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Beyblade Oc's; Beyblade characters paired up
Topic Started: Mar 31 2004, 07:48 PM (1,592 Views)
whisper*2*imaginary
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Gabrella,Apr 4 2004
03:49 PM
*runs away from Mina* Whisper protect me!!!!!!!!!

O_O what am I suppose to do....uuuuh...uuhhh....-jumps in front of Mina so she trips or something along those lines- O_O how come I have the idea I just signed my own death certificate (sp?)?
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yeah, it's really hard for me not to make Mary-Sues...i think in my fic, Janelle started off as one, and she's been getting less and less of one. or becoming more of one...i'm really not sure...Cassie's not one, definately. she's not too bright, she's gullible, she's a lot like Tyson (now that's one big flaw XD) and yeah...i'm not sure about Kailee though. one flaw, she isn't much brighter than Cassie, maybe a bit, she tends to be clueless, gets hyper WAY to often and easily, and...maybe she does have a few flaws. ^^U
Janelle...she has that split personality problem...almost literally. there are two different technical OC's Ana, and Desdemona. Ana is the good-natured side of Janelle. she's what keeps Janelle calm and...well, somewhat of a non-hyper Kailee. Desdemona however, is both the other half of Janelle's personality, and some sort of super evil demon (hence her name) that sometimes tends to take over Janelle. anyways, Janelle has quite a few flaws...i think...
gets annoyed easily
threatens anyone, and if they don't listen, they get a taste of her sword or something else less lethal
is afraid of people being afraid of her because of her...abilities
can be clumsy, but denys that she is
if she starts something, she has to finish it, even if it means her life or death
when something goes wrong, she almost always blames it on herself and wishes she never existed
i think there's more. Desdemona is her biggest flaw probably, because Desdemona LOVES to kill, anyone and anything.
Natasha...i meant for her to be a Mary-Sue in ANYWAY possible, on account, i thought Janelle needed an enemy that wasn't already in the show :P
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I've found a few time people that clain their Oc are not Mary Sue find out they are when they work out everything about them on paper. That's what happened with Gabrella. But once you know you can work on them.
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whisper*2*imaginary,Apr 4 2004
03:30 PM
Gabrella,Apr 4 2004
03:49 PM
*runs away from Mina* Whisper protect me!!!!!!!!!

O_O what am I suppose to do....uuuuh...uuhhh....-jumps in front of Mina so she trips or something along those lines- O_O how come I have the idea I just signed my own death certificate (sp?)?

Mina: DIE! DIEDIEDIEDIEDIE!!! >.< Nobody messes with The Lady of Death! KILL!

Taisy: You stole my quote!!! :angry: It's your fault, Whisper! DIEEEEE!!!

Truus: Hehehe... ^^; It was nice knowing you, Whisper... Heh, attack of the geeks... ^^;
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Truus,Apr 4 2004
04:41 PM
whisper*2*imaginary,Apr 4 2004
03:30 PM
Gabrella,Apr 4 2004
03:49 PM
*runs away from Mina* Whisper protect me!!!!!!!!!

O_O what am I suppose to do....uuuuh...uuhhh....-jumps in front of Mina so she trips or something along those lines- O_O how come I have the idea I just signed my own death certificate (sp?)?

Mina: DIE! DIEDIEDIEDIEDIE!!! >.< Nobody messes with The Lady of Death! KILL!

Taisy: You stole my quote!!! :angry: It's your fault, Whisper! DIEEEEE!!!

Truus: Hehehe... ^^; It was nice knowing you, Whisper... Heh, attack of the geeks... ^^;

No don't kill Whisper!!!! If you kill her there'll be no more Gabriel and if there's no more Gabriel and then Gabrella will kill me!!!!!!!!! *hides Whisper in safe place*
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Gabrella,Apr 4 2004
06:10 PM
Truus,Apr 4 2004
04:41 PM
whisper*2*imaginary,Apr 4 2004
03:30 PM
Gabrella,Apr 4 2004
03:49 PM
*runs away from Mina* Whisper protect me!!!!!!!!!

O_O what am I suppose to do....uuuuh...uuhhh....-jumps in front of Mina so she trips or something along those lines- O_O how come I have the idea I just signed my own death certificate (sp?)?

Mina: DIE! DIEDIEDIEDIEDIE!!! >.< Nobody messes with The Lady of Death! KILL!

Taisy: You stole my quote!!! :angry: It's your fault, Whisper! DIEEEEE!!!

Truus: Hehehe... ^^; It was nice knowing you, Whisper... Heh, attack of the geeks... ^^;

No don't kill Whisper!!!! If you kill her there'll be no more Gabriel and if there's no more Gabriel and then Gabrella will kill me!!!!!!!!! *hides Whisper in safe place*

XD this is getting funny! but alas, we can't have the police over here about a murder or two -.-....the giving them a nice shiny knife won't help...Truus?
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Ok... here are mine!

Ocs!

Nia (Kai oc, and Tala's cousin)
Seren or Freya (Kai)
Felicity (Bryans... i think...)
Kia ( Tala, Kais twin)
Jane (Ian)
Alice ( Spencers)

all i can think of at the moment...

Family!

Kai- Kia (kai's twin) 17, Leia (13) Ina (19) Josh (14)
Tala- Sara (20)
Bryan- Kelly (12) Rena (15)
Spencer- James (21)
Ian- Maria (19) Electra(13) Ivan (15)
Nia- Catryn (21) Twm(18) Gareth(18) Cerys (13)

Thought I'd tell you Nia's anyway...

Ocs between the Families!
SaraxJames
TalaxKia
KaixNia
JoshxElectra
MariaxGareth
TwnxIna

Most of them aren't really important... but they all come into the fic "The Demolition Girl" by me!



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Crazy Rei luva,Apr 4 2004
03:09 PM
I felt kind of attacked there, but I'm not going to rant about it. Yes, I have created many many characters. And I know how hard it is to not make them Mary-Sues. One of my personal quotes is that I like creating beautiful and evil characters, because they're already have flaws enough by being evil, but creating nice characters is defenetly harder.

If you felt attacked there, then I apologise.
It wasn't my intention.
However - I do get rather... annoyed when people start lecturing me on how to create OCs or how my original characters are unrounded.
I've done a lot of extra curricular English at school - and a lot of one of them was to do with character creation.
So I do know what I'm talking about and I know how to create OCs without making them perfect or super evil.
Because having attributes such as perfection and such makes characters boring. Unrounded and just... targets for flamers. *shrugs*

I forgot to mention a few of the OCs I have.
These are from the Kai/Reena relationship... ie. Their kids.
Eldest: Isis Persphone Hiwatari - - Bitbeast: Undiine (Dragon/Unicorn hybrid)
First son/Eldest twin: Galen Chaikeh Hiwatari - - Bitbeast: Rashkah (Orca)
Second son/Younger twin: River Orion Hiwatari - - Bitbeast: Delos (Toxic wolf)
Youngest: Athena Nefertiri Hiwatari - - Bitbeast: Carbuncle (Triple element phoenix).

There are pictures of all of them on my DA account.
~~Silver
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:) No need to apologize. I have huge repsect for you and your character Reena, Silverwolverina, she is a wonderful character. And I agree about the boring part. Characters have to have many layers, good sides and bad sides. We always have to try to make them better.
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Crazy Rei luva,Apr 5 2004
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:) No need to apologize. I have huge repsect for you and your character Reena, Silverwolverina, she is a wonderful character. And I agree about the boring part. Characters have to have many layers, good sides and bad sides. We always have to try to make them better.


Thanks for the compliment. ^^
~~Silver
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SilverWolverina,Apr 5 2004
12:54 PM
Crazy Rei luva,Apr 5 2004
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:) No need to apologize. I have huge repsect for you and your character Reena, Silverwolverina, she is a wonderful character. And I agree about the boring part. Characters have to have many layers, good sides and bad sides. We always have to try to make them better.


Thanks for the compliment. ^^
~~Silver

You're welcome :).
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The pairing for my OC is still uncertain,seeing as she is in love with two guys at the same time for the moment.
I've tried hard to make her into an OC,and NOT a Mary Sue.
But then..as long as i enjoy writing this fanfic,i can't see what the problem is.
Im not forcing anyone to read it. It's their own decision.
Just as it was my decision to not put this story out in public in fear of flamers.
Yeah,im lame like that..
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Odango,Apr 5 2004
07:28 PM
The pairing for my OC is still uncertain,seeing as she is in love with two guys at the same time for the moment.
I've tried hard to make her into an OC,and NOT a Mary Sue.
But then..as long as i enjoy writing this fanfic,i can't see what the problem is.
Im not forcing anyone to read it. It's their own decision.
Just as it was my decision to not put this story out in public in fear of flamers.
Yeah,im lame like that..

You should bring it out in public. If flamers don't like your story, that's it, you don't need to get disappointed about it. In my ff.net profil I actually thank the flamers for reminding me that I'm not the best out there. Which I certainly am not! XD
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Agreed! ^^ Flamers sometimes keep me in check. ^^ Although pretty pointless ones like "your story sux" is just begging for an eye-rolling. X_x I like criticism, I'm not against people telling me to improve. :P
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12:58 AM
Agreed!  ^^  Flamers sometimes keep me in check.  ^^  Although pretty pointless ones like "your story sux" is just begging for an eye-rolling.  X_x  I like criticism, I'm not against people telling me to improve.  :P

Ahh... contructive criticism is a wonderful thing. I'm bad with that though just because I tend to look for faults X_x Strangely enough, I barely mention them because I feel guilty about sounding "mean" ^^;; Anyway..

I've got 6 main OCs ^^ It's very strange because they're all on the same team.. except on, who joins the Bladebreakers... did a mention that he's a guy? *laughs* Neway..

Riley: Optimistic, spontaneous, can't seem to leave other people's affairs alone X_x She's not paired with anyone... *sweatdrops* I was originally going to pair her with Rei, but then I changed my mind and now I do not know ^^o

Casey: Smart, analytical, tends to think things through too much. She is also not paired with anyone ^^; Maybe Ryo.. who's another OC X_x But... I don't know. They don't get along *sweatdrops*

Alex: Now Alex... okay, she's based on one of my friends. I'm so aware that her qualities are typical, but... my friend really is like that X_x So Alex is the typical stubborn, unforgiving, hot-headed tomboy -.-o She's nice to people she knows.. her friends... but that's about it ^^;; She's "tolerant" to those she doesn't know XD Yesss... I know... but she's not even paired with any of the guys from the show. She's paired with Richi, another OC ^^;;

Ryo: Think.. Kai. But... 10x of a bigger prick X_x I just have fun with him because I don't have to hold back on how rude he is to other people ~_^ He's not paired with anyone... MAYBE Casey. But.. gah.. they so don't get along X_x

Richi: I love him. Seriously. I'm not the only one either X_x It's so funny cuz he's really close to being perfect, and yet... everyone loves him X_x Maybe it's cuz he's a guy? Anyway, he's obsessed wtih chicken and his persoanlity contrasts with Alex.. which is why those two are paired together. They balance each other well ^^o

Last... we have Aya, who is my fave OC ^^;; She's quite new though...and I haven't gotten to write her much since she's in a totally different fic from the initial 5. However, I have her background, personality and all that other crap done ~_^ Maaah... I'd rather not explain her because I'm not in the mood to type out a long paragraph thoroughly going through her charactar X_x She's not paired with anyone... yet... and I think for her, it's going to stay that way.

Hm. *wonders why she hasn't paired any OCs with any guys from the show* o.o I think there's something wrong with me... *sweatdrops* X_x

EDIT: I just remembered another one! Her name's Jessie and she's paired with Kai... or I think that's what I intended X_x I haven't worked on that fic for a freakishly long time ~_^
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