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| IHeartTheBeatles | Feb 13 2007, 07:54 PM Post #1 |
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Well, I introduced in the introducing part (weird, isn't it?
) and then Dorothy said she'd love to read some of my poems, so here are some of my poems
I separated them with ***'s... seen most of them don't have a title yet (if you know a great title for one of the poems, just say so )*** Maddness, sadness, flowing together Showing how lonely can be In your hands a pale blue feather Remembering how it were Crying, dying, flowing alone Showing how lonely can be But nonetheless your love is gone Remembering how it were Screaming, shouting, back in world Wishing for better times from past Your love is gone, you're feeling cold Remembering how it were *** The dizzyman just came to town He came to sing a song And as the player furrowed his brow Everybody would sing along When he finished playing Everybody would scream and shout And then he would give them Another turn around 'And when he finally went away The crowd still calling for him He'd think about a wonderfull day The town was statisfied And then he would go away Travel to another town And the dizzyman would play His talent would be shown *** Side by side Two by two I love him And he loves me too Lips meet lips Eyes meet eyes He tells goodbye I think he lies Day to day Week to week Never seen him anymore Don’t know where to look Bye and bye That’s the end The love is over He last told me The letter he’d sent Side lost side One lost two I still love him He me no more *** water and rain, dripping from the roof the sky is grey, and I feel like a fool I should be learning right now instead of writing poems, ten in a row *** it's you I miss cant live life need you one I miss now answers you told cut like I couldn't handle so went away from me nothing nothing to bother from here need you to come back soothing me in all my miserable mere *** Bed-head bed-head, still asleep like to lay in bed so sweet to drift away wonderfull and wake up with new will nice warm laying in bed getting some rest and that is all you ever want to do then the alarm goes and though you want to stay there safe you know you have to get up before you are too late *** and just to end... a pic I've drawn... I wanted to upload more, but it just doesn't work out now (so I'm getting angry now so I'm quitting it now haha )for the ones that are so blind they barely can see it - it's John. Yes, THE John Lennon ![]() |
| Someone told me a few minutes ago they saw <span style='font-size:21pt;line-height:100%'>John walking on the street once wearing a button saying "I Love Paul". And this girl asked him, "Why are you wearing a button that says, "I Love Paul"? He said, "Because I love Paul." - Harry Nilsson</span> | |
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) and then Dorothy said she'd love to read some of my poems, so here are some of my poems




8:10 AM Jul 11