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Ty Kamara City: The Story.
Topic Started: Sep 3 2004, 01:00 PM (290 Views)
Reiven
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New story, since I've finished Invaders from Outer Ty Kamara ... ^^

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Ty Kamara City: The Story.

CRL and Reiven’s Day Out.

Part 1.

...^^...

“ –up to eighty percent discount on all items. So what are you waiting for? Come on down, now, before all stocks are sold out. And remember, here at Kawaii Ethe’s Super Fantastic, Uber Market, if you want nothing … we have it too–”

CRL flipped to another channel. She stopped suddenly at channel nine where they were airing an advertisement and listened intently to the hyper sounding sales guy.

Been through any hair-raising events lately? Is your dull colour and hairstyle coming between you and your partner? Or are you just having a bad hair day?

For those who have always dreamed of possessing the too-die-for hairstyle like Tala or maybe the Golden, Super-Saiyan-Jin ‘do like Vegeta or Goku. Ladies and gentlemen, your dream, may have just come true. Any hairstyle that is anime is now possible with PossiGel. Yes, PossiGel is the breakthrough result of our tireless effort in new age Hair Experiments.

So, Bed Hair, Beware!

This latest in hair care product is designed to rid you of any dull or faded colouring of your hair. It sharpens, brightens and gravity-defies any hair types of any people. Now available in Red, Pink, Green, Blue, Purple, Orange, Yellow, Grey, Lilac, Turquoise, Magenta and any colour you can possibly imagine.

PossiGel tickled your fancy? Then head down to Kawaii Ethe’s Super Fantastic, Uber Market. Products are on sale now for up to eighty percent discount. What are you waiting for? Come now before we’re sold out. I am Evan, your sales guy, signing off, but not before reminding you; PossiGel: Just ‘do it.

Money back guarantee.


Watching ...

‘This sound cool,’ CRL turned off the TV and walked to the phone. ‘I wonder if Neesan is free.’


Meanwhile …


“Argh!! I’m so bored!!” Reiven flopped herself onto the bed. “Imotou~” she pouted.

RingRing …

“I already told you! My Random Wall is not for sale, Truus-Eh? CRL-CHAN!!” she squealed. “Aha … aha …” she nodded feverently. “Waii!! Kawaii Ethe’s Super Fantastic Uber Market!! I’ve always wanted to go there … Okay then, I’ll meet you at the corner of Fun and Games at twenty seconds to three? … Great! See you there.” She hung up the phone and turned abruptly to get changed, but bumped her head against something and fell back, flat on her bums. “Oww … eh? Mom!! You left the Random Wall randomly around, again!

Elsewhere …

“Bwahahahahahahaha!!” A dark shadow cackled evilly from the darkened shadows of her hide out. “My ultimate dream of conquering the world will soon come to pass … then … people will finally realize that I am truly The Ultimate Ruler of the World!! Alexander the chump can kiss my cahoot when I’m through with my plan. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-”

“Truus-chan … shouldn’t you go open your shop now? It’s almost two o’clock.”

Interrupted, Truus glared through the closed door. “Ceh! Dare she interrupt me in the middle of my evil laugh? Humph!” she snubbed the door. “Where was I? Yeah … BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA,” she had her arms stretched wide by her sides, “BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA-choke-” she started coughing loudly and grabbed her throat in a suffocating mode. “I really should ease up on the evil laugh … it’s not healthy for my delicate throat …”

At this very moment …

“Great ad, Evan,” Sakuya walked over and patted him on the back.

“Thanks, Sakuya … I’m sure we’ll sell loads bottles of PossiGel today,” he grinned, “I mean how could they resist the charm of my … Charming Smile,” he flashed a toothy grin, and a sparkle appeared suddenly out of nowhere.

Andy walked over and whacked him upside the head. “I trademarked that Smile, Evan.” He shot him half-moon-eyes.

Evan just grinned. “Anyway, we should get back to work … people might start coming soon, and Ethe would have our heads if we were late. We are renting a space in her Uber Market.”

=^.^=

Two O’clock …

“Where is she?” CRL started pacing the street.

“Yoo-Hoo!”

She turned briskly to the voice of Reiven. “You’re late.”

“Yeah …” Reiven laughed nervously. “About that. You see … a black cat crossed my path and –”

“Okay, okay. Really, Neesan. You’ve been watching too much Kakashi.”

Reiven laughed, and they both started walking in the direction of the Ty Kamara Mega Mall.

It was about a fifteen-minute walk to the mall.

“Pretty uneventful walk, isn’t it?” CRL said suddenly when they were half way to the Mall.

“I guess … I mean we’re just-Oof!” she didn’t get to finish the sentence when a figure fell out of nowhere and landed right on top of her.

“Neesan! Are you-Oof!” CRL too received an unexpected burden dropped on her.

“Oww … hey … you two all right?” the unfamiliar figure asked to the two smushed girls.

“Of course … it’s like it’s a strange thing to happen when two figures suddenly fall right on top of you!” CRL shouted at the second figure, “and will you please get your sorry butt off of me?!”

“Yeah … sorry.” The two of them stood up and pulled their landing cushions up to their feet.

One of the guys poked the other. “I told you, Kira … just because we’re the Fallen Twins … doesn’t mean that we actually have to ‘fall’ per-say, down a five story building!!” he shouted.

“Okay, okay … that was a mistake, Neo … no need to bite my head off,” he looked regretful, “next time we’ll just do it off a two story build-Oww!” he rubbed his head from where Neo had smacked it.

“Serves you right … now c’mon!” he pulled his counterpart behind him, “PossiGel might be sold out of we wait here any longer.”

CRL and Reiven looked at their retreating forms with half-moon-eyes. “Morons!” They said simultaneously, and journeyed on their way towards their destination.

However …

If they had just waited a few minutes longer, they would have notice a good-looking, tall, long and blonde haired man step out of the shadows. His ears were slightly sharpened at the edge, quite like an elf, and he looked around, lost. “Where in the name of Lady Galadriel, am I?”

...^^...

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Sora

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Awesome story, Reiven! ^^ I enjoyed it muchly.
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Truus
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Ooooohhh~! I get to be the villain once again! *__*

*glomps* Awsome story! ^__^

Awww, I wanna know what happens next. ;__;
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Reiven
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Thanks a lot both ^^

You wanna know something, Truusy? As the story progresses ... you will succesfully - *Construction site sounds* - Doesn't that sound cool? ^^

More people will be in Part 2.
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Verena
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lol! That was funny! Continue! Continue!
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Sarutobi Sasuke
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Not bad -_- I have nothing else to say.
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Tva
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Woohoo Lovely and hilarious at the same time, I look forward to more. :nod:
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Elisa
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Amusing story as usual ^_~ I love the adverts! XD
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Seraphiel
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XDDD!
Everyone manages to make evan look ridiculous in some way XD
Yay! I got a line! XDD
Awesome-ness Nee-san!!!! ^^
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Yay! That was really funny. ^ ^;
And yeah, I got a line too! o.o;
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Punk
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if you'd like I'll be a Drunken Monkey or something?
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Ethe
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{clings to Kawaii Ethe's Market...thingy with a name too long to remember!}

MINE!

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I lurved it Reiven! Keep it up!
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shiroi-glitter
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Hehe.. you need to continue soon xD
So.. this is like.. the sequel, ne?
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:laugh:, that was awesome Reiven ^^, can't wait till the next chapter
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Good job Reiven.
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