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| Super Robot Wars Original Chaos; Revised Chapter 1 | |
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| Light02 | Apr 24 2011, 01:27 PM Post #1 |
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Super Robot Taisen Original Chaos Disclaimer: I don’t own any of the characters featured here. Ranma is owned by Rumiko Takahshi, the characters from Super Robot Taisen (Wars) Original Generation are owned by Banpresto Chapter 1: Enter the Wild Horse Prologue AD 184 Ranma Saotome looks onwards to the shuttle his cousin was taking him on, “Are you sure it’s a good idea for me to come with you …I mean Nerima will probably tear itself a part looking for me.” His cousin smiled at him she looked at him blonde hair getting into her eye sight, "Relax Ranma," she teased ruffling his hair, "you need to relax big time cuz that's why auntie called me," she says, "Auntie Nodoka thought you could use some time away from that chaos there." Ranma blushed at that remark, “Just be glad none of them found us before we boarded the shuttle or you would’ve found out in real time just how true what I told you were,” he said as he found his cabin and entered. A moment later a knock on the door made Ranma jump slightly, “its open,” with that the door opened and Excellen stepped in. “Ranma, if you need anything were just right across the hall,” She said once Ranma opened the door. Ranma blinked at that, “uhh…sure enjoy the flight Excellen-chan,” he says as she smirks at his uses of an informal suffix around her. Unbeknownst to them someone was making her way toward the engine room as the shuttle headed into orbit. * * * Shuttle Control Room “Course set Captain,” the navigator said as the ship shuddered. The Captain sat back at his controls, “Auto pilot set, and ETA 3 days.” * * * Unknown part of the Shuttle Xian Pu knew her airen was close, she saw him board this vessel with that easy girl and cold man. She can wait for days in her hunt. * * * The Next Morning “Good Morning Ranma-kun,” Excellen greeted her cousin feeling completely refreshed. Ranma on the other hand looked like death warmed over, “ugggggggggg…” Excellen chuckled, "rough night?" she asked. "More like a quiet night," he says, "too quiet I was expecting an ambush 3 times last night and couldn't sleep." as he reaches for something he learned from Nabiki that would wake him up coffee. An hour later the cousins finished there breakfast and decided to check out the observation deck, Ranma having never been out in space before was amazed by the fact that they were nearing the Moon. * * * Engine Room Xian Pu was lost she didn’t know the outsiders had stuff like this most of this didn’t mean anything to her mind, only that it was something of the weak outsider society. “Damn it,” she cursed in Mandarin, “Stupid outsiders, why must they always be this confusing on everything,” she yelled before smashing a key component of the engine with her Bon-Bori shattering the component. The craft shook as the reactor casing was hit by a wild bon-bori hit. The explosion that followed ejected her throw the hull into space…her last thoughts were, Aiya it really is round… * * * Observation deck the same time “What the hell was that,” Ranma asked as he was jerked by the explosion. Excellen who had a feeling of what just happened, "I don't know," she says to him as another passenger a guy with brown hair and blonde highlights approaches them in male version of the uniform Excellen is wearing. "It's probably not a good idea to be roaming around right now head back to your quarters," he says. It was a few minutes after they got back to their quarters when everything went black for them. * * * Unknown location and Time (all alien dialogue will be subtitled). “These two are special,” said a voice in the shadows replied with an alien tongue, “This ones luck and the females attachment would make perfect subjects in the Queen’s master plan.” “We have an anomaly in this one...” another voice said, “There seems to be two sprit signatures in this one.” “Intriguing,” the first voice said looking over the results of the third survivor, “extract the second soul and correct any other anomalies you find,” before the first voice left the room, “Also enhance the female as well she needs to be strong for our new ‘Adam’.” With that everything went quiet. * * * Langley Base North America ATX HQ AD 187(3 years later) Ranma looked up at the military base, 'So this is it huh...' he the thought as he tried to loosen the collar on the red trimmed Earth Gov Military Uniform, he joined shortly after he was rescued from that shuttle accident. The unit patch for ATX looks newly sown as well as the bars of a 2nd Lt. He made his way to the commander’s office. Kyosuke Nanbu, Squad Leader, and temporary commanding officer due to Commander Zombolt’s absence of Team ATX was sitting in his office going over the reports ever sense the war with Arrowgaters things have calmed down enough for him to settle down and do the reports. A knock on the door broke his concentration on his work, "It's open," he said as the door slid open and Ranma entered. "Ano..." Ranma said looking kinda nervous, "excuse me sir,” he said not recognizing Kyosuke, “I’m looking for the Team commander?” Kyosuke just looked up at him a look of familiarity passed over the Squad Leader but ignored it asking, "What I can I do for you?" Ranma blinked acouple of times before saluting, "2nd Lt. Ranma Saotome reporting for duty," he said before handing Kyosuke is folder. Kyosuke recognized that name, ‘oh great now the family is all here’ he thought. Excellen had told him all about her elusive cousin that recently joined up with the EFA looking at the folder. 'Impressive scores, He beat some of Date's records in training, I wonder how Ryusei took it ' he thought as he looked through another page of the folder, 'he's a Psychodiver,' he raised an eyebrow at that line, 'unsuitable for T-Link due to the system was unable to keep up with him but showed plenty of prospect in the Orgone System that's up for testing,' he finished, "I guess I should welcome you aboard, your unit is still en-route as well as your training partner 2nd Lt. Coulange and the rest of the test teams for the two new machines." Ranma nodded and relaxed some, “Thank you,” before something that had been bothering him came up, “Ano…sir, do you have any idea about how this Orgone system works?” Kyosuke just stared at Ranma and answered, “You will be fully briefed on the system when the Coustwell and the Vorlent arrive,” he checked his watch before standing up, “let me show you around the base most of the other pilots are in the main hanger working on there machines.” Ranma smirked slightly at that, “how about the hanger first I might as well get acquainted with the rest of the team.” * * * ATX Hanger “I’m telling you the truth, Excellen,” a male voice echoed though the hanger, “I saw someone in uniform heading for the Squad Leaders office.” “Really Bullet,” Excellen said as she worked on her unit, the Weiss Ritter, “you need to relax; your just as tense as my cousin Ranma.” Brooklyn T. Luckfield or as he wants to be called Bullet, reacted to that line, “Again comparing me to this so called cousin of yours again,” he grumbled, “I mean who in there right mind would believe that he had 3 fiancée’s and one girl claiming to be his wife is absurd.” “Oh really Bullet,” a male voice said off in the distance, Bullet and Excellen turned to see who was speaking on to see it’s there Squad Leader, Kyosuke standing next to a man in uniform, “why don’t you ask Ranma for yourself seeing has he’s just been assigned here.” Excellen perked up at that and jumped to the ground and ran towards Ranma pulling him in a big hug his face right between her assets, “It’s good to see you Ranma-kun.” Ranma blinked at that, “Excellen-chan,” then he looked over to the squad leader finally putting two and two together, “So you're the guy Excellen has been gushing over in her emails.” Kyosuke raised an eyebrow at that, 'what did she say about me to him?' he rubbed the bridge of his nose, he was really needing a cup of coffee now as he noticed a new unit in the hanger, “your temporary assignment Saotome?” Ranma looked over noticing a Back with Red Trim Gespenst with similar shoulders to the Weiss Ritter, “Oh the Mk-IV, yea it’s a bit sluggish on the response but that’s due to the T-Link system from my experiences.” Bullet just boggled at that, the T-Link System was slow for someone, “That’s impossible I couldn’t keep up with the T-Link System when I used it.” “I’ve been trained since I could barely walk to be always ten steps ahead of my opponent,” Ranma said going into a sensei like voice, “thanks to that my mind is so fast the T-Link can’t keep up.” Bullet was about to reply when the alarm went off, “Enemy attack?” he asked, “I thought we took care of DC and the Arrowgaters.” Kyosuke wasted no time he sprang to his machine the Alt Eisen, “Mount up,” he said has he sat down in the cockpit seeing the others running to there units. * * * Outside near the base “Ok listen up grunts,” came the leader’s voice from the bulky Grungust, “I hear there’s a new Gespenst model being tested here as a bench mark for the line,” as he paused, “our mission is to capture the new model and analyze it.” A chorus of “Roger” came from the lines of Lion-F’s and Gespensts before a blast from the distance pierced the armor of one of the flying Lion-F’s. <<BGM: Hakugin no Datenshi>> “Lucky shot,” a feminine voice came from a flying white unit. “Good work Excellen,” a male voice replied from the unit in front. “Wow I thought it would have missed,” the reply came from the Black and Red trimmed Gespenst. Excellen just looked hurt, “oh…my own cousin who thinks I’m a lousy shot.” The Gespenst just rocked back, “you sure you not related to my old man instead?” The Enemy PTs just looked back and forth amongst each other before the Grungust pilot yelled, “hey no banter we’re your opponents,” he made the Grungust’s arm point to the lead machine, “Hand over the Mk-IV.” Ranma looked at the rest of his team mates, “You want this slow hunk of junk,” he said as he made the arms move into a offensive stance, “then you're gonna have to rip me out of the cockpit,” he sneered before he said to his teammates, “The Grungust is mine the rest you can handle.” The pilot of the Grungust just smirked, “A real type pilot thinking he can handle a super type robot,” he laughed at that thought, “you’re welcome to try punk.” Bullet, from the cockpit of his Huckebien Mk-II, had to admit Ranma had balls of steel for challenging a Super Type in a Real Type Robot, “I’ll go watch Newbie’s back,” he said hoping to snap some sense into Excellen’s cousin. “Butt out Blondie,” Ranma said with a huff, “This is my fight no one interferes or they will get the shit kicked out of them by yours truly.” Excellen decided to break the argument up, “Enough of the pissing contest guys we got enemies to blast,” she said as she throttled off towards one of the Lion-F’s, “Kyosuke cover me I’m going in.” <<BGM: Koutetsu no Beowulf>> Kyosuke just grunted and charged one of the Gespenst’s, his PT’s right arm raised in a strike, “Roger that,” and slammed the spike into the Gespenst’s cockpit, “Pierce through revolver stake” while firing from a revolving chamber connected to the spike before yelling at the others, “Don’t just stand there get moving!” “Roger,” Bullet said charging a Gespenst with his Huckebien slamming into it with a plasma cutter. <<BGM: Fate (Super Robot Taisen J*)>> Ranma smirked as he pulled two G-Pistols out from the holsters of his Gespenst, “Was wondering when you were gonna expand the invitation,” and boosted the rockets towards the Grungust blasting anything in his way, “out of my way suckers,” he barked at a unlucky Gespenst Mk-II that got it in the head and chest area. The pilot of the Grungust was impressed he didn’t think the Mk-IV was that agile. “I see you got some skills kid,” the pilot said while chuckling. Ranma smirked, “eh…I’ve done better,” he said nonchalant as he flipped a couple of switches in his control system with a tone sounding to let him know something was released, “Psychodiver systems online,” he said before giving a vocal command “T-Link system, activate,” he said as he felt his sense expand out of his cockpit and to all around him as the sounds of battle became more focused to him, “all systems, green & ready, BM selection Jet Magnum,” he said once again as he took to an aggressive stance letting the twin set of spikes on each arm come to bare and begin glowing a faint blue. The Grungust pilot was fully laughing now, “Is that all you got?” Ranma smirked as he began channeling his telepathic powers into the rippers, “Just getting started,” he said as the glow shifted from blue to green, “OK!!!...DOUBLE T-LINK JET MAGNUM!!!” he yelled as he slammed the boosters down propelling himself towards the mighty Grungust while the spikes into the Grungust in a one two combo fashion, the first landed in a right cross near the chest plate of the tall Grungust while the left came in from a uppercut. The pilot of the Grungust was taken back by the sheer power of the attacks he just took, ‘what kind of monster I’m facing,’ he thought to himself as he tried to call for the Grungust’s key weapon, a Sword, “You won’t take me down that easily,” he yelled as a sword appeared next to the Grungust as he grabbed it. “EAT THIS!” he said as the Grungust showed a rare bit of speed as he charged the Mk-IV. Ranma looked on in boredom, ‘this guy telegraphs his attacks worse than Kuno does,’ he thought as he slid out of the way of the blade only to receive a flying fist towards the torso area of his Gespenst. “Didn’t expect that,” he said has he dropped his mech into a familiar stance to him and dashed towards the Grungust, “ANYTHING GOES!!!” he yelled out as he dashed toward the behemoth and slammed the mighty robot with a viscous combo from Ranma’s signature martial arts style. Having received a major beating at the hand of a Real Robot the Grungust fell to the ground with Ranma’s mech landing on its midsection G-Pistol in hand, “Playtime is over,” he said as he blasted the head of the Grungust off with the pistol, “I’m through here what’s the situation Sempai,” he asked over the comm. Kyosuke replied, “All clear Ranma return to base,” he paused before adding, “Good job.” * * * Another Dimension Another Time* “Report!!” yelled a red haired man in a physical-type boxer super robot, blue and light blue in some areas on its body, focused more on power and close range combat than speed. It’s most unique feature was that the head looked like it had a Mustache. "One contact" the dulcet tones of the female speaker said, "the codename's the usual...Assault 1." "Lemon," the pilot said, "You go ahead with Vindel and the rest of the dolls. I'll defend your exit jump to the other side I'll be there shortly," he says to her. "Axel..." she gasps, knowing this could be a suicide mission, "come back alive" she says finally coming to her senses. "I plan to." Axel says, "I need to beat him on this side to see if I'm capable of fighting him on the other side if it comes to it." "Good luck" she says softly before cutting the communications connection. Axel adjusts his connections to the Direct Motion Link, having barely a day to familiarize himself with this machine and the techniques as the dot that reads Assault 1 gets closer to the main complex of the Tesla Licht Institute or TLI for short. "Rotten ghost of the Federation" says as he steels himself for combat as the bulky blue Gespenst Mk-III finally becomes visible on his screens. The voice was the same but his tone and meaning were different as Beowulf spoke "You will make an unwanted future." Axel smirks, 'not good he's become worse' and says "But I'm bidding that world a farewell," he pauses a bit "while gaining a victory at the end of a defeat." "Victory...." Beowulf says coldly, "...Defeat..." he continues "there is no meaning in such things. There is only creation or destruction." and begins chanting "Creation is destruction....the creation of destruction...you will rot away with the Ark." Axel could almost hear the sound Beowulf made as he smiled as he charges for the mech. Growling, Axel starts charging towards the Mk-III "Enough of this crap!" he yells as they collide in a stalemate, "I've got as much power as you." As the Mk-III heard that it began to push Axel's machine back, "Press forward...." he can hear Beowulf say, "MK-III!" "What!?" Axel says as Soulgain is pushed back as the left arm brace starts to glow, "Take this...." he yells as the left arm of the mech starts to spin followed by the right..."Seiryuurin!" as the spinning arms go flying threw the Mk-III's massive arms, disarming it. Axel did note it was odd hearing Beowulf scream in pain over the loss mechanical arms as the massive mech slumps down, "Is that all you got Beowulf?" he taunts. Before he could finish him off green tentacles emerge from the severed arms of the Mk-III one after another before they combined into new organic arms. The rest of the Mk-III shifted as well into a larger mech the bulky armor turned into a insectoid carapace with a large glowing red orb where the cockpit was on the Mk-III. The 'eye's' of this beast stares down the Soulgain from its immense height, "I knew it." he finally says, "Beowulf!" as he defiantly yells his former comrades' call sign, "You've become more of a monster than a wolf now." From somewhere in the gigantic beast Beowulf spoke again, "You're incapable of becoming a pure life form." as the beast begins to move the orb glowing with power the ravings of Beowulf continued "I....yes.....I!!!" A beam of intense energy erupts from the Orb heading directly for the Soulgain. 'Shit,' Axel thought as he threw himself and the Soulgain to the side of the beam. He managed to avoid major damage and possible death but the mech did take some damage to its side from the heat aura of the beam as the brunt of it collided into the large metal door. "The loading bay," Axel says to himself as he turns to see what Beowulf was doing before saying to himself again, "If he garners power, he'll be a threat to us..." he paused to adjust his hair, "No, perhaps even more." he steels himself, "I must defeat him here and now." The computer in the Soulgain brings up a display with a timer counting down one hundred and thirty, "I have 127 seconds left to defeat him and make the jump." the computer then zooms onto the leg of one of Beowulf leg, "Can I do it?" he ponders before deciding to do it, "Authorization code: OK." he says to the mainframe in the facilities at TLI, "Detonation timer set. Time lag to 5 seconds from XN timer" He chuckles to himself after setting it, "To take a page from your book I'll bet on some long odds." "Those who disturb the silence will be corrected..." Beowulf states as he is preparing another assault. Axel sprang into action, "Then you better aim well, Beowulf!" and the Soulgain leaps into the air <<BGM: Dark Knight>> Silhouetted by the moon Axel's machine makes its run gunning for Beowulf. Realizing Axel's plans Beowulf fires off the beam attack. 'Perfect' Axel thought as the red wave of death came towards him. He angled himself so the machine would go under the beam and kicked the thrusters into gear slamming into the lower waist of Beowulf, "Go to Hell!" Axel yelled as he pushed the monstrous Beowulf crashing them into the inner hanger of TLI. Inside where they came to was a chamber with four monoliths in a circle the room was empty save for that camber. Beowulf was the first to get up, "Where" he began noticing that there should be something else in here, "is the Ark that disturbs the silence?" Axel smirked from his cockpit, "It's jumped already" he states with a chuckle. Beowulf pauses not expecting that response, "Jumped?" he asked. "That's right." Axel says as the Soulgain finally stands up again as Beowulf finally sees where Axel is...still at the hole that he was knocked threw, "And I'm going, too" he says explaining, "To the new frontier, But..." he says finishing, "you're ending lies here" as the Soulgain's eyes glow and the PT lept into action. Axel moved Soulgains arms into position for its ultimate attack, "Limiter Disable:" he yells as the command prompt tells him, "CODE: KIRIN!" as the spiked elbows of the PT expand to long blades jutting out of both elbows. the thrusters boost once more as he rushes for his target the leg of the beast he targeted earlier, as Beowulf tries to bring it down with the shoulder claymores Axel winces as the hits registered on the DML "Soulgain" he says before yelling again, "BRING ME A VICTORY!" as the two mechs colided once more this time Soulgain taking another piece out of Beowulf, it then flips over the monster and crouches on one knee inside the gate chamber. "Beowulf..." Axel says seriously as the gate chamber starts to glow, "I win!" Standing up in the field the chamber was emitting he says again "I said I'm leaving this world." he then says mockingly, "You stay and howl like the wolf you are amidst the flames of the Lykeios burning away!" Enraged at this fact Beowulf charged at Axel, yelling "Axel.....ALMER!" "And while I'm at it," Axel says still in the field, "I'll take you out as well," he says as he poses himself for another attack activating it before yelling, "Kyosuke Nanbu!" as one of the arms flew off Soulgain and dug into the glowing orb of Beowulf. The last thing Axel hears before the jump is Kyosuke groaning. Chapter 1 End Next Time: Hi hi, the lovely Excellen here next time we encounter a angel winged super robot piloted by a mysterious woman with a weird accent…Next time Enter Angele be there! Now for some Author Notes first I better explain some things here I’d like to thank Lord Rance for helping me with this project of mine, his suggestions and knowledge of Super Robot Taisen have been a great help. First off Ranma’s assigned mech, I’m giving him a three unit progression, starting out with a regular cannon fodder unit the Gespenst Mk-IV (my own variation though it now looks like the Weiss a bit now going with retcon from OGs that made the Weiss Ritter the Gespenst Mk-IV in the Shadow Mirror Universe), the Vorlent (Orgone Personal Trooper Type 4), and the Laftkranz (Vorlent upgrade), before the SRW fans cry foul I already have a sub pilot planned for him, now for some background on the Orgone units they were the original character units from the Crossover Game Super Robot Wars J. Also I’ve removed his curse, don’t worry it will come back to haunt him, the villains of this story will be using it in a unique way (anyone who’s played Original Generation 2 can guess what I’m planning). Finally the Shadow Mirror character Lemon Browning, in the alternative universe Ranma was born Ranko and was around Excellen more, plus the combining of the DNA explains why Lemon has red hair instead of Blonde like she should have if she was a pure clone of Excellen Browning. Also changed a few things to fit with the revamped cannon from the PS2 versions of the games as the MK-VI now looks like the Weiss as stated by Lamia Loveless in the PS2 version of OG2. And last of all redone for this revision was the Axel and Beowulf scene...it's my own take from the opening segment from the recent SRW OG anime The Inspector Background Music Used Hakugin no Datenshi (Platinum Lucifer), this is Excellen’s default theme in the games she’s been in Koutetsu no Beowulf (Steel Beowulf), this is Kyosuke’s default theme in the games he’s been in Fate, this is Shun Touya’s first theme from Super Robot Wars J (and Ranma’s Gespenst Mk-IV’s theme he will have a different theme for Vorlent and Laftkranz) Dark Knight this is Axel Arma theme from the games he’s been in. |
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