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| Showdown at Sparse Shade; The Circle of Theft | |
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| OvaltinePatrol | Oct 13 2010, 03:13 PM Post #16 |
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Suvarna had started to arrange the odds and ends in bundles that could be loaded onto the brahmin when Jackal answered her queries by shooting the injured brahmin. She rolled her eyes and exhaled sharply. "I was going to suggest you walk her into the garage to do that, so you could use those chains there to hang it up, I suppose you can drag its extremely heavy carcass there instead." She continued to pack alongside Deko telling him "Why don't you help Jackal with that brahmin. And tell me when its drained out, I can make use of it." She attempted to strip down as much as she possibly could from the homestead and the gunmen, using her years of experience helping her parents on the caravan trail to make the best use of the brahmins' capacity. |
| Suvarna Vishnavi: Level 3. S:4 P:4 E:4 C:8 I:9 A:5 L:7. 24 y.o. female of Indian descent, usually covers up as much as possible. | |
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| Run4 | Oct 14 2010, 05:00 AM Post #17 |
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Jackal sighed and walked his way slowly over to another Brahmin - a healthy one - and picked a looped rope from the paddock fence. He then carefully knotted it into something that looked vaguely like a halter (that or some creepy-ass bondage knot) and looped it over his chosen Brahmin's head. He led her slowly over to the dead one and tied the halter to the dead one's ankle. He then continued to lead the none-too-happy live Brahmin towards the garage, dragging the carcass unceremoniously into the cold, shady building. He untied the corpse and led the healthy one back into the paddock - where she was all too happy to go. Jackal removed the halter and returned to the garage, inspecting the Block and Tackle assemblies, noting that someone had kept them oiled up. He pulled the chain through both ways, then tested the other block and tackle. Both were found to be suitable, and Jackal tied the chains around the Brahmin's rear legs. With a little swearing and muscular pressure, he and Deko had the Brahmin hanging in the air and the chains secured to prevent the mutant bovine dropping back to the floor. Jackal slid a pot under the Brahmin's head to collect the blood, then drew his knife, stabbing it into the Brahmin's carotid arteries. "And now we wait," Jackal grunted as the Brahmin began to drain. |
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Caleb Wolff, Level 7 Tribal Ranger. (Inventory) Jackal, Level 5 Glowing Ghoul. (Inventory)[/align] | |
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| The Eremity | Oct 14 2010, 08:17 AM Post #18 |
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Deko pick up a Knife of one Homesteader hand, and start butchering the Brahmin. Deko cut of the Brahmin chest and whit he hands start putting out the internal organs, he star cleaning the inner part of the Brahmin and after some time, he put the stuff on the Brahmin like a bag, after that, he rises the Brahmin, Deko look for Survana and say “Time for go isn’t it?” Deko looks for Jackal, the guy is very cool, but he don’t understand why he is so crazy… What fuck goes on whit this Ghoul? |
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Deko, The Traveler. Asian Human Level 1 S.P.E.C.I.A.L: 9-4-8-6-4-4-5 Traits: Fast metabolism, Bruiser and Fast Shot Equipmet: Rusted MG, Hand Cannon and a rock Armor: Jumpsuit. Itens: Pack of Cigarettes x1 - Hide x1 - Small Hide x1 - Brahmin Hoof x1 | |
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| OvaltinePatrol | Oct 14 2010, 08:35 AM Post #19 |
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In the meantime, Suvarna had loaded the healthy brahmin with their haul. She entered the garage, wrinkling her nose at the not unfamiliar stench. "Well done gentlemen. Let's get the useful bits bundled up and we will be good to go." With their help the meat and plentiful fat stores of the brahmin were collected and stowed away as best as possible. Suvarna looked around at the plundered homestead and winced. "Let's get out of here. With luck we'll make it back to Bucket Town in time to catch a couple of hours of sleep." She started leading the small train of laden brahmin as she had done many a time on the caravan trails. Eventually Sparse Shade could only be seen as a faint trail of black smoke. By the time Bucket Town was in sight, that too was gone. More weary than wary, Suvarna failed to stifle a yawn. "Alright. Once we get into town, we can corral these in the ruin I pitched my tent at. You two can get some sleep while I cook up a little something. With any luck you'll have what you need amongst this stuff to start making that centrifuge." |
| Suvarna Vishnavi: Level 3. S:4 P:4 E:4 C:8 I:9 A:5 L:7. 24 y.o. female of Indian descent, usually covers up as much as possible. | |
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| OvaltinePatrol | Oct 14 2010, 09:43 AM Post #20 |
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Finished. Ready for judgement/grading. |
| Suvarna Vishnavi: Level 3. S:4 P:4 E:4 C:8 I:9 A:5 L:7. 24 y.o. female of Indian descent, usually covers up as much as possible. | |
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| Zilabus | Oct 14 2010, 03:48 PM Post #21 |
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Er'ry day I'm overseein'
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An okay mission, but it felt odd and lopsided. The flow was lost from one member's post to another, and it kinda brought down everything as a whole. Ovaltine, you did quite well for a first RP. The writing was sound, and the only issue for me was a little floundering on the part of the narrative style. You'll hit your stride soon, I'm sure. Run, you did quite well yourself, but it felt like it lacked consistancy. Eremity, you made a good effort. You definately need a lot of practice, but you're improving already.
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Eli "Slim" Ambrose SPECIAL: 3, 9, 2, 7, 9, 3, 7 Level: 5 Bucket town reputation: -175 Equipment Weaponry: Molotov, Cherry bombs, Combat Knife, Laser pistol, Tack Mines, Smoke grenades, Syringes. Armor:Post-war suit Tattered leather jacket Inventory Homemade shotgun, Gumballs, Bedspread Mentats x3, Psycho x2, Jet x1, Wiskey x2, vodka 4 1/2 x Hides, 15 LSB dollars Appearance Caucasian Very tall, lanky, and slim, jet black hair in a greased into a subdued pompadore style. Dark eyes and a cleanshaven face. Brown Windowpane suit. Kelly "Featherweight" Capozzi | |
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