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Intraspace (A sprite comic) six-eight; schools out=more strips coming
Topic Started: Mar 25 2006, 03:28 AM (507 Views)
CloudVaris
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Alright, new layout for this little thread. This post is going to be for all the extra strips, and the post on page 2 for prologue through strip 10. When it gets to the next page, I'm going to put strips 11-20 there, etc, etc, etc.

Sprites aren't my own work, blah blah blah..
here it is.
*Christmas/new years break... special?*
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oi... too lazy to comment. I already left a huge comment at the bottom when I MADE the thing, so... *shrug* meh.

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haha. i like it. :D>
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Really? Hm, that's a first. ;)
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just kidding, of course.
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HEY! HEY YOU! ALL OF YOU!
If you like it, lemme know. 'Cuz I like that kind of crap. It also gives me more incentive to do more. Or insentive. Not sure.
Edit: I'd also like to inform any... um... double postgage hawks that this isn't a double post, because it's like... 11-12 days after my last one. sos THERE.
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Coolman75,Mar 25 2006
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haha. i like it. :D>

Erm, ya.
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it was pretty good. i think i might acually start making some sprite comics.
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Yes.... a prologue. Will someone please tell me how to actually spell that?!

Have fun, it might take a bit to think of something clever for strip 6. The one I just made is crap... mostly because I tried to end on a Red v Blue quote. It... didn't work.
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CloudVaris,Apr 21 2006
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Yes.... a prologue. Will someone please tell me how to actually spell that?!

Have fun, it might take a bit to think of something clever for strip 6. The one I just made is crap... mostly because I tried to end on a Red v Blue quote. It... didn't work.

That's how you spell it. XD
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Woot! That proves it, I'm NOT dumb! Just stupid!
....Well, I screwed up. I can't make another strip until monday. Why, you may ask? (and regret asking)
Because every single sprite I use is on my school computer. And I didn't want to take it home this weekend. But in the summer I'll probably end up throwing strips out faster then you can read them.
Wheather they pertane to the story, or if they'll just be comics based on events that happened to me over the summer, we'll just have to find out.
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i like them
ROFL

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It's a blatant Planet Zebeth ripoff with a but-fugly pirate and other jokes stolen from Bob and George. Not impressive in the least. Get some original material, learn to sprite, and stop making excuses like "I'll fix it as part of the story" and just fix it already. Also, for God's sake, do NOT use a godmode author. Kabs and Dave are the only ones I've ever seen that can pull that off.. all the n00bs completely butcher it and make EXTREMELY annoying characters. Such as yours. Stick within the fourth wall, also.
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<DesperadoBlue> its not masturbation if he's your time clone from another dimension

<proth> also elf scrotums are notorious for being leathery and unimaginably strong
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Dazuro Ghenari,Apr 22 2006
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It's a blatant Planet Zebeth ripoff with a but-fugly pirate and other jokes stolen from Bob and George. Not impressive in the least. Get some original material, learn to sprite, and stop making excuses like "I'll fix it as part of the story" and just fix it already. Also, for God's sake, do NOT use a godmode author. Kabs and Dave are the only ones I've ever seen that can pull that off.. all the n00bs completely butcher it and make EXTREMELY annoying characters. Such as yours. Stick within the fourth wall, also.

Were you tired when you posted that? Or... hungover?
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Well, that's... blunt. I've just got one question... who the hell is Bob and George?

As long as there are SOME people who like the comic, I'll keep making it. And I WAS a little addicted to Zebeth at the time I started this... Just a bit <_<V;;
Which is why I went to the bonus stuff area and grabbed his strip layout.... Works better then the layout I made, anyway. That thing was just scary... and a pain in the arse to deal with.
I simply can NOT sprite. I can pretty much sprite inatimate objects. And even THAT gets iffy. Seriously. Daz, if you remember my swords...
I will not change my mind that I'll be adding text boxes and changing the pirate sprite later. It's not a thing of me being too lazy to do it. I already have all the resources I need, and it's not like it would be that hard to stick a new sprite in instead of the old one. I have my reasons, damnit!!

And.. this is the part where I feel relatively stupid. Mind explaining a bit what you mean about the fourth wall? If you mean the part where Samus talks directly to the reader while in morph ball... it's a freakin' prologue. Give me a break. It allows me to stick some more humor in later, which, if you haven't noticed, the comic kinda needs.
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But really, who's Bob and George?
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www.bobandgeorge.com

The father of sprite comics, the origin of author jokes, etc.

Fourth wall breaking is when they do things like comment on the fact that they're in a comic or game, such as having an author character or knowing that files need to be uploaded. Comics work best whenn they're done as a world to themselves, with perhaps the occasional reference to the outside world.
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<DesperadoBlue> its not masturbation if he's your time clone from another dimension

<proth> also elf scrotums are notorious for being leathery and unimaginably strong
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Hm, that should keep me entertained a while..
By the way, you won't have to worry about the god thing much longer. Again, story-related..

edit: ..hold on. Daz, did you think that I was the one that sprited that pirate?
...ah, no. Not a single sprite in that comic is mine.
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