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Still; By me... Bars Up
Topic Started: May 13 2009, 03:02 PM (408 Views)
ZyfooL
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The One With A Million Dollar Smile And Three Dollars To My Name
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http://www.zshare.net/audio/59983497088533a8/

check it, wrote this about 2 years ago....

feeback appreciated!
"I'm Hard Dick And Bad Karma"
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ZyfooL
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The One With A Million Dollar Smile And Three Dollars To My Name
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bump??
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50 FT. HOE
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Hummingbirds like to eavesdrop
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Iīll check this out when i get some headphones into this bitch.




PEACE
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Turning and turning in the widening gyre
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst
Are full of passionate intensity.- William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)
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Some random thoughts...

The beat and the lyrics dont seem to fit together so well.
Probably because the beat isnt up to par with the effort
that you have seemed to put into lyrics.

I like the clear pronounciation of the words.

Started to get into the song after the first verse.
Maybe it wouldīve needed some more energy into
the intro so people would wake up and start to listen more carefully.

Hey, i PMīd you by the way.



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Turning and turning in the widening gyre
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst
Are full of passionate intensity.- William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)
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ZyfooL
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The One With A Million Dollar Smile And Three Dollars To My Name
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thanks for listening, i figured of all places people here would appreciate the song.

ive gotten that comment about the beat making the track hard to listen too.

i could always redo the intro, or scratch it all together...
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ZyfooL
May 23 2009, 09:47 AM
thanks for listening, i figured of all places people here would appreciate the song.

ive gotten that comment about the beat making the track hard to listen too.

i could always redo the intro, or scratch it all together...
Honestly fuck that.

If the song is already 2 years old then just concentrate on making new music.

Iīve personally always tried to avoid messing with old songs.


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Turning and turning in the widening gyre
The falcon cannot hear the falconer;
Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold;
Mere anarchy is loosed upon the world,
The blood-dimmed tide is loosed, and everywhere
The ceremony of innocence is drowned;
The best lack all conviction, while the worst
Are full of passionate intensity.- William Butler Yeats (1865-1939)
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I will be back to check this
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This was sick, but something was a bit off. Not sure exactly. I think the beat was too fast for the lyrics, or the other way around.

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