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MetalCoreSuitīs Sprites; tell me about my sprites edite theme
Topic Started: Apr 17 2010, 05:50 PM (2,411 Views)
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will you help me to stop with that and make better sprites?
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its really something you have to work on yourself
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rigth ok i will work harder ;im making another Omega Pirate But Its front pirate and its the real Pirate

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Zurginator,Apr 17 2010
12:35 PM
Looks a little (lot) bit pillow shaded.

isn't stuff that glows supposed to be pillow shaded?
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holy multi posting

dont muiltpost, theres an edit button for a reason

the last two were updates, adding new content, so they were fine... the second one wasn't adding anything though.
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   your biggest problem is pillow shading, and relying on the outline

I actually don't see a lot of pillow shading, except on the prime essence, which is supposed to glow (and thus be pillow-y).
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   its really something you have to work on yourself

his sprites are actually already quite good IMO... except the prime essence--which needs a little work.
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they are a bit small but that's probably the style you wanted to do it in. i like the little round bases you added to them... it makes them look like figurines or something.
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the mugshot looks like it's been resized. look how jittery it looks on the bottom of his bangs. however, I do like how you tried to antialias it a little bit. the head of the larger demon-like thing he's standing in front of looks like a resize as well, and is very flat as far as the shading goes. Otherwise, I really like the sprites--especially the chakra ball special attack.
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the biggest problems here seem to be the shading on his claws and the way you did his mouth/teeth. I'm not sure how you can fix the teeth though.

Also, don't get discouraged if people are critical to you. Especially on these forums (the people tend to be a little critical to new people).
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its nice, but i think the size needs to be increased, omega pirates are massive!
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i know its bigger but in a game you can only see heīs foot, and its just the beging iīllmake that the Phazon inside him glows and move
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Pomegranate,Apr 18 2010
02:30 AM
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holy multi posting

dont muiltpost, theres an edit button for a reason

the last two were updates, adding new content, so they were fine... the second one wasn't adding anything though.

The whole "adding updates" thing only applies if a couple of days have passed. There's no need to multi-post if it's only been a couple of hours. Or less than half an hour.
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CloudVaris,Apr 18 2010
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The whole "adding updates" thing only applies if a couple of days have passed. There's no need to multi-post if it's only been a couple of hours. Or less than half an hour.

Cloud is correct, look at the rules.

Then again, we all do it, so I'll let it slide this time.
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MetalCoreSuit,Apr 18 2010
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i know its bigger but in a game you can only see heīs foot, and its just the beging iīllmake that the Phazon inside him glows and move

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what?

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seriously, grammar please
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Zurginator,Apr 17 2010
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CloudVaris,Apr 18 2010
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The whole "adding updates" thing only applies if a couple of days have passed. There's no need to multi-post if it's only been a couple of hours. Or less than half an hour.

Cloud is correct, look at the rules.

Then again, we all do it, so I'll let it slide this time.

hmm interesting. MH must have changed the rules last time he was on (or somebody else did) because i specifically remember the double-posting rule to be "either 3 days between posts or an update to the topic." I believe that's also how Daz enforced it.
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That's exactly how Daz enforced it, and I remember that being the rules just as much as you do, someone changed them >_>
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You're splitting a rule in two. Three days between posts AND an update to the topic. That's pretty much the way it's been since I joined the forum.
I mean, why would it be "three days OR an update to the topic?" So after three days pass, you can post some useless nonsense to revive the thread?
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CloudVaris,Apr 18 2010
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You're splitting a rule in two. Three days between posts AND an update to the topic. That's pretty much the way it's been since I joined the forum.
I mean, why would it be "three days OR an update to the topic?" So after three days pass, you can post some useless nonsense to revive the thread?

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rigth ok i will work harder ;im making another Omega Pirate But Its front pirate and its the real Pirate

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i know its bigger but in a game you can only see heīs foot, and its just the beging iīllmake that the Phazon inside him glows and move

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...hard to read posts (i.e. ALL CAPS, AlTeRnAtE cApS, no spaces, no or excessive punctuation, 1337 speak, and so on).


Learn2Grammar.
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I'm thinking English isn't his primary language. But yes, it's a bit hard to read his posts sometimes.
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