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| Topic Started: Sep 24 2010, 12:50 PM (345 Views) | |
| michael | Sep 24 2010, 12:50 PM Post #1 |
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"So you sure you got everything?" a voice asked as Michael sighed again with this this was like the 5th time his dad had asked him that. "Yes dad for the Love of Pokémon ive got everything!" Michael stated causing his Father to chuckle as he looked at his Son it was hard to believe he had grown up so fast so quickly right before his eyes shaking his head he nodded. "Alright you know were the first gym is right?" His father asked Michael nodded taking out his poke gear and placing it on his left wrist before turning it on as he showed the map to his father and pointed to one of the towns. "Right here Dad. Violet City The City of Nostalgic Scents." Michael stated as his dad nodded. "alright i guess i better not keep you any longer." His dad said as Michael nodded before shouting up to h is room. "BLAZE YOU READY?!" Michael asked as His starter Pokémon that he befriended while over at elms came down the stairs railing right into Michael as Michael caught him. "Cynda Cynda Cyndaquil" It cried as Michael chuckled taking out its Poké Ball before a red beam shot out returning it to its Poké Ball as Michael raced out the door. "Bye Mom Bye Dad I,l make you Proud!" Michael yelled as he raced out of New bark town as he stopped in the tall grass. being a rookie trainer he forgot the most important rule. Pokémon jump out of tall grass. "Ok lets see" He said as he clicked his poke gear as the map came up. "Cherrygrove City is first i guess i,ll stop by there before heading off to Violet City but i,l need some poke balls as i only got 5 right now" Michael said as he clicked it off and took a deep breath and took in the sent. Today was the start of his quest to become a Pokémon master. |
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| MizuJakkaru | Sep 25 2010, 01:19 AM Post #2 |
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Spearow gave a disdainful caw as he hopped back and forth on his branch. His branch. That's right. He had claimed it, and all those silly Pokémon that thought it was theirs could peck it for all he cared. After all, he was the king of this tree. Infact, maybe it should be his tree and not just his branch... Hmm... he wondered if he could kick the other Pokémon out... Clicking his beak in contemplation, he didn't notice right away that a human, an honest to Arceus human, was passing under his branch. Why... ...the nerve! With a disdainful squawk, Spearow spread his wings wide, majestically, powerfully, well, he must looks grander than Ho-oh! That foolish phoenix. What did Ho-oh think it had on him. Taking to the air and dive bombing for the human below, Spear let out a cry of his name. The challenge was on! |
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| michael | Sep 25 2010, 01:00 PM Post #3 |
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"Woah!" Michael cried as he ducked to the side as he heard the spearow come in at full speed As Michael looked up as he saw the spearow he went to grab his Pokédex but remembered something. "CRAP! i forgot to pick it up from elm's lab sigh i,l do it after i capture this bird" Michael said to himself as he grabbed the one Poké Ball he had with him and smiled nodding to himself it was his first real battle on his quest and boy was he looking forward to it. Michael clicked the button on the Poké Ball making it bigger. "Blaze hope your ready buddy" Michael stated as he turned his gap around jumped in the air. "BLAZE ITS YOUR TURN TO SHINE!" he yelled as he threw the Poké Ball as it opened up and a light shine flashed as a Cyndiaquill came out of the Poké Ball ready to strike. "QUIL!" It cried as Michael Nodded with a chuckled as he saw the spearow heading in again. "Alright blaze start us off with tackle!" Michael yelled as blaze nodded charging it. "Quil quil quil!" It cried heading in to collide with the spearow. Blaze lv 5 VS Spearow lv 4 |
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| Lex | Sep 25 2010, 01:41 PM Post #4 |
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Okay, Michael. So far the storyline is going very swimmingly, so that's really great so far. I just have a few things that I'd like to help you pick up on, okay? Firstly, you have a tendency to put capital letters that aren't needed, LOL! It's a habit that a few people have but it can overcome quite easily. Just remember to only do it for names and places; New Bark Town, Spearow, Cyndaquil. Mom & Dad do not really need them, neither do adjectives. Another very common problem a lot of people have is I's. Also, I'm going to assume you have no apostrophe key on your keyboard? I'll instead of I,ll, but if that's the case, that's fine. <3 Always remember to make I's capital letters. Also, space out your speech in separate sentences. This is simply because it makes it easier for readers to read!
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If you're willing, I'll help have you signed up to the PokéFiends Roleplaying School. I should reiterate that this school doesn't outcast you as someone who is less experienced at RP, this labels you as someone who is willing to help themselves do better and learn more, whilst roleplaying at the same time, like Dyne. Anyway, let's follow these first few hints and see how you do with your next response, yeah? 8D Spearow flew straight over the kid and planted his talons on another branch on a tree parallel to his own. The boy was shocked and a little hoodwinked, but remained composed enough to released his Cyndaquil. It cried out adorably three times. Spearow took to the ground and raised his wings aggressively. "Speeeeeeeaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrowwwwwwwww!" He cried out in anger as this Pokémon attempted to challenge him in the thick of battle. This was his territory! The Cyndaquil began to charge towards him, but Spearow was quick enough to raise himself into the air, attempting to envelope the Pokémon in dust and dirt as he elevated. |
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