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De Luca, Alessandro
Topic Started: Sep 21 2010, 03:35 PM (313 Views)
Alessandro De Luca
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Alessandro Giovanni De Luca

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* Show me your and Ill show you mine
Don’t you worry your to fine
We have one thing on our mind
And we got plenty of time. .

HEY THERE. THE NAME IS NATHAN, AND I AM 19.
I'VE BEEN ROLEPLAYING FOR ABOUT 2 years
AND MY OTHER CHARACTERS WOULD BE No one. I FOUND FKAC AT Caution 2.0. OH, BY THE WAY, I READ THE RULES. WANT PROOF?
THE CODE WORD IS pumpernickel
WANT TO REACH ME? HERE'S MY IM: AIM rotcdude09

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  • - - - - Full Name, Alessandro Giovanni De Luca
    - - - - Title, Lord (Courtesy Title), Father, Reverend, Master of Lucan,
    Presented: The Reverend Father, Lord Alessandro Giovanni De Luca, Master of Lucan
    - - - - Gender, Male
    - - - - Sexuality, Heterosexual
    - - - - Age, 22
    - - - - Place at Court, Confessor and priest, member of the queen’s royal household
    - - - - PB (Play-By), Aaron Bruckner
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  • - - - - Loves,
    Money
    Gambling
    Sex
    Woman
    Francisca Di Medici
    Having fun
    God
    The Vatican
    Italy
    Parties
    His station
    England
    - - - - Loathes,
    Those who get in the way
    Not getting his way
    Losing
    Not having a good time
    Being rejected
    Someone mistreating Francisca
    Someone telling him he is a horrible priest
    Those who think they are better than he is
    Being told what to do
    Feeling alone
    - - - - Strengths,
    Good listener
    Confident
    Keeps secrets well
    Smart
    Loyal
    Ambitions
    Speaks multiple languages
    - - - - Weaknesses,
    Stubborn
    Woman
    Gambling
    Sex
    Caring
    Snoop
    - - - - Dreams,
    Become a titled noble
    Become a cardinal or bishop or even the pope
    Make a name for his self
    - - - - Fears,
    The pope’s wrath
    - - - - Overall Personality,
    Alessandro Giovanni de Luca is a person that would make any upstanding person turns their backs on. He has multiple sides to time so side number one is his priestly side, he is a priest and that is how he is. He is a really good listener, able to listen to the confessions and understand them. He is an understanding character and can relate to people he speaks to just because he can put himself into the mindset. Makes him good at coming up with a solution as well if it is needed. He has closed lips; whatever is told to him by those he takes confession from it will not pass from his lips. One of the things that make him quite valuable. He is smart and quite knowledgeable in areas of states craft, languages, the word of god and much more that he may be needed to act as counsel on. He is the son of an Italian Marquise and was around the states craft and learned it.

    He is a charming personality when you meet him, able to get along with nearly anyone though even the most charming person in the world has enemies, and he is not perfect. He is persuasive as well and over all quite easy to get along with. People who come around him usually feel at ease in his relaxed aura. Though he can be quite stubborn and will do as he chooses even though people advise against it. He just chooses what he wants to do and does it. He has a bit of a temper, he has one of the slow tempers that you never ever want to see really, and once it is worked up it takes a while to come down. One thing that makes him stand apart from others is his ambition.

    His third side gets a bit nasty, not in the disgusting way. More of the twenty-year-old male way. He likes to gamble, loses money, wins money it does not matter he loves to gamble and take his chances, which is a thing that carries over to his life, he loves to take chances and try new things. He likes to drink and gets drunk from time to time, not only that he is a bit of a sex addict as well. Cannot give it up really, needs a partner frequently though he only goes for the women. He has a dirty mind and it ends up in the gutter quite frequently.
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  • - - - - Family Members,
    Marchioness Adrianna Gonzanga (Mother)
    Marquis Enrico De Luca (Father) of an Papal Fiefdom
    Lord Fabio De Luca (Older Brother and Heir)
    - - - - Overall History,
    Twenty-Two years ago in Fief Lucan an Imperial fief Alessandro Giovanni De Luca was born. Younger son of the Marquise of the land he was born into privilege. Servants all around to follow his every order and just about anything he wished. When he was a young boy you could find him out in the fields with his older brother, playing and running. Chasing animals and riding horses. Just spending their time out in the free range. Though that was not going to last forever.

    When he was nearly ten years of age his father came to speak to him. As the younger son he would have a courtesy title as a Lord but would not mean anything really, That he would inherit nothing, That he had multiple choices though to make his way in life, as a noble he had many open doors, he could become a Knight, or he could become a scholar or an ambassador. Saying that the young boy was not a fighter but a lover decided to follow his love for god. He was sent to Cardinal Giovanni, his father had pulled a few strings and sent him to become one of the cardinals Protégé.

    He was a gifted young man in the way of god, he could listen and memorize and learn fast. That his knowledge was expanded beyond just what a common priest might know but into other areas that he had previous experience with his father. They expanded his knowledge into languages, statecraft, ambassador and much more that a cardinal, bishop or even the pope himself had studied and he picked it up quickly.

    Though there was a downside to his quick knowledge, the young man discovered the pleasures of a woman, the drink and gambling slowly throughout the years. One night when he was about thirteen years old he was walking about the castle and ended up in the guards house in which the guards jumped up at the entrance of a noble, even an untitled one like the Lord. A dice fell to the ground and he was intrigued. He inquired about it with the guards that were right there at the moment. They told him about gambling and putting money on the line about which dice wins and the boy wanted to play. So the guards were more than happy to take the young Lords money, little did they know that the boy had a lucky streak a mile long and he took their money instead. Sadly though this winning reinforced his ambition to make a life for himself and his urge to collect gold.

    That started his urge to gamble and that continued in private, it was a surprise that the Cardinal did not find out just yet about how much the boy was gambling but that was it for a little while. A couple of years and he was studying in his room English and his best friend came stumbling in drunk with a bottle in his hand and Alessandro did not know what was going on, he tried the drink that was present and liked it, he drank the entire bottle, He loved the feeling it gave him of freedom.

    Though this picked up for he loved to be free it still did not get caught, the thing that did get caught though was just a little ways off. It was not long before the young man began to notice the female charms and had the urge driving through his body to act. He saw this beautiful young woman, a servant nonetheless but she was beautiful and had fallen for the young mans natural good looks. She began to tempt him and tease him more and more.

    Though one day he was in the chapel praying when she came into the room and saw him. She then began to tease him and he could not stand it any more. He began to kiss her. She grabbed the front of his clothing and dragged him toward her and into the confessional booth. He was experiencing this pleasure for the first time and it was not long before someone entered the church and heard the moans of pleasure from the confessional. They ran down the hall toward the Cardinal and drew his attention to the chapel where the noise was.

    The cardinal opened the door to see two naked people in the room and one he instantly recognized as Alessandro. He pulled the boy out of the mix and threw his clothes at him. Forcing him to go to his office, he chastised the boy for defiling god’s temple in such a way. Said that he would never mount to more than a village priest like this. Though it did not matter to Alessandro he was hooked, just like the other unapproved activities he had gotten into in his youth he was hooked on the feelings it gave him. He loved it and could not give it up.

    The boy continued his training and continued with his unapproved behavior quite frequently actually. The was an addiction and nothing else, Adding notches to his bedpost every night, taking the young women’s innocents similar how his own innocents had been taken by a young woman. He used his charm and skills he learned as a priest combined with his stunning good looks to get his way and did every night that he went out for a companion.

    He was finishing up his training just about the time of the great plague and the old priest to the young Francisca De Medici died due to the fever. She was due to leave for England very soon and he had just finished the training. The Cardinal tried not to allow the young priest to go on this adventure to England but the Pope interceded. The young man was simply the best of all the students, gifted and strong in the areas that may be needed by the Lady, not to mention his own noble background as well. He was chosen for the job by pure luck and skill really. For everything had been working against him.

    It was not long until he was on the ship to go to England and in that time he began his job as the personal priest and confessor for the lady. She though became quite fond of the young man and his unorthodox way of doing things, how he listened and could actually give sound working advice when needed. He too grew fond and loyal of her, he saw her kindness and actions to all mankind no matter what and that he could respect very much.

    It was not long until the ship landed and the two already started to grow a bond between them, not a sexual one that Alessandro was quite well known for but a true bond of trust and friendship. Recently the young woman was married to the King of England, in which he attended, now he is the personal Priest and Confessor of the Queen of England, possibly the only man in the world who could say that he truly knows her. He would never betray her trust though he is absolutely loving the rewards he is getting for his trust and new position in the church. Becoming quite influential and has ambition enough to reach the stars.
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  • - - - - Role-play Sample,

    I hope from any where is good.

    She had not really noticed that he was there though that did not bother the boy much. He knew it was only a matter of time, he had the same effect on all females, they would turn their attention on him and have a hard time pulling it away from him and he knew that, which he was right a moment later she looked up.

    She then stated that he was not very sorry about much. He smiled at her with that one, his kind of dark yet charming smile. He knew that she was absolutely right. Then again as a vampire you could not get to apologetic. The moment you turned your back trying to be apologetic you could end up shot up with vervain by some witch waiting for your back to be turned. He knew this was not true of all witches, but he was not stupid enough to trust them all right off the bat but did believe that some just did not do that. Somewhere like him, just trying to live and in their case practice magic.

    "I’m well, starving as always so got to eat… what brings you here?”

    He was not to surprised about either one of these statements. She was not a vampire and would get hungry more often. He was not really that hungry, he had just had some blood that morning so he was good to go, being pureblood he drank blood more frequently than his mother but he could still control the thirst much better. He knew he was good to go. As to her question he had his answer ready.

    Well to people watch of course, have had an interest in human psychology for sometime now. Love to watch people, maybe even get in a bit of light reading and the service great here.


    The waitress then brought over her drink and Anna then handed him the menu, he just passed it to the waitress as he spoke. His pupils narrowed as the glamour went to work.

    Gorgeous, just bring me whatever you think is good.

    He had learned quite sometime ago that if he asked for that the waitresses would take forever just trying to pick the perfect thing to impress him when he just wanted what they thought was good. It was the perfect way for him to try new things and how different people liked things.

    He then turned to Anna, So how’s school, your family, how’s my brother handling himself at football. He made me promise not to watch him until the first game.
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Alessandro De Luca
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Done
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Henry Percy
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Hi, I'm so glad you took Francesca's priest and I love his PB! However, there are a few things that needs to be done.

There is a lot of grammatical and spelling errors in the text, both in the application and the rp sample. I suggest you run it through a word processing system. Try reading the text out loud to your self and see if it flows well. Francesca is also spelt with an E, not an I.

Also, I think you mean Papal Fief, not Imperial Fief. Italy was not under the direct rule of the Holy Roman Empire at the time and most of the lands was conceded into the Papal States so Alessandro's father would have ruled over the papal fief. In addition, because of the lack of Dukes in the Italian States, I don't think his uncle would be appropriate as a Duke unless you link him to a historical duke, like the Duke of Ferrara or something along those lines.

Just fix those things and you'll be fine :)
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Alessandro De Luca
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He is not done but felt like I needed to post here to say that I am having trouble finishing him for I am majorly cramming for midterms, last one is wends so hope to have him done then if not soon after
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Alessandro De Luca
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Updated, hope it is better
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Alessandro De Luca
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Ready to be reread
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Catherine Howard
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Hey there. We'll have Angie take another look at it (school is evil), and she'll let you know what she thinks! :)
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Giovanna Borgia
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I really like the history. It's great and historically accurate in very interesting ways. :D However there are still some things that need to be fixed.

The grammar is still a bit off so I would like to ask you to check it again. Also, Francesca de Medici is spelled with an E not an I, so please change that and keep that in mind for the future.
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