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Topic Started: Jan 17 2006, 12:45 PM (8,496 Views)
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Liksmaskaren,May 17 2008
03:09 PM
The Andross cube.
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A bigger version.
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is the animation the process in which you created it?
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...what the hell.
On this computer, everything animated seems determined to finish their animation cycle at the same time.
...so I'll look again when I get back on MY computer.
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shading on lower front leg needs to move a lil bit.

back foot seems to move back and forth in a wierd kind of way.

lowlighting on the crotch seems to disapper on a frame.

overall the shading just seems a bit jumpy to me.
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That fucking trooper REFUSES to dance to any of the 20 songs I've tried so far. Get him a better tempo -_-
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shoulders are much too broad xD
legs arent quite slender enough
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shoulder still dont seem right thought, i dunno, we need more opinions
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I think that the head is a bit too small, which makes the rest of the proportions seem weird. Otherwise, nicely done!
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Looks good to me. :)
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Upper arms are too much a perfect diagonal. It makes it look very unnatural.
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Liksmaskaren,Dec 15 2008
08:57 PM
someone shrunk her head.
I'm so used to draw male characters that I didn't see the miniature head. :(

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the shading seems pillowy to me
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Actually, looking at reference pictures, her shoulders need to be up a little more rather than slouched, if you know what I mean.

Besides that, I actually think that the shading is marvelous.
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Women generally have a wider pelvis than men (I wonder why :P).
I suggest you make her neck a bit longer and give her arms a less cylindrical shape (give a better shape of her shoulders and thin her arms). You should also make her forearms slightly longer, her hands more slender and give her knees more of a rectangular shape ( | | like that). Her feet seem strange, try and mess around with them. Good luck!
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Wow, that is great lighting. :D
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Yay red text.
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Troid92,Dec 27 2008
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Wow, that is great lighting. :D

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