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Nov 10 2004, 09:28 AM Post #91 |
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DJ: I added one of the images from the Library of Varrock to your Chapter 1. Check there for it. Also, I am going to tell you as I suggested to Raven6666. Take horizon or even full-character screenshots of locations and events within your RS Tale. That way it will add even more 'credibility' to the likelyhood it could actually have happened (even though we know it didn't). Just a suggestion I came up with, and I may to it some in the future, along with chapters I add to RS Tales. |
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Nov 13 2004, 05:18 AM Post #92 |
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Chapter 7: CAPTURED! After a hard day's work, Coldfire headed back to Varrock, to rest for the night. He greeted the inn keeper and went upstairs. He heard noises coming from his room; he unsheathed his Mithril sword, the same one that struck him down in the Wilderness. He walked carefully across the wooden floor boards; he silently cursed them for being so loud. Putting his hand on the brass doorknob, he slowly, but carefully, opened the door. Nothing could be seen, yet. But the noises from the room had suddenly stopped. He stepped though the threshold, and into the hallway. There was a faint sound coming from the bed room. He cleared all the rooms up to the bedroom, just in case. “You can never be too careful.” he said to himself. He peered into the room. There was something on the bed. Letting his guard down, he went to the foot of the bed to peer at the objects. He stiffened, sensing something about him. What ever the thing was, it had its presence felt. Turning around sharply, there was nothing but a creepingly empty space. More sounds, they seemed to be surrounding him. A particularly loud noise came from behind the drapes. Not letting his guard down this time, he went to swipe again, but another loud behind him made him halt, inches from the curtains. Not in a very happy mood, Coldfire grew angry with this reckless playing. He found a bronze dagger from deep within his knapsack, swiveled quickly on the spot, and in a blur, threw it at the source of the noise. There was a loud clang as the dagger bounced off the amour of a large, looming figure. Coldfire readied his sword, and got into position for battle. He found himself outnumbered. Looking around the room, he saw that many people had appeared. He resigned in defeat, as he could not fight all the armour clad warriors that had formed a encircled him. He dropped his Mithril sword, and fell to his knees. Something hit him from behind, and his world went black. He woke up, and felt behind his head. There was an egg-sized bruise. He touched it, and felt a surge of pain though-out his body. Looking around the room he realized what he was in a cell. He spent the best part of a week here. The ways to define his cell was it had 3 stone walls, and a steel door. His food was shoved though a small window, that was shut most of the time. The cell was highly sound-proof, so if he shouted for help no one could hear him. If someone was approaching his cell, he couldn’t hear the foot steps. For the first time in a week, he heard something from outside the cell. A gentle scuffing of boots. Who ever it was outside, he was mad or late, by the tempo of the scuffing. It was a brisk noise. There was a disturbance just outside the door; Coldfire could hear a muffled noise that he thought would have been shouting. The bolts of the steel door began to draw across. They swung open, and five men entered. Seeing an opportunity, Coldfire got to his feet, and started to run at the men. No normal man could barge though that many people. Coldfire was no different. The men surrounded Coldfire. For the second time in a week, he was knocked unconscious. Coming to, he was being blinded by a series of lights. Hearing voices around him, he wondered if he was unconscious. Thinking about this brought back memories of the dream, and the cloaked human-like figure. He figured that at least he was conscious, hearing people about him talking. But he didn’t risk moving, for fear the observers would realize he was awake. Just behind his head he heard two people, engaged deeply in conversation. He tried to listen in, to understand what was happening in this situation. “He isn’t ‘It’” One of the voices said. ”Another screw up on your fault” the second voice said. “The prophecy said that we must capture “him” in order to survive.” ”Yes well, how do you know that this one isn’t him.” ”Running test with the most skilled apothecaries in all of whole kingdom of Misthalin doesn’t please you?” ”It's not that. We’ve made mistakes in the past. What could we do if he was “him” and we let him go?” “It would be catastrophic! Though these factors are important, the apothecaries are sure that this is the wrong person, though our servants were most useful.” ”He is awake.” A third voice stated. “DAMN!” The first one said. ”He heard everything…” The second voice said. ”Apothecary, Please fetch the mage and ask him to bring the runes needed to use a memory erasing spell.” The first voice said again. Coldfire cursed. He was caught, and was going to pay for it. ”At least I will get out, and go on my life as usual.” he thought hopefully, but he was wrong. |
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Nov 13 2004, 05:19 AM Post #93 |
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The "egerly" awated 7th chapter |
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| bobbydown | Nov 13 2004, 05:52 AM Post #94 |
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nice chapter there DJ!!!9/10 |
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Nov 14 2004, 12:25 AM Post #95 |
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Thnx bobby |
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Nov 18 2004, 04:45 AM Post #96 |
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Umm, chapter 8 is coming soon! |
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| Raven6666 | Nov 18 2004, 07:47 AM Post #97 |
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u already writin 8th? well i still need someone to write my chap 7 prologue out for me |
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Nov 18 2004, 11:39 AM Post #98 |
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Lol, good luck finding em, i couldn't cuz im busy now
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Nov 18 2004, 11:47 PM Post #99 |
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so....i can tel dom hasnt read it yet cuz it hasnt been corrected....(jk, no pressure dude) anyway, i need one more name for a char, he will be funny. So, dont forget to vote for ma stori......Happy reading ![]() |
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| bobbydown | Nov 19 2004, 12:18 AM Post #100 |
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call him el-tean-os yeh thats a top name.... its my columbian drug lord name |
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