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Oct 19 2004, 05:03 PM Post #51 |
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ya tis good. i need 2 see 6th chap be4 i write mine. |
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Oct 19 2004, 07:24 PM Post #52 |
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And I need DJ to post mine, before I can fix the matter of consistancy. I need to make the thing flow, as in present tense. I believe the whole matter of time standing still threw me off, and I couldn't keep a sense of reality in the story flow.. lol. |
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Oct 20 2004, 05:20 AM Post #53 |
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Chapter Five: A Rough Slumber There stood the pitch black sky, between the balance of the Heavens and the world. The air, in an unbarible frigid and stale state, held the stars in their place. The only visible luminescence was that of the sun, barely in sight from around the circular edges of the moon, whose position was in perfect alignment with that of the Earth. As the dusty debris slowly drifts by, the sky gives way to a new light. From within this light, gives shape to the barely decernible outline of a human-like form. Crystal clear appendages pertruding forth from the shoulderblades; a glowing white blade, fashioned into a great sword, held in the left hand. Head lowered, as if in deep meditation, or perhaps prayer to a higher being. This creature's head rises, and his glowing white eyes gaze deep within Coldfire's soul. Coldfire feels his chest rise, as startlement floods his concious existance. The feeling of extreme disappointment intrudes, and great confusion overcomes him. "Listen closely, for my time is short, and your tasks many." As the figure spoke, the very air shook, and the words were perceived by Coldfire in an echo of two tones, if not more, in unison as one. Now aware of his surroundings, Coldfire peered around nervously to solve how he arrived in this place. There was no care of memory of the past, or even what his last concious state was, prior to this current moment. "Be not concerned of your place in existance." Coldfire had no care nor control in the situation to ask any questions, nor could he think, of hunger, nor of normally automatic thoughts which come in our wake. "Two are one, when two work as one. Overcome your transgression toward others, for it shall come back to haunt you. For these things I say now, unto you, are the primary steps along the path fate has reserved for you. Be weary of a great find, for one's good fortune is another's misfortune. Be prepared in these final days of judgement. For time waits for no mortal. Your actions speak far beyond that of your words. Be prepared. You will know the day, but not the hour." Darkness regained control of the situation, as the figure faded away. The Heavens, the earth, Coldfire viewed this all, held in the bind of time. As time began once more, the sun showed itself, and this light overtook all, blinding Coldfire beyond a tolerable degree. All is white, no sound is audible, no existance conceived. |
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Oct 20 2004, 05:22 AM Post #54 |
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That was dominoin's chapter All though i posted it he gets the credit for that one ![]() |
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| bobbydown | Oct 20 2004, 05:29 AM Post #55 |
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this story is like the best story ive ever read but i dont read to much but from what i have its awsome hahahah yeh im likeing it :lol:
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Oct 20 2004, 02:32 PM Post #56 |
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Yeah, I figured since most of the literature I write has to do with the fictional, and usually abstract, disconnected plot.. it would make a good dream scene. But what does this all mean? Does it have any connection to the path Coldfire is to follow? Will he have to endure these mentioned times of trial and tribulation, before that ending time of judgement? (Well, I know. But you'll have to wait for the later chapters to find out for sure. :P) |
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Oct 21 2004, 10:34 PM Post #57 |
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ummmm... dom... that sounded like one of the things they have at the end of crappy soaps like the bold and the beautiful. DJ when will the 6th chapter be up for viewin? i am busting to write my guest chapter. i think my writing style will fit in nicely between DJ's and Dominion's. |
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| Guest | Oct 21 2004, 11:26 PM Post #58 |
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umm, soon, hopfully! |
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Oct 21 2004, 11:26 PM Post #59 |
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Yeah, it's called a foreshadowing. I explained it all to DJ on a PM. So, you'll see, when he makes it that far into the storyline. But expect A LOT more reference to that chapter after I get going on later chapters for DJ, as to conclude the foretellings of his dream, which he was visited by Tyreal (the archangel from D2). And do keep in mind, Coldfire IS the D2 character of DJ, in the RS setting of a storyline. So, I figured it would be a cool idea to mix the two RPGs, with having Coldfire charged with the task of deciding the fate of Runescape, by the highest of all the angels (well.. after Lucifer's fall).
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Oct 21 2004, 11:34 PM Post #60 |
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I am about as good at writing a fantasy story as a wolly mamoth. I wrote a great holloween one once kinda steven King stlye. |
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