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Aik Ghazal Jo Main Nay Khud Likhi Hai; give me ur remarks that how is it?
Topic Started: Apr 23 2005, 09:05 AM (239 Views)
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JAISAY SUBAH HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT MERI YUNHI TAMAAM HOTI HAI
JIS DIN NA DAIKHAIN HUM PASS SAY TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI KAY ZAAT MERI BENAAM HOTI HAI
AGER DAIKH LAIN KABHI AANKH BHER KER TUJHAY
NAZER JAISAY MERI KHUD SAY BADNAAM HOTI HAI
NAZER JHUKTI JAAAIY AGER MERI DAIKH KER TUJHAY
TO ZINDAGI JAISAY MERI TERI GHULAAM HOTI HAI
HO NA JIS DIN DIL MAIN TERA KHIYAAL
TO MERI ROOH JAISAY BE AARAM HOTI HAI
MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO DAIKHAY BUND KER KAY AANKHAIN MUJHAY
MERI SHAAERI JAISAY TUJH PAY IKHTATAAM HOTI HAI
PAANA CHAAHOON JO ZINDAGI KAY SUFFER MAIN TUJHAY
TO UMER MERI MAJNOON KA SA ANJAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO HUNS KER KABHI BOOLAY MUJH SAY
TO TERI YEH BAAT MERAY LIAY PIYAAM HOTI HAI
JUB TO MILLAY MUJH SAY BIN HUNSAY BIN KHILAY
TO MERI SHAAERI YEHI PER NAKAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT KAY BAAD PHIR NAAM SAY TERAY
SHUROO JAISAY MERI SUBBAH O SHAAM HOTI HAI
SHAID BHULA KER BHI BHULA SAKAY NA TUJHAY KHURSHID
KAY TERI JHUKKI NIGAH MERAY LIAY SALAAM HOTI HAI
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G Moon Bohat Achee Koshish Hay AAp Kee bus yeh shair delete kur dain q kay is ka matlab sahee nahee nikal raha hai

MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI

Q K yeh khayal he sahee nahee hay kay kisi kee chahat say zindagee kay neelam honay ka aehsas hoo chahat say to zindagee mousam-e-bahar lagnay lagtee hay neelami say to nakami ka aehsas hota hay or baqi ashar may to tareef hay phir is may q yeh ilzzam hay???

Lekin bohat achee koshihs hay aap kee is per tawaja dain or raat ko khas kur pen or note book lay kur soya karain q k achee poetries jo hain oon ka khayal khuwab may bohat ache milta hay to jaisay he khuwab may koee acha khayal a ay ossay oth kur likh lain ta kay subah tuk yaad rahay experince kur kay zaroor daikhna aap kamyabi yaqeeni hay bus concentrate karain
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Apr 24 2005, 04:29 PM
chhi hey

THANX DEAR...........
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Apr 24 2005, 04:49 PM
G Moon Bohat Achee Koshish Hay AAp Kee bus yeh shair delete kur dain q kay is ka matlab sahee nahee nikal raha hai

MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI

Q K yeh khayal he sahee nahee hay kay kisi kee chahat say zindagee kay neelam honay ka aehsas hoo chahat say to zindagee mousam-e-bahar lagnay lagtee hay neelami say to nakami ka aehsas hota hay or baqi ashar may to tareef hay phir is may q yeh ilzzam hay???

Lekin bohat achee koshihs hay aap kee is per tawaja dain or raat ko khas kur pen or note book lay kur soya karain q k achee poetries jo hain oon ka khayal khuwab may bohat ache milta hay to jaisay he khuwab may koee acha khayal a ay ossay oth kur likh lain ta kay subah tuk yaad rahay experince kur kay zaroor daikhna aap kamyabi yaqeeni hay bus concentrate karain

THANX DEAR..........................AAP NAY APNI ARA SAY AAGAH KIYA..............AAP KI BAAT SAHI HAI..........US SHAIR WAALI.......LEKIN AAP NAY DOOSRAY PEHLOO SAY USSAY DEKHA HAI...........IS MAIN BHI DOOSRAY SHAIROON KI TARAH...........KISSI AUR ANDAAZ MAIN TAREEF KI GAYEE HAI..........KAY ITNI ZIYADA MUHABAT HAI KAY BANDA NEELAM BHI HO SAKTA HAI.............THANX .............AIK DAFA PHIR SAMJHIAY............PHIR REMARKS DAIN........SHUKRIA........ Thanx>~
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Apr 23 2005, 05:05 PM
JAISAY SUBAH HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT MERI YUNHI TAMAAM HOTI HAI
JIS DIN NA DAIKHAIN HUM PASS SAY TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI KAY ZAAT MERI BENAAM HOTI HAI
AGER DAIKH LAIN KABHI AANKH BHER KER TUJHAY
NAZER JAISAY MERI KHUD SAY BADNAAM HOTI HAI
NAZER JHUKTI JAAAIY AGER MERI DAIKH KER TUJHAY
TO ZINDAGI JAISAY MERI TERI GHULAAM HOTI HAI
HO NA JIS DIN DIL MAIN TERA KHIYAAL
TO MERI ROOH JAISAY BE AARAM HOTI HAI
MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO DAIKHAY BUND KER KAY AANKHAIN MUJHAY
MERI SHAAERI JAISAY TUJH PAY IKHTATAAM HOTI HAI
PAANA CHAAHOON JO ZINDAGI KAY SUFFER MAIN TUJHAY
TO UMER MERI MAJNOON KA SA ANJAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO HUNS KER KABHI BOOLAY MUJH SAY
TO TERI YEH BAAT MERAY LIAY PIYAAM HOTI HAI
JUB TO MILLAY MUJH SAY BIN HUNSAY BIN KHILAY
TO MERI SHAAERI YEHI PER NAKAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT KAY BAAD PHIR NAAM SAY TERAY
SHUROO JAISAY MERI SUBBAH O SHAAM HOTI HAI
SHAID BHULA KER BHI BHULA SAKAY NA TUJHAY KHURSHID
KAY TERI JHUKKI NIGAH MERAY LIAY SALAAM HOTI HAI

assalam alaikum
nice yaar
buhut achi hai
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Sukh Da Koi Saa Na Avey...!

MOON007
Apr 23 2005, 04:05 PM
JAISAY SUBAH HOTI HAI SHAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT MERI YUNHI TAMAAM HOTI HAI
JIS DIN NA DAIKHAIN HUM PASS SAY TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI KAY ZAAT MERI BENAAM HOTI HAI
AGER DAIKH LAIN KABHI AANKH BHER KER TUJHAY
NAZER JAISAY MERI KHUD SAY BADNAAM HOTI HAI
NAZER JHUKTI JAAAIY AGER MERI DAIKH KER TUJHAY
TO ZINDAGI JAISAY MERI TERI GHULAAM HOTI HAI
HO NA JIS DIN DIL MAIN TERA KHIYAAL
TO MERI ROOH JAISAY BE AARAM HOTI HAI
MAIN CHAAHTA RAHOON AGER YUNHI ZINDAGI BHER TUJHAY
LAGTA HAI JAISAY MERI ZINDAGI NEELAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO DAIKHAY BUND KER KAY AANKHAIN MUJHAY
MERI SHAAERI JAISAY TUJH PAY IKHTATAAM HOTI HAI
PAANA CHAAHOON JO ZINDAGI KAY SUFFER MAIN TUJHAY
TO UMER MERI MAJNOON KA SA ANJAAM HOTI HAI
TU JO HUNS KER KABHI BOOLAY MUJH SAY
TO TERI YEH BAAT MERAY LIAY PIYAAM HOTI HAI
JUB TO MILLAY MUJH SAY BIN HUNSAY BIN KHILAY
TO MERI SHAAERI YEHI PER NAKAAM HOTI HAI
HER RAAT KAY BAAD PHIR NAAM SAY TERAY
SHUROO JAISAY MERI SUBBAH O SHAAM HOTI HAI
SHAID BHULA KER BHI BHULA SAKAY NA TUJHAY KHURSHID
KAY TERI JHUKKI NIGAH MERAY LIAY SALAAM HOTI HAI

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Allah pak aap ko hamesha kush rakhe Ameen :rolleyes:
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