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| We're re-writing the pilot!...; ...And you're the writer! | |
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| InvdrDana | May 17 2010, 02:18 AM Post #16 |
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Irken Elite
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@GHP; I guess I shouldn't have said 'start' then since I know you've done a bunch of scripts. By working on them, I meant going through them again, making sure they're exactly what you want...that sort of thing. Basically what you just said. ^^ |
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| Anonymous | May 17 2010, 08:26 AM Post #17 |
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@GHP You've obviously put in endless amounts of time and grueling work, I admire and respect that. Yet I think it's wrong to assume that just because you've already written up all the original scripts that they will inevitably become THE SCRIPTS for IZFAS-made episodes. You are head of the script department and an Admin, yet I believe the community deserves a chance to have their say in what should get produced. (And not just suggest a few editing tweaks.) Taking into account that I might offend you, I am not trying to deliberately tick you off or insinuate that you should just scrap everything you've written. I might have even misunderstood what you were implying in the first place. Furthermore, we shouldn't even bother with full episodes until we get more animators. We have three. It's a lot of work for so few people, especially since their doing it on their own time. The pilot is a good focus point, and if all goes well, we will attract more talent to our goal of bringing Invader Zim from the grave. |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 09:41 AM Post #18 |
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Well, I have something that's 1,034 words. Is that too long? I can cut it down. |
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| Josheh | May 17 2010, 09:49 AM Post #19 |
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Caustic Fiend
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@Lani No, that's fine. As long as it's not to complexed for the younger viewers. |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 09:53 AM Post #20 |
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Firestarter
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Okay. I did end up cutting it down to 1,009. (The extra words were just scene descriptions, anyway.) I'm revising it now... is if okay if I ask a friend to critique it before I post it? (It's no one on here, just a friend I occasionally ask to vet my writing. He'd be looking for typos and awkward wording, not telling me how to win. XD) |
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| Josheh | May 17 2010, 09:56 AM Post #21 |
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Caustic Fiend
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All right. Seems fair. |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 09:58 AM Post #22 |
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Firestarter
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Awesome. I'll have it posted later today or early tomorrow. |
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| Matts | May 17 2010, 02:03 PM Post #23 |
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The Ghosts Eyes
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@annoymous I understand what your saying and I believe you misunderstood what I said. what I wrote is just a rough draft of what is my personal vision on the episode itself, not to say it can't be edited and suggestion can't be made I just want members wasting there time on something that has already been done. Just wanted to throw that out for everyone. Also I justed wanted to tell everyone I personally also want to read some of the script to look for potenial writers in the near future. |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 07:28 PM Post #24 |
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Firestarter
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Ta-da, I guess. |
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| Awesomesaurous | May 17 2010, 07:49 PM Post #25 |
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Irken Civilian
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@Alohilani: It seems like a good idea! Short - it would probably be only about 2 minutes, so I guess that's a good thing... And that was a clever way to have Zim recap the premise of the show. I can just picture the terrible drawings Zim would do. He used to be good enough to draw houses (nightmare begins) but his skills have sadly devolved. Fun fact: Zim draws with his left hand and writes with his right! |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 07:56 PM Post #26 |
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Firestarter
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Thank you! I was trying to keep it really short. If needed I or someone else could revise it if it actually somehow won. Maybe Zim writes with his right hand because he's trying to look as human as possible and most humans are right-handed. Hey, maybe that's how his drawings got worse XD We don't actually see the creation of that horrible monstrosity from Bestest Friends; maybe it was right-handed |
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| Cosmographia | May 17 2010, 08:05 PM Post #27 |
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What time is it?
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I agree with Saurous! I love reading it, it was a nice re-cap and I like Dib's reaction at the end. =D Huh, hadn't thought about Zim being either left-handed or right-handed, mostly because in cartoons it doesn't matter. But thinking about Zim trying to be right-handed to be normal is hilarious, coming from a lefty. |
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| Alohilani | May 17 2010, 08:09 PM Post #28 |
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Firestarter
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Thank you 8DD |
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| Matts | May 17 2010, 08:15 PM Post #29 |
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The Ghosts Eyes
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If you needed help revising it later I could help. Also I thought it was quick way of reintroducing the IZ universe to people now it was well written, but at some times I didn't really see the humor except at the end with Dib correcting the drawings, but other than that it was very good! |
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| Simply Nat | May 18 2010, 06:26 AM Post #30 |
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Nat fo Shizzle
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I loved it, it was funny and sweet and a good re-introduction. ![]() I'm looking forward to seeing what the others can come up with.
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