking for his best friend. Tyson appeared looking worn out. ‘Oh, hey guys!’ ‘What’s going on here?’ Ray asked.

Tyson grinned. ‘Oh nothing.’ ‘You expect us to believe that?’ He laughed. ‘Okay, okay. Grandpa and me were cleaning this place up because tomorrow two people from that mental asylum are coming. They’re coming to decide once and for all if they can allow Hitoshi to stay here.’

His words brought confusion. ‘Who’s Hitoshi?’ Kai asked. ‘My older brother.’ Tyson replied with a grin. There was shocked silence. ’You have a brother?! How come you never told us?’ Kenny gasped. Tyson looked sheepish. ’You never asked me.’

Kai shook his head then frowned. ’Okay, so why’s he at the mental asylum?’ The others nodded, wondering the same thing. ’I can answer that a lot better then little dude can.’ Grandpa announced, as he walked in. ’Tyson will you go make sure Hitoshi’s room is alright?’ Tyson nodded then vanished.

Once he was gone, Grandpa turned to the others. ’You remember Tyson’s dad from Russia right?’ They nodded. ’Well, truth is, he isn’t Tyson and Hitoshi’s real father. He’s just their uncle.’ Once again there was shocked silence. Grandpa sighed then continued. ’Their mother died shortly after Tyson was born. Their father, my younger son, became isolated. It became the usual story. The father gets drunk, then beats up his kids. Only, Hitoshi refused to let any harm come to Tyson. So he took the entire punishing. What Hitoshi did, saved Tyson, and became Hitoshi‘s undoing.

‘When Hitoshi was ten, little dude was four or five, police arrested Kenneth. It was arranged for me and their uncle to be their guardians. But, two days after Kenneth was proved guilty… Hitoshi just disappeared. We had police units all over on it, but everything failed. Seven years passed until an officer discovered Hitoshi in a mentally unstable condition. That was four years ago. He’s been at the asylum since.’

Grandpa sighed again and appeared to be blinking back tears. The Blade breakers were shocked. Who knew Tyson had such a past? Kenny spoke up first. ‘I don’t get it. Was it the constant beatings that unhinged Hitoshi, or the seven years in who-knows-where? Or both?’ ‘Even the people at the asylum aren’t fully sure. They think the beatings were the main cause but they have no way of being sure. Hitoshi won’t talk about those years he was missing.’
Tyson then came back. ‘Everything is a-okay!’ Grandpa smiled softly. ‘Good. So I guess all we can do now is wait for tomorrow to find out for sure if Hitoshi can come stay here.’

(The next day)

‘Wahoo!’ Tyson cheered as he nearly body checked Max. ‘Hitoshi can come, he can come! They’ll bring him here tonight!’ Max grinned as did most of the others. ‘Hey that’s great! Maybe we’ll get to meet him?’

Tyson paused. ‘I’m not sure. The doctor people said to try and get him used to being with people again before letting him near more then two or so.’ ‘Oh, well that’s okay. We can wait.’ Max said, understanding. Tyson looked relieved. ‘Thanks for understanding.’ Max smiled and nodded.

‘So he’ll be here tonight?’ Ray asked. ‘Yup. I can’t wait! I got to see him at any time I wanted, within reason, at the asylum but there was always that glass thing between us. Same with Grandpa. And Dad said he will be coming home in a few days.’

So what do you think? Please tell me. :nod:
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:mellow: Hitosho?! In mental asylum?!?! er... very... um... random.... O_O but I like it!! ^^ update please!!
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Yeah, it is rather random isn't it? Poor Hitoshi. Don't worry I'll update soon. I was working on it just a few minutes ago. I got the idea from a story I read in fanfiction.net only it was Tyson who was in the mental asylum. And Hitoshi was the one who put him there.

So yeah, I'll update soon, and hopefully by then I'll have more comments. R and R people! Any comment. If you leave helpful advice, I will happily pay attention.

Edit: Since no one is posting I'll add more now. Please post! :(

That night Grandpa and Tyson waited in silence. Max was at home, as was Kai, Kenny and Ray was chilling with Max. When 8:45 came, they heard the sound of a car door opening and closing. Grandpa had to keep Tyson from dashing out to meet them. Someone knocked at the door and he went to answer it, dogged closely by Tyson.

Two people were there. One, was female and properly dressed. The other, was a man in his early twenties. His light blue hair fell past his shoulders, loose. His expression was emotionless. ‘Hitoshi!’ Tyson promptly hugged the man. A action that caused some kind of emotion to pass briefly through his face.

’It’s great to have you back. I missed you Hitoshi. A lot. Look!’ He pulled off his cap and showed it to the man. ’I kept that hat you gave me!’ The lady smiled and decided she could leave after leaving last minute advice. Grandpa picked up Hitoshi’s few belongings and brought them inside, while Tyson started showing Hitoshi where everything was.

Sitting down on his new bed Hitoshi examined the room closely. It was different from the one he shared with Tyson when they were still with their parents. And way different from the one in the asylum. Which was understandable. He glanced at Tyson who had followed him.

Tyson curled up beside his brother. ‘Hitoshi?’ He glanced at the younger male. ‘I really am glad you can live with us.’ Hitoshi remained silent. Tyson reached for his hand and squeezed gently. ‘You looked after me when we were kids. Now, it’s my turn to look after you.’

(Hitoshi’s POV)

‘You looked after me when we were kids. Now, it’s my turn to look after you.’ I tilt my head when I hear you say that, but don’t answer. I don’t know if I just don’t want to or I can’t. I overheard a doctor telling the man who calls himself my grandfather that he was worried I might be going mute. They thought I was asleep at the time.

But it’s true. The past year I stopped talking for the most part. I can still speak but I do so less and less. Who cares… Doesn’t matter. I find that hard to believe when I look down at the innocent soul beside me. Tyson…

You’ve fallen asleep. I can tell by the snores. Only then do I speak, softly least I wake you up. ‘Thank you… Chibi.’ I carefully pull you on to the bed and lay down beside you. Unaware of the presence watching me.

(Normal POV)

Grandpa smiled as he watched the scene. “Maybe I did the right thing after all, letting Hitoshi come here. After all, what better healing can anyone get but the healing from a brother?” He turned away and walked to his room, still smiling.

Tyson yawned as he opened his eyes and blinked. “This isn’t my room.” He looked around and spotted Hitoshi sleeping peacefully then he remembered. “Oh yeah! Hitoshi came home last night. I must have fallen asleep.” Careful not to disturb the older man Tyson slowly slide out of the bed and left the room.

He found Grandpa already up and training. ‘You’re up early little dude.’ He noted. ‘Guess I’m just too excited to sleep for the entire morning. With Hitoshi here now and everything.’ Grandpa nodded. Tyson was about to go look for breakfast when the old man spoke. ‘He’s changed from the person you used to idolize. But somewhere in him, there’s still that part of him. Hidden by the pain. I saw it last night.’

Tyson stared at him for a minute. ‘Bah, don’t listen to me. Get going.’

While eating breakfast, Tyson was delighted when Hitoshi walked in. His hair was still loose and messy. ‘Morning, Ren.’ He greeted his brother, by his nickname. Hitoshi blinked slightly confused. ‘Don’t you remember? I used to call you Ren when we were kids.’ The confused look passed away.

‘Want something to eat?’ Tyson inquired. Hitoshi thought for a minute and nodded. ‘Okay!’ Tyson declared. He didn’t seem to mind Hitoshi’s silence. He finished his breakfast then dashed off for the kitchen.


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Double post I know. I just thought I'd let you know that the story is likely to be a Hitoshi/Ray. Also, for anyone who is reading this, there will be a pratice battle between Tyson and Hitoshi. But I'll let you vote on who will win. So please vote so I can continue the story.
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very cool, i like the way you portray Hiro, it suits
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We left off when Tyson and Hitoshi were in the kitchen.

In a few minutes he (Tyson) had eggs and bacon cooking.

Hitoshi absently watched him bustle around. ‘Heh. Little dude’s sure got a lot of energy.’ A voice said behind him. He turned sharply to see Grandpa standing there watching Tyson. ‘He’s growing up. He isn’t the little boy you used to protect. Seems now the roles have been reversed.’ Hitoshi glanced back at Tyson. The old man had a point. Tyson was safe now. But what about him?

‘Aw. Come on Chief, it’s around here somewhere. I just gotta find it.’ Tyson whined. Kenny sighed. ‘Tyson this is the third time you lost Dragoon. It’s getting out of hand!’ Max chuckled. ‘Come on Kenny. You know Tyson will never change so why bother trying to make him?’

Suddenly something poked Tyson’s shoulder. ‘Huh?’ He turned to see Hitoshi standing. ‘Hitoshi! You came outside. What is it?’ Hitoshi held out his hand and Tyson glanced at it. ‘Hey! My beyblade! Thanks!’ He took it grinning. The other Bladebreakers just studied Hitoshi curiously.

‘So you’re Tyson’s older brother huh? I’m Max!’ Hitoshi glanced at him and nodded slightly after a minute. Then he drifted over to the dojo and sat down on the walkway. ‘Doesn’t talk much does he?’ Ray noted. Tyson nodded. ‘Grandpa told me that the doctor told him that he was worried Hitoshi was going mute. He still talks a little but very rarely.’

‘That’s sad. I hope he gets better.’ Max said. Tyson glanced at Hitoshi and suddenly frowned. ‘Hey Ray. Got a hairbrush I can borrow?’ Ray blinked and nodded. ‘Sure thing.’ He dug one out of his bag and handed it to Tyson. Who walked over and sat down beside Hitoshi.

Hitoshi turned his head and looked inquisitively at him. Tyson dug a hair band from his pocket, set it down for the moment, and reached out and gently began working out the tangles in Hitoshi’s hair. Ray smiled when he saw this as did Max. Kenny was too busy on his laptop to notice. The older man seemed surprised but relaxed and even seemed to be enjoying the attention.

Tyson also seemed to enjoy brushing his brother’s hair. He was extremely careful not to yank too hard when dealing with the tangles. Once done with the tangles, Tyson took the hair band and carefully pulled Hitoshi’s hair into a ponytail. ‘There. Now you don’t look like you just woke up.’

Max laughed when he said that. ‘Tyson that’s not nice! Even if it is true.’ Ray drifted over and leaned against the wall nearest Hitoshi. He examined Tyson’s brother closely. He’s pretty good looking. Ray blinked. Where did that thought come from?! I didn’t just think that Hitoshi was good looking did I? Oh crap I did! No, I can’t have a thing for him! He’s Tyson’s brother!

{Master Ray, what’s wrong?} Ray started only a little when he heard Driger in his head. [I think I might be crushing on Tyson’s older brother! And I just met him! Well, sort of. I haven’t introduced myself to him yet.] There was a pause as Driger thought. {What is so wrong about having feelings for another?} [I don’t know. It just took me by surprise. And maybe I’m worried how Tyson would react]

{He’s your friend. He may be a little worried that you might hurt his brother but he’ll probably understand.} Ray mentally relaxed. [Yeah, you’re right. Thanks for putting up with me.] {You’re welcome Master Ray}

Ray tuned back to reality in time to hear Tyson introduce the rest of the team to Hitoshi. He grinned and waved when Tyson pointed him out. ‘That’s Kenny at the laptop. We just call him Chief. That’s our team captain, Kai. He’s pretty anti-social. And of course Max, the hyper one.’ ‘Sugar!’ ‘See what I mean?’

A small smile tugged at Hitoshi’s lips. ‘Kind of like you when you were a kid.’ He said softly. Ray blinked. He had a nice voice. There was a hint of something in his voice though and Ray couldn’t tell what it was. Pain?

‘I was like that as a kid?’ Tyson asked. Hitoshi nodded. ‘Alright Tyson. Dragoon’s check-up is completed.’ Kenny called. ‘Awesome!’ Tyson hurried over and took his blade back. ‘Hey Ray, wanna battle?’ Ray nodded. ‘Sure thing.’

Hitoshi perked up and watched with interest. He once was a beyblader. He fingered his beyblade in his pocket. He hadn’t been allowed to have it on him in the asylum but when he was let out, it was returned to him. He had a bit-beast as well. Metal-Driger.

Well that's it for now. Remember about my last post and vote on who should win a beybattle Hitoshi or Tyson.
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I think it should be Hiro (or Hitoshi as he is to many).
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Since no one else is posting I'll let Hitoshi win since he is the only one someone voted for. Course, only one person voted. If you would rather have Tyson win then just exchange the name of the winner. It'll still be the same.

So we ended when Hitoshi was watching Ray and Tyson battle.

He suddenly was given a shock when two creatures emerged from Tyson and Ray’s beyblades. A dragon and a tiger. ‘Yeah! Go get them Driger!’ Ray yelled. ‘Counter Dragoon!’

Dragoon! He had heard of that bit-beast. So it had been given to Tyson. It was in good hands. But Driger… it made him think of his own bit-beast. Soon the match was over and both kids caught their blade. Hitoshi slowly drew out his and examined it. ‘Hey Hitoshi, what’cha got there?’ Tyson suddenly asked.

Hitoshi jerked and glanced at his brother, before showing him. ‘Whoa! Tripped out beyblade! Is it yours?’ Hitoshi nodded. ‘Cool! I suppose you haven’t been able to battle with it past couple of years though. Hey, do you wanna have a practice match? Get you back in shape?’ ‘Tyson isn’t it a little early to challenge him?’

However Hitoshi nodded agreement and stood up. ‘Sweet! Don’t worry. I’ll try to go easy on you.’ Hitoshi made a face at Tyson causing the younger one to laugh. ‘Or maybe I won’t.’

They both prepared to launch. ‘Ready? One. Two. Three. Let it rip!’ Both beyblades entered the dish and started circling each other. Kenny naturally was recording the data. ‘Go Dragoon! Attack!’ Hitoshi smirked as his beyblade easily dodged Tyson’s and countered. Ray blinked. For not having beybladed in years, Hitoshi was doing really good. Max and Kai seemed to think so too.

‘Come on.’ Tyson growled as his blade again failed to hit Hitoshi’s. Hitoshi laughed quietly. Tyson was still so impatient. Closing his eyes he focused on his beyblade. A long time ago he had learned how to control Metal-Driger with just his thoughts alone, instead of with words. Sure enough, even with his eyes closed, he knew what was happening in the dish. [Okay Metal-Driger. Time to give Tyson a run for his money.] He could almost hear the bit-beast agree.

Opening his eyes he smiled at the shocked look on Tyson’s face as his (Hitoshi) blade began increasing speed and started glowing. ‘W…what the?!’ The other kids watched in shock as the humanoid tiger bit-beast appeared. Ray stared in amazement at the creature. It was like his Driger yet unalike as well. [Metal-Driger, attack now!] ‘Dragoon!’

Once again the blue dragon appeared and sized up the strange bit-beast. ‘Galaxy storm!’ [Counter with Gatling Claw!] The two attacks clashed together causing a whirlwind to push Hitoshi and Tyson back a bit. When they glanced at the dish they saw only one beyblade still spinning.

Hitoshi’s. Tyson blinked and laughed good-naturedly. ‘Hey, excellent battle!’ The older man smiled and nodded agreement. He knelt down and picked up his beyblade, and Tyson’s. Ray was impressed. He had spent at least four years being unable to beyblade yet he still managed to beat Tyson.

“He has the good looks and skill.” Ray blinked then flushed slightly at that point. He really had to not think like that. If Tyson found out. Hell, if Hitoshi found out! Ray sighed. Why did being a teenager have to be so hard?

So remember to post. The more posts, the sooner I'll get the next bit up.
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Woah. Cool. Hey that grey haired dude is Tyson's Brother? AAAAAH WHERE HAVE I BEEN THIS PAST SEASON???
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Sorry about the major delay. I'll try to get back to writing this soon, for all those people who are reading and reviewing.
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