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| MOON007 | Apr 23 2005, 09:05 AM Post #1 |
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| Last_Wish | Apr 24 2005, 09:29 AM Post #2 |
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| masiha4u | Apr 24 2005, 09:49 AM Post #3 |
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G Moon Bohat Achee Koshish Hay AAp Kee bus yeh shair delete kur dain q kay is ka matlab sahee nahee nikal raha hai MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI Q K yeh khayal he sahee nahee hay kay kisi kee chahat say zindagee kay neelam honay ka aehsas hoo chahat say to zindagee mousam-e-bahar lagnay lagtee hay neelami say to nakami ka aehsas hota hay or baqi ashar may to tareef hay phir is may q yeh ilzzam hay??? Lekin bohat achee koshihs hay aap kee is per tawaja dain or raat ko khas kur pen or note book lay kur soya karain q k achee poetries jo hain oon ka khayal khuwab may bohat ache milta hay to jaisay he khuwab may koee acha khayal a ay ossay oth kur likh lain ta kay subah tuk yaad rahay experince kur kay zaroor daikhna aap kamyabi yaqeeni hay bus concentrate karain |
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| Last_Wish | Apr 24 2005, 09:56 AM Post #4 |
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| MOON007 | Apr 25 2005, 08:59 AM Post #5 |
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THANX DEAR........... |
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| MOON007 | Apr 25 2005, 09:05 AM Post #6 |
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THANX DEAR..........................AAP NAY APNI ARA SAY AAGAH KIYA..............AAP KI BAAT SAHI HAI..........US SHAIR WAALI.......LEKIN AAP NAY DOOSRAY PEHLOO SAY USSAY DEKHA HAI...........IS MAIN BHI DOOSRAY SHAIROON KI TARAH...........KISSI AUR ANDAAZ MAIN TAREEF KI GAYEE HAI..........KAY ITNI ZIYADA MUHABAT HAI KAY BANDA NEELAM BHI HO SAKTA HAI.............THANX .............AIK DAFA PHIR SAMJHIAY............PHIR REMARKS DAIN........SHUKRIA........ Thanx>~ |
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| Last_Wish | Apr 25 2005, 11:09 AM Post #7 |
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| MOON007 | Apr 26 2005, 07:54 AM Post #8 |
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| Manzil_Ki_Talash | Aug 7 2005, 12:02 AM Post #9 |
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| Bheegi_Shaam | Aug 7 2005, 05:37 PM Post #10 |
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Sukh Da Koi Saa Na Avey...!
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ahaaaaaaaan :lovely: buhat khub ji buhat acha likha hai aap ne Allah pak aap ko hamesha kush rakhe Ameen :rolleyes: |
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| Friend4ever | Oct 28 2005, 05:53 AM Post #11 |
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