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Omega
Topic Started: Mar 24 2009, 07:25 PM (2,120 Views)
timmehboy
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The shading isn't quite like that of the original Omega (you forgot some black and white highlights). Plus there's a black outline.
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I think the black outline is on purpose. Looks good. VerY.
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its not sex just cuz you switched hands
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and now i bring you...

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all but the queen are by me
queen is be me AND Rundas ;D

alpha is still WIP
Gamma is obviously WIP
Zeta is currently not-WIP xD


also, there is a black outline on the Omega
the the alpha isnt a towering huge thing, it isnt big enough to get the black highlight, nor the right shape
though i did add some white
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You need more sel-out, and I don't agree with the third Metroid's size and the alpha's size, so create a compromise between both sizes. Alpha still needs more work. I'm generally seeing a perspective problem: either make all sprites completely from the side or at an angle, like you did for the Omega. I'll make an edit of the Alpha sometime.
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The alpha still just looks wrong. They may all have outlines, but only he has a solid, black outline around the nucleus. And he just feels blurry/oddly shaded overall.. sorry I can't be more descriptive, but I can't put my finger on what's wrong with it exactly. It just looks muddy.
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<DesperadoBlue> its not masturbation if he's your time clone from another dimension

<proth> also elf scrotums are notorious for being leathery and unimaginably strong
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thats not black on the nucleus

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also, the gamma is still very wip, thats why theres no shading =P

size, shape, everything is still being toyed with
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It sure as hell looks black when not zoomed in. I'd suggest lightening it a bit. Also, some of his horns are grey-outlined, and two are black. Consistency plz.

Beyond that, the nucleus appears rather pillowed.

The green shell looks great though, if it's any consolation. Excellent texturing.
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<DesperadoBlue> its not masturbation if he's your time clone from another dimension

<proth> also elf scrotums are notorious for being leathery and unimaginably strong
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theres no grey... anywhere

the 3 horn on the front are surrounded by purple, the 2 leg clawthings are surrounded by black

also, i was focusing more on the armored part so, yay :3

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editedit*
i just saw something i need to fix...
10 points to whoever can tell me what it is
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Candy Man Criminal,Mar 31 2009
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theres no grey... anywhere

the 3 horn on the front are surrounded by purple, the 2 leg clawthings are surrounded by black

also, i was focusing more on the armored part so, yay :3

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editedit*
i just saw something i need to fix...
10 points to whoever can tell me what it is

The back leg of the original hangs down much farther.
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CM the nucleus is just obnoxious. I'll help you with it later.
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no points for zurg
the new one has a longer body

also, the fix is the double horns
on the alpha the back one stick out more, on the gamma its the other way around
that is now fixed =P

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nvm
the legs on the original come out of the membrane, which is erroneous

so lets call it a"creative difference"
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Love it man, cant wait for the whole thing.
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its uhm...
alot harder then the alpha D=
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Yeah, I can tell. Love how its turning out. Looks aweshum.
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thank you =D
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