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| Pilot Episode ; Tick-Off List; Things to do in completion of the pilot. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Mar 28 2010, 07:48 AM (3,575 Views) | |
| Josheh | Mar 28 2010, 07:48 AM Post #1 |
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Right, I've been meaning to do this for a while but never got the chance since I have been struck with the hard times of moving house. This will be a tick-off list showing the things we need to do and the order we will do them in. Key:- Complete strike through - Completed Half strike through - Near finishing Italic - Not done 1. 2. 3. 4. Animating 5. Finishing touches (Quick intro, Credits, Uploading to YT and Newgrounds? etc.) - I hope this is okay for you guys, this thread is pretty much going to be used as a library for all the episodes that are in completion of the episode, for instance when we get around to making 'Nubs of Doom' this thread will be titled "Nubs of Doom ; Tick-Off List". Simple, no? As I mentioned, this will be a library for this certain episode so I'll store eveything to do with this episode here to make it extra easy for those who hate browsing. So here I present all the other information about this episode. Script:- *May be edited by Skoo* Introduction of Doom - Plot/Writen Josheh - Edited by GHP - A fuzzing no-reception picture with a [.REC] sign in the corner comes onto screen without any effect. The title fades in onto the no-reception picture. It goes off of the grey fuzzing image along with the title, the [.REC] sign still being there. You see a zoomed in image of GIR's (robot-form) face on screen darting around his eye area making "OOOOH... AHHHH" sounds - Zim: (Off screen) GIR, GET AWAY FROM THE CAMERA, IT HOLDS DOOMY HORRIDNESS INSIDE OF IT SO I DON'T WANT IT TO GET DAMAGED. - You see they are now located in the living room from the background. Without GIR's head being seen the camera is placed into a full-screen normal-view position and GIR runs back to the middle of the view with a satisfied stupid look on his face, Zim being on the left, Minimoose on the right repeatedly rolling around in the air, he stops when Zim begins speaking - Zim: (Standing proud) Hello human worm-babies! It is I, Invader Zim! Here to show you your horrible-viral-earth-doom! So I present to you the most powerful enemies you have ever faced... - Zim: (Holding his arm to GIR like he's presenting a work of art) THIS. This is GIR. Fear the way he stares at you, with his taco-face-jelly. - Camera zooms into GIR's face staring neutrally into space with a different coloured background - GIR: (Still zoomed on face) I LIKE TACOS! - Camera zooms out to normal view and you see Zim looking blankly at GIR, Minimoose same expression as usual - Zim: Ehhh... This is Minimoose! The most advanced weapon in the history of doomyness, fear his tiny nubs! FEAR THEM NOWWWWW... Minimoose: (Zoomed and different coloured background) Squeak Zim: (Normal zoom now) Hnnn... Fear them with all your gooey heart cheese, for they will destroy you! And I, ZIM, will destroy you MOST. Especially you, DIB! - At that moment the camera swings over to the door and Dib kicks open the door, Gaz behind him but unseen for the moment - Zim: DIBBB... Dib: Ha-ha! I really have got you now Zim and this time nothing can distract m- Hey is that a camera!?! I might be on T.V, Wowee! Hey DAD, I'm on T.V! And Zim's an alien, I was right! I'm not crazy, you all thought I was crazy but I'm not crazy! ...HEY GAZ, come and check this out! - Gaz pushes past Dib, wearing her dark grey zip-up raincoat - Gaz: Speak now Dib, but when we get home ever-lasting pain will be set upon your huge head! Dib: HEY, MY HEAD IS NOT BIG. - Dib and Gaz start arguing but this turns into background noise. The camera swerves back over to Zim - Zim: GET OUT, GET OUT, GET OUT OF THE HOUSE OF ZIMMM! - Just as Zim finishes saying this on the left side of the coach, also the right corner side of the corner of the house, TAK in her ship bursts through the establishment destroying the whole right corner of the house, leaving Zim in alien form and Tak (Who doesn't care) exposed to the world - Zim: TAK!?! Tak: (Gets out of ship) MISS ME ZIM!?! Because of you the Tallest will NEVER approve my application for a INVADER. Because of YOU I got drafted into space! Because of y-- Zim: EH? Tak: I SAID, because of Y- Zim: EHH? Tak: ARGHHH, you do this EVERY time, I might as well NOT even BOTHER if your NOT GOING TO LISTEN! Zim: WHA? Tak: FORGET IT! I MIGHT AS WELL DESTROY YOU, ZIM! WHAT USE DO YOU HOLD THE TALLEST, HUH ZIM? ANY USE ZIM? - Taks ramblings soon turn into background noise. She is just saying stuff like "USE ZIM. WHAT'S YOUR USE." for this bit - Zim: MY USE? YOU WANT TO KNOW ZIMS USE? I. AM.-- Keef?!? Keef: (Standing right next to Zim) HEY BEST BUDDY! I saw loads of people in your house so is it your birthday, huh? Oh, I'm such a STUPID best-friend! I FORGOT his birthday! I'm so STUPID! Zim: (Pushing Keef outside, talking quickly) Yes, yes. Your a terrible friend... now go and destroy yourself... - Zim closes the door on Keef who stands and rants to the door how stupid a friend he is. This turns into background noise - Zim: This transmission couldn't get any worse! - You see Gir who chasing Minimoose who is hovering around Zim in circles - Zim: GIR. MINIMOOSE. GO DO SOMETHING LESS... ANNOYING? Now LEAVE MEEEE! - Gir and Minimoose walk/hover out the door, walking past Dib and Gaz, still arguing, bashing the door into Keefs face who doesn't notice - Zim: (Speaking to the camera again) Now you have seen a glimpse of the horrible doom that is all coming into your pork-brain lives VERY SOOOOON... - As Zim finishes a computer comes down from the ceiling showing Tallest Red & Purple (Purple only siggering because we have not got a VA for him yet) Zim: (Seeing the Tallest on the computer) Ughhh, greetings my Tallest! Is it the monthly inspection already? I thought it was-- Red: Questioning our power, ZIM? Zim: Not at a-- Red: Good, we just wanted to check how things where going on *Sniggers*, conquered the planet yet, ZIM? Zim: Ehhh... Not exactl- Red: WELL DON'T CONTACT US UNTIL YOU DO! - The computer screen goes black and back up to the ceiling, you see Zim stare blankly at the camera like he just wants to say "What the hell just happened?". The record sign leaves the screen, showing it's no longer on video. The camera faces up to the ceiling showing loads of purple wires, it zooms over the ceiling onto the roof where you see Gir and Minimoose sitting on the left side, the camera zooms over inside the satellite dish and the word "END" fades in and out. Gir grab the camera from the satellite dish and starts to video Minimoose - Gir: (Off screen) OKAY TAKE ONE MOOSE! Minimoose: Squeak Cue credits - END - Voice Actors (In order of appearance):- Swiblet - GIR :- InvdrDana - Zim :- Josheh - Minimoose :- MooseyFate - Dib :- Invader Rachel - Gaz :- Toto - Tak :- Nightshroud - Keef :- Keef's Lines Jonofthefunk - Tallest Red :- Non-Included Voice Actors:- Toto - Zim's Robot Mom/Dad Toto - Zim's Computer James - Lard Nar Composers:- Sonoftutuchoppy Bladez636 Killkhan Haloflooder Storyboarders:- Invader Rachel Cosmographia IrkenBlitz Alohilani (New edition to the team!) Animators:- Crow1992 SkooIsCoo (Edits/Snips) Deranged Black Kitten AlmightyTallestVoldy (Backgrounds) Animation Colours (?):- Toto - For any normal member, I recommend finding your best talent and applying for the job, everything counts! ~ Josh NOTE: This topic will be updated regularly. When we come to the making of a new episode the Script, People working on it and the Topic Title will change. *Updated - 22/04/2010 - 17:06 Edited by Josheh, Apr 22 2010, 11:06 AM.
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| Simply Nat | Mar 28 2010, 01:03 PM Post #2 |
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That's a sweet idea! I think it's a nice motivation to see the stuff we've done (or what the others have done) and what still needs to be done in a list. Thankies, Joshehmoose!
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| Toto the Obsessor | Mar 28 2010, 02:27 PM Post #3 |
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I guess I'll record my part while I still have my voice. I'll get a mic, hold on. EDIT: Do any of you mind if I ad-lib a bit? Edited by Toto the Obsessor, Mar 28 2010, 02:49 PM.
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| Cosmographia | Mar 28 2010, 02:58 PM Post #4 |
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What time is it?
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I think we first have to wait for the storyboarders to finish, and I think Skoo was going to give us homework, plus we would need her approval. But this is great, we're really making progress, and I'm getting really excited over this. >X3 I didn't get to storyboard this one for obvious reasons, but I'm working on an animation right now, and I'm working on some new auditions for voice acting, so I'll be ready to help out by Wednesday when my Spring Break starts. :) I do have a question though, for animation colors, does that mean the animators post them black and white, or are animation colors just add the effects? Just curious. :D |
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| Toto the Obsessor | Mar 28 2010, 03:04 PM Post #5 |
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Well, I'm just recording my bit, to see if it fits. It's just practice, but I need to know if I'm giving off the mood that Josh wanted when writing the script. |
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| Matts | Mar 28 2010, 03:08 PM Post #6 |
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The Ghosts Eyes
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Skoo already approved this Cosmo just to let you know |
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| Cosmographia | Mar 28 2010, 03:15 PM Post #7 |
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What time is it?
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I know she did, I meant that, since she's the supervisor and everything, that we should wait until she resolves whatever's going on so she doesn't feel left out. |
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| Matts | Mar 28 2010, 03:28 PM Post #8 |
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well that could be hard with whats going on with her parents in the hospital but thats why we have Malos as a admin |
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| Josheh | Mar 28 2010, 04:33 PM Post #9 |
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Okay, right. I'll try to answer all the incredibly meaningful questions. @Toto Ad-libbing is what I wanted you to do, do your own thing, go crazy, and I mean CRAZY when she's pestering Zim, imagine YOU'RE pestering somebody in real life! Now THAT is what I would love you to do! ^^ @Cosmo Don't worry! Skoo has accepted all the main things as GHP mentioned. Since her absence, she stated in one of her newly spars visits to the forum that the next thing she wants done is voicing, and storyboarding is only really meaningful to the animators because they need reference to the characters expression and so on, so it will be okay to voice, it wont change anything unless it means one more step nearer to completion! :D And yes, black and white would be better for the animation, I believe Toto is colouring them, still don't know for sure so I wouldn't hesitate to do anything yet. |
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| Nightshroud | Mar 28 2010, 06:17 PM Post #10 |
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I'll record my lines soon. :3 Just a question though... Should I do the lines in one recording and leave a time gap between the lines, or should I do each one individually? And for when I talk to the door, I just say whatever I want as long as it pertains to me talking about 'how stupid of a friend I am for forgetting Zim's birthday', right? |
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| Josheh | Mar 28 2010, 08:11 PM Post #11 |
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Caustic Fiend
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You're correct on every self asked question, and here's how you should do the speech. HEY BEST BUDDY! I saw loads of people in your house so is it your birthday, huh? (pause) Oh, I'm such a STUPID best-friend! I FORGOT his birthday! I'm so STUPID! And incase you need any help on background noise just continue using words like ME, STUPID, ZIM, FRIEND, BIRTHDAY over and over again, if you feel up to it try and put them into sentences, this is all going into background noise so it doesn't really matter what you do as long as it follows a long the lines of 'forgetting Zim's birthday'. |
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| HeyImDan | Mar 28 2010, 11:13 PM Post #12 |
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Smeet
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Hey I'm a new member. I'm pretty good with computers. mostly sound editing. How do I apply for a job? |
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| InvdrDana | Mar 28 2010, 11:21 PM Post #13 |
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Nice idea Josh! ^^ Since I'm still getting over this cold, I won't be able to do anything besides practice. But I'll start voicing as soon as I'm able. :D |
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| InvdrDana | Mar 28 2010, 11:28 PM Post #14 |
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@Dan; You'll want to check out the Music and Sound Effects thread underneath the 'IZFAS Refresh' section. Fill out an application and either PM SkooisSoCoo or Malos Z. Irkinia. :) |
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| Josheh | Mar 29 2010, 06:42 AM Post #15 |
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@Dana Glad to hear the cold's passing, and I hate to say it but you've got quite a lot to say, so...drink lots of water! ^^' I really didn't know how to respond just their, but seriousley, Zim gets adjetated quite a lot in this episode in-perticular so please try not to strain your voice to much when practising, just do all the major screaming and such in the atuall recording, and could you please send me a message later so I can inform you were you get angry, when you're neutral, paranoid etc. Thanks - |
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