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| Pomegranate | May 22 2008, 02:57 AM Post #91 |
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Prime Essence
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is the animation the process in which you created it? |
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| CloudVaris | Jun 1 2008, 07:46 PM Post #92 |
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...what the hell. On this computer, everything animated seems determined to finish their animation cycle at the same time. ...so I'll look again when I get back on MY computer. |
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| Pomegranate | Jun 3 2008, 01:21 AM Post #93 |
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shading on lower front leg needs to move a lil bit. back foot seems to move back and forth in a wierd kind of way. lowlighting on the crotch seems to disapper on a frame. overall the shading just seems a bit jumpy to me. |
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| Timmeh | Jun 3 2008, 01:51 AM Post #94 |
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That fucking trooper REFUSES to dance to any of the 20 songs I've tried so far. Get him a better tempo
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| Candy Man Criminal | Dec 16 2008, 12:32 AM Post #95 |
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shoulders are much too broad xD legs arent quite slender enough |
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| Candy Man Criminal | Dec 16 2008, 01:21 AM Post #96 |
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shoulder still dont seem right thought, i dunno, we need more opinions |
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| 072 | Dec 16 2008, 01:40 AM Post #97 |
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that 3-digit-number guy
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I think that the head is a bit too small, which makes the rest of the proportions seem weird. Otherwise, nicely done! |
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| Candy Man Criminal | Dec 16 2008, 01:44 AM Post #98 |
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| 072 | Dec 16 2008, 03:30 AM Post #99 |
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that 3-digit-number guy
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Looks good to me.
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| MrGuest | Dec 16 2008, 09:11 PM Post #100 |
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Guestinator the Guestinator
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Upper arms are too much a perfect diagonal. It makes it look very unnatural. |
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| Pomegranate | Dec 17 2008, 02:43 AM Post #101 |
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the shading seems pillowy to me |
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| Ryan-Phoenixan | Dec 17 2008, 04:57 AM Post #102 |
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Actually, looking at reference pictures, her shoulders need to be up a little more rather than slouched, if you know what I mean. Besides that, I actually think that the shading is marvelous. |
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| timmehboy | Dec 17 2008, 03:01 PM Post #103 |
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Women generally have a wider pelvis than men (I wonder why :P). I suggest you make her neck a bit longer and give her arms a less cylindrical shape (give a better shape of her shoulders and thin her arms). You should also make her forearms slightly longer, her hands more slender and give her knees more of a rectangular shape ( | | like that). Her feet seem strange, try and mess around with them. Good luck! |
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| Troid92 | Dec 27 2008, 06:06 PM Post #104 |
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Wow, that is great lighting.
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| Pomegranate | Dec 27 2008, 11:40 PM Post #105 |
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QFT |
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