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Cameo Freestyel
Topic Started: Sep 2 2009, 08:43 PM (69 Views)
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The Return

A lot older and a whole lot wiser
V hit her up, but first I must size her
Eat that sh*t up like a roll that's kaiser
They ask, what did you do to find her
A real girl, who is now a whole lot kinder
Turn off your blinder
Love being behind her
Quit smoking but now gained some weight
V still the great, eat everything up on the plate
Can't stand a snake
Push aside all the fake
Rewind time like a VCR or DVR
Sitting at the bar
V a drunken star
Been through more then most
Still dream about the west coast
Raise your cup up and toast
Please be humble, don't brag and boast
Lets get splifted and lifted, light up the roach
Far from first class, scratching up barely enough for coach
After five years ended it with my first baby mother
After 10 years I lost my one and only job, oh brother....
Miss the ladder, f*ck the former, well I oughta.....
Blow that f*cking place to pieces
When will my sister give me nephews and nieces
Reeces Pieces fill my belly, the sh*t breeches
No respect for authority, dreaming of beaches
Time teaches, a reverend preaches
They all suck like leaches
See sunshine, he reaches
Can't grab it or hold it
Just saying some bold sh*t
Be nice, don't scold this
After it dries, please fold 'em miss
Paranoid and skitzoid
The booze fill the void
Leaving like I'm deployed
Need an assistant like Lloyd
To answer my phone
Tell 'em I'm not home
Just want to be alone
To depression I'm prone
One is enough, f*ck your clone
Speak in monotone
Kick you off your throne
It's sh*t you've shown
You aren't great as the eight
Jon got smart, said f*ck Kate
I made a great big mistake
This sh*t I must shake
Sitting by a lake
See what my mind can contemplate
What is my fate
Just want love, not hate
And that love I found
So quiet it don't make a sound
Peace is all around
Finally it I found
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That makes Chubb want to dance. :dance: Treat 'em right, Vin. :cool:
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I'll get in on this at some point. May ta'maw.
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Sep 3 2009, 09:50 PM
I'll get in on this at some point. May ta'maw.
Let's do it, and if T Lev can find time between class, studying and partying maybe he can give us a few bars.
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I'ma try something different, rip it with no script
Kinda going off the head, semi stream of conscious
Whatever pops in I'll put it even if it's nonsense
It's bonkers how I bomb sh*t, so sick I could vomit
Stop it, got balls I can palm it
No homo, I meant my own though, I'm not in the zone though
Little off my game, it's not same, but f*ck it, can't complain
We play the game, the remains of the slain lames strewn in a lane in Brisbane
Who's to blame? Piss stains, pistols, pistons and pipsqueaks
The sh*t's weak but the sh*t's sweet, this week looks bleek
I might leak, leave that piss stain on the pipsqueak if he diss me
But I'm just poppin' off, there's no beef, no heat
Blank canvass with no beat, and f*ck beets
Yeah, f*ck 'em, they suck deek, who could like such sheet
Now I sound like a kid hating brocolli, probably, it's got to be
Nothing stopping me, rock 'em to sleep, lullaby, see Z's
Shut 'em down like ZZ would in August, like a bukakke and we all bust
Sure enough, truck 'em like a tour bus, the tour must
Continue, whether weak or sinew, beef stew or mildew
I see you, seen you, clean view of something that's absolutely nothing
Like squirrels humping like dumb things, vegetable dumplings
The last few bars got extra retarded, f*cked up like a hard dick
With the chick riding cowgirl, get it, f*ck upward with the pelvic thrusts
Literary skeet-skeet on a sheet and she queefs in the sheets, but it's neat
Beep beep, lemme eat, please please lemme beat, and I'll leave it to ya'll to tweet
Remember Tweet? The bitch with "Oops there goes my shirt" single
I hated that joint, it wasn't on-point, wack track with bullshit sprinkled
That was around '02, back in the high school days, in the I'm cool days
f*ck it, today and every day is still an I'm cool day
Making better than high school pay and held on to my cool ways
Back when if you saw a chick dancing freaky and singing "Gimme the light n' pass the dro"
She might as well have had a sign that said "Gimme the pipe" and blast the ho
All over, helter-skelter with that mastered plastered flow
Hallway cyphers and battle raps, verbally smack cats that don't know how to act
Them boys ain't nasty, they're just nasty, trashy, they needs baths
Your crew's not filthy, ya'll just filthy dicksuckers with kneepads
He's mad? Good. Got served between class or classes, but I prefered class because it sorta rhymed better, worked in my mind better, rewind never
That goes for Blockbuster, too, I'm not kind and I could give a f*ck about the sign
I don't know what to write next, so I'll write about not knowing what to write next
Then an idea struck, feeling brand new, brand new like Rhymefest
My quest is to let my rhyme fester and feast on any verse that think it's beast at least
Worried, not in the least, not in the least bit, I own bars, niggas leased it
Strange thought, released it, like David Tyree when Reese did
Is this creative rambling or just rambling, idiotic ideas just scrambling
Scrambled fragments just scampering but let loose with no tampering, nothing to hamper 'em
Lemme end it here and post this piece that lacks precision without revision
Tear it apart after and determine what it's missin' and how poorly it was written and what the f*ck is Streezy sniffin'
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No homo, I meant my own though, I'm not in the zone though
Little off my game, it's not same, but f*ck it, can't complain


Like it, that line caught me.

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Who's to blame? Piss stains, pistols, pistons and pipsqueaks
The sh*t's weak but the sh*t's sweet, this week looks bleek


I like the abstract word play there. Nice.

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I don't know what to write next, so I'll write about not knowing what to write next

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My quest is to let my rhyme fester and feast on any verse that think it's beast at least
Worried, not in the least, not in the least bit, I own bars, niggas leased it
Strange thought, released it, like David Tyree when Reese did


On point. :clap:
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Thanks. This sh*t wasn't as bad as I thought it would be. I wanted to just go off the top and write whatever popped into my head without trying to do punchlines, follow a scheme or setup rhymes.
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You aren't great as the eight
Jon got smart, said f*ck Kate

:laugh: It was only a matter of time before somebody made a reference to that. It works for you, too, with all them kids you got running around.

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Time teaches, a reverend preaches
They all suck like leaches

Diggin' that. And suck in more than one way. Time sucks the life out of you; preachers suck money.

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Paranoid and skitzoid
The booze fill the void
Leaving like I'm deployed


The best lines.
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