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Topic Started: Feb 13 2007, 07:54 PM (65 Views)
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Well, I introduced in the introducing part (weird, isn't it? :P ) and then Dorothy said she'd love to read some of my poems, so here are some of my poems :P

I separated them with ***'s... seen most of them don't have a title yet (if you know a great title for one of the poems, just say so :P )


***

Maddness, sadness, flowing together
Showing how lonely can be
In your hands a pale blue feather
Remembering how it were

Crying, dying, flowing alone
Showing how lonely can be
But nonetheless your love is gone
Remembering how it were

Screaming, shouting, back in world
Wishing for better times from past
Your love is gone, you're feeling cold
Remembering how it were

***

The dizzyman just came to town
He came to sing a song
And as the player furrowed his brow
Everybody would sing along

When he finished playing
Everybody would scream and shout
And then he would give them
Another turn around

'And when he finally went away
The crowd still calling for him
He'd think about a wonderfull day
The town was statisfied

And then he would go away
Travel to another town
And the dizzyman would play
His talent would be shown

***

Side by side
Two by two
I love him
And he loves me too

Lips meet lips
Eyes meet eyes
He tells goodbye
I think he lies

Day to day
Week to week
Never seen him anymore
Don’t know where to look

Bye and bye
That’s the end
The love is over
He last told me
The letter he’d sent

Side lost side
One lost two
I still love him
He me no more

***

water and rain, dripping from the roof
the sky is grey, and I feel like a fool
I should be learning right now
instead of writing poems, ten in a row

***

it's you I miss cant live life
need you one I miss now
answers you told cut like
I couldn't handle so
went away from me nothing
nothing to bother from here
need you to come back soothing
me in all my miserable mere

***

Bed-head

bed-head, still asleep
like to lay in bed so sweet
to drift away wonderfull
and wake up with new will
nice warm laying in bed
getting some rest and that
is all you ever want to do
then the alarm goes and though
you want to stay there safe
you know you have to get up
before you are too late

***

and just to end... a pic I've drawn... I wanted to upload more, but it just doesn't work out now (so I'm getting angry now so I'm quitting it now haha :P )

for the ones that are so blind they barely can see it - it's John. Yes, THE John Lennon :P

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Someone told me a few minutes ago they saw <span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>John walking on the street once wearing a button saying "I Love Paul". And this girl asked him, "Why are you wearing a button that says, "I Love Paul"? He said, "Because I love Paul." - Harry Nilsson</span>
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