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... rey gak tau harus komentar apa

Deep, dalem banget yaa maknanyaaa asdfghjkl T_T bener-bener menghantam hati untuk ngga su'udzhon sama orang lain...

Diksinya keren ah :') mm... paling sedikit koreksi pada bagian "... kamarnya sang pelukis". Di situ kayak ada dobel subjek ga sih? Saran rey mah, 'nya'-nya dihilangkan aja hehehe

Keep writing, Author-san! :love:
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