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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 11 2004, 07:21 PM (2,615 Views) | |
| Truus | Jun 11 2004, 07:21 PM Post #1 |
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Sugar-High
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Yes, I was inspired by Ethe's Ty Kamara story, and therefore started writing my own. ^o^ I won't be asking information, I'm using the info I found in Ethe's topic... *snickers* And I'm just putting in random members... ^-^;; Hehehe, beware of OOC-ness.. Now, this story is based upon the events of the Ty Kamara disco topic, so it's quite obvious what the title is... XD The story I wrote for so far isn't that long, if I'm in the mood, I'll wite some more later! ^^;;; So, read and tell me what you think of it, please? Oh, one more thing, I'm VERY sorry if there are many spelling mistakes in this fic, I'm only learning English... ^.^;; Eh, beware of not much cursing? o_O =================================================== The Ty Kamara disco Every time something is created, people hope the best for it. Sometimes, it doesn't turn out to be that good and it all becomes a disaster. But on other times, it gets even better then people ever guessed it would be. Now, in the Ty Kamara kingdom, something new was created. A blessing for some, a horror for others. That certain thing was named........... The Ty Kamara disco... Dum-dum-dum! Revenge Neia, insane person of insanity had come up with the idea and with the help of some others, her plan became reality. All the Ty Kamara inhabitants had chosen AndY to be the offcial dj, a job that he happily accepted. And so, the disco was made and the date on which it would first open would be.... Friday the 13th, one o'clock in the morning.... On the grand opening, everyone, yes everyone had showed up and were waiting patiently in front of the doors, waiting for them to open. Well... Patiently... "Get out of my way!!" "I got here first!!!" "You did not!!!" "What? You calling me a liar?!" "In your dreams!!!" "I do not think of you in my dreams!!" With the exepction of CRL and Reiven, of course... "Feh! I only see you in my nightmares!" CRL yelled. "Oh, that hurted, you know? NOT!" Reiven shot back. Actully, CRL and Reiven were best buddies, they just liked to fight all the time... They always shared bishies with eachother and even called themselves 'Twin Sisters', but at moments like these, they were able to drink eachothers blood. Figure of speech, of course... Luckily, EvaN and a few others had managed to break them apart before they started fighting, a sight that they wouldn't want the younest Ty Kamarians to see. And then suddenly... The moment of truth... Flashly neon lights started to shine from the Ty Kamara disco. "Oh my god!" Rikku yelled and pointed at the entrance. "It's opening!" Shauna, the local Grim Reaper gasped. "I can't believe it!" "No, no..." Kalene Kon shaked her head. "Believe it or not, it's opening!" And the doors flew open... And everyone started to run inside, hoping to get in first... ...which resulted in a huge fight. "Out of my way!" Verena yelled and punched a random person in the face. Then, Ethe jumped from the nowhere and tackled Verena. "Shoo! I got here first!" Verena hissed, got up and tried to strangle Ethe. "BWAHAHAHA!!!" Truus cackled, which earned her a punch from a random person nearby. And various other painfull things happend. =================================================== On the meantime, the powerfull rulers of Ty Kamara, nicknamed 'the admin' were discussing the rules of the disco in a small room, that was situated above the Ty Kamara disco. The room had a large table and a few chairs, seats for 'the admin'. There was also a large window, that was above the entrance of the disco building. "I'd say; Alcoholic drinks for all!" The cheery Leina shouted, obviously proud of her words. "Leina, you smartass! Some children here aren't even twelve!" Ice Acher Girl yelled and jumped up from her chair, hitting her fist on the table in process. "Take Ethe for example!" "Agreed." The ever so calm Elisa spoke. She took another sip from her tea and smiled. "Eh..." Leina murmered. "Fine then. Only the adults get acohol." Ice thought about her words for a while and then spoke: "Okay. But then we need someone who makes sure the younger ones won't drink any." "Mmmh... I'm sure EvaN would want to do that!" Elisa said cheerfully. "Okay! So the problems solved!" Leina cheered. "Next, what are we going to do about--Eh, what's that sound I'm hearing?" She turned her gaze to the window. "That sounds like... people fighting?" Ice raised an eyebrow and walked over to the window. And what she saw there, was horrible. All the Ty Kamarians fighting! Elisa and Leina ran over to the window and stared out of it for a few minutes without speaking. Ice's eye twitched. Leina poked Ice. "Hey, you okay?" Ice didn't response. "Ice?" Elisa asked carefully. "You okay?" Ice still didn't response. "Eh... This is certainly scary..." Leina blinked. "Hey Elisa, you think she's dead?" Elisa sweatdropped. "Leina! She's still standing, for the love of potatoes!" "Ah," Leina said. "Okay then... Wait, did you just say 'for the love of potatoes?" Elisa laughed nervously and rubbed the back of her head. "You see, it's a long story, I--" "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGGHHH!!!!!" Elisa and Leina jumped back as Ice screamed. "WHAT ARE THEY DOING????" Both of them were stunned and just stared at Ice. "Nevermind, I'm going downstairs!" She yelled and stomped towards the door. After Ice had left the room, Elisa and Leina were fearing the worst for the poor fighting Ty Kamarians. =================================================== Liked it? ^-^;;;; |
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| Crazy Rei luva | Jun 11 2004, 07:30 PM Post #2 |
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Querida del Diablo
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Ooooh yes, loved it! :lol: I want to see more! |
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| Truus | Jun 11 2004, 07:37 PM Post #3 |
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Sugar-High
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Why thank you! ^-^ I'll write some more soon, but I have other stories to work on and my exams start in three days... *dies* X___X |
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| Crazy Rei luva | Jun 11 2004, 07:40 PM Post #4 |
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Querida del Diablo
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The mines are monday, but anyway, I can understand it Truus ^^ |
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| Ethe | Jun 11 2004, 09:24 PM Post #5 |
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ushishishi~
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That was awesome Truus! I do hope you update it, it was hilarious! I'll have to update my own now... {nods} Again, it was a great story Truus! |
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| whisper*2*imaginary | Jun 12 2004, 05:24 AM Post #6 |
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also known as Signourney
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LOL that was great Truus XD write more write more
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| *Ice Archer Girl* | Jun 12 2004, 05:46 AM Post #7 |
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+ [ Kiba-kun...aishiteru? ] +
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Hey - I was and today and now I'm :laugh:!XDDDD That was awesome Truus, you're the best! I'm laughing so hard I can hardly type - that was SO like me! ^^ I hate drinking and I do censor my site carefully so it would be exactly like me to say something like that! ^^ *pounds the alcohol* XD And I love me going crazy like that - it was pure genius! Truus! ^^ I can't wait to read more - but no pressure! ^_~ Thanks for making my day almost all better!Never gave my info for Ethe's story I was too busy at that time and forgot, but here it is anyways in case you need it. Please don't make me curse though - I never use any profanity - well, unless you count h*ll as cursing.Age: 17 Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Dark Brown *glompz again* ^^ |
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| Seraphiel | Jun 12 2004, 08:07 AM Post #8 |
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Happy Go Lucky Me
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*glomps truus* I SAID A WHOLE LINE!!! XDDDD It was so good girl! You should drag umi's plans into it sometime XD |
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| Umi-chii | Jun 12 2004, 08:30 AM Post #9 |
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I shall now be like Sieg *enters WTF Moment*
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OMG!!! I laugh my self out of it!! XDDD pretty cool Truus!! totally AWESOME!!! hope you update it too!! its so funny!!!!!!! |
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| Elisa | Jun 12 2004, 01:09 PM Post #10 |
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*Blinks a few time* ... ... *burts out laughing and scares the kids she's looking after* That's HILARIOUS! XD I love it! Ice has snapped XD And the 'for love of potatoes' sounds like something I might actually say XD |
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| Reiven | Jun 12 2004, 01:50 PM Post #11 |
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Perverted Space Alien on The Loose
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For the love of potatoes! That was damn funny. The potatoes line nearly made me fall out of my chair Me and CRL were so funny!! You're so talented, Truus *glomps* I need to read more ... and know the story behind the Potatoes!!I'm in love with this story
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| Truus | Jun 12 2004, 02:04 PM Post #12 |
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Sugar-High
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Wiehie! XD Thanks all of you! ^o^ *glomps CRl, Ethe, Whisper, IAG, Rikku, Umi, Elisa and Reiven* I'm inspired to write more.... ^-^ Beware... *snicker* =================================================== "What do they think they're doing?!" Ice mutterd to herself as she stomped of the stairs, going towards the entrace of the building. When she reached it, she punched a random kid that was in her way and started to run around in the crowd, trying to look for the 'moderators' EvaN and Ethe. Poor Rikku got punched in the face by Ice and fainted into another persons arms. Uki yelped when Rikku fell into his arms and ran off screaming "Leave me alone!". Rikku gained her consiousnes again at once and ran after Uki yelling "You made me fall! IDIOT!!" CRL and Reiven were having the best times of their lives by trowing random items at random people. "Fear the randomness of the terrible twins!" Reiven cackled and trew a rock at Whisper, who pouted and cursed Reiven. Kai-V was yeah... Bored, because Mao didn't allow her to go fight. "It's too dangerous!" Mao yelled. "You might get hurt!!" Kai-V folded her arms in front of her chest. "Well, isn't that what fights are for?" Mao choosed to ignore this and kicked CRL, who wanted to hit Kai-V with a random book. Garnet was poking Truus, who had fallen asleep after five minutes of fighting. "You alive?" Poke. "You alive?" Poke. "You alive?" Poke. Truus snored loudly and moved in her sleep, saying something like "No mommy, I don't want to go to school...." Garnet screamed in absolute horror and ran off screaming "It's alive, it's alive!!" Revenge Neia and Sara were running around like headless chickens, which caused them to bump into other persons. Bump! "Watch where you're going!" Shauna hissed and glared at Sara. "You don't mess with the--" Bang! "Oh, just SHUT UP!" Mariam Hiwatari yelled, after hitting Shauna with a frying pan. Bump! "Oh, s'cuse me." Dreamer Gurl said and turned to face Revenge Neia, who had just ran into her. "Is nothing..." Neia muttered and she rubbed her poor head. Ethe was trying to escape from Verena, who was in the mood to strangle-an-Ethe. "Eep!" Ethe squeaked when Verena slammed her into a random wall. Ethe fell down to the ground and realized... ...that Verena had broken her glasses... "Verena..." Ethe hissed. "Do you realize what you did?" "Eh..." She said. "Broke the midget's glasses?" "Enough!" Ethe jumped up. "This will be... YOUR DEATH!!!" And so, Verena ran off in fear. =================================================== On the meantime, in 'the admin' room, Leina and Elisa were still standing in front of the window, disscusing serious topics... "Hey Elisa!" Leina pointed at two persons in the crowd. "Look at CRL and Whisper fighting! Wanna bet that CRL's gonna win?" Elisa grinned. "Sure! And take a look at Ethe! Man, Verena's gonna die!" "Go Ethe!" Leina cheered. "Hey Elisa, why don't we go get some porcorn? This certainly is amusing to watch!" =================================================== "Where are they in the name of the admin?!" Ice hissed, fuming with anger. And it seemed like magic, because suddenly Ice bumped into EvaN. "There you are!" She yelled. "I've been looking for you for a while, stop this fight, NOW!" EvaN snickerd. "Eh?" Was that Ice was able to say. 'Did he lost his mind or what?' "Hello Ice..." EvaN grinned. "Um... Hello?" Ice stammered and took one step backwards. 'This is not good, this is NOT GOOD AT ALL.' Suddenly, EvaN pointed to something behind Ice. "Look! Behind you!" Unfortunatly, it was in Ice's nature too look back whenever someone said that. "What is it?!" She yelled in shock and turned her gaze to where EvaN had pointed. But, nothing to see there but some people fighting. Ice only realized that too late. "Hah! Gotcha!" EvaN yelled and slammed a cake into Ice's face. Then he cackled and waved to Elisa who was looking to him from the window. Elisa did thumbs up. "Good one, EvaN!" She smiled. EvaN smiled back at her and then faced Ice. "Haha, wasn't that---ICE?!?" BAM! And so EvaN ended up lying unconsious on the floor. Ice was able to kill right now. "You. Just. Asked. For. It." She hissed and went back to the entrance of the building, kicking some random persons that were in her way. =================================================== To be continued! Dum-dum-dum! ^^;; Hehe, insanity is getting to me... XD |
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| Seraphiel | Jun 12 2004, 02:59 PM Post #13 |
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*has totally fallen off her chair laughing* XDDDDDDDDDDDDD I loved it so much! |
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| Truus | Jun 12 2004, 03:21 PM Post #14 |
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Sugar-High
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Yaaay! XD Thanks! I should make you and Uki have a more romantic moment... *snicker* XD |
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| Ethe | Jun 12 2004, 03:24 PM Post #15 |
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ushishishi~
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{wipes away tears; takes a deep breath} That was a good part Truus! 1-1-3-4, the entire thing was good!
Again, a hilarious, hilarious, hilarious, hilarious part! |
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today and now I'm :laugh:!
I'm laughing so hard I can hardly type - that was SO like me! ^^ I hate drinking and I do censor my site carefully so it would be exactly like me to say something like that! ^^ *pounds the alcohol* XD And I love me going crazy like that - it was pure genius!
Truus! ^^ I can't wait to read more - but no pressure! ^_~ Thanks for making my day almost all better!
I was too busy at that time and forgot, but here it is anyways in case you need it. Please don't make me curse though - I never use any profanity - well, unless you count h*ll as cursing.
XDDD pretty cool Truus!! totally AWESOME!!! hope you update it too!! its so funny!!!!!!!
12:49 AM Jul 11