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| Hild 7; A succubus is fine, too. | |
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| Ozzallos | Jul 8 2009, 04:27 PM Post #16 |
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Moar? yo umight be sorry you asked... ------------ "Well, damn," Ranma Saotome, currently male heir to the Anything Goes School of Martial Arts eyed the address printed in flowing gold script on the front of the envelope, matching it up to the luxury apartment building he now stood before. Why he was delivering the black envelope to such a ritzy place was beyond him, but Hild had asked and she was perhaps the one person besides his own mother he didn't mind running errands for. Probably busy runnin' hell or something, he rationalized and took the steps up to the front entrance. A quick, meager tug on the door told him what he already had guessed, noting the door was locked. Of course he could force the door with no effort whatsoever, but breaking and entering was more in line with his old man and this was a friend of Hild's after all. Blue eyes scanned the entrance, finding a series of intercom buttons along the side frame. Ranma reveiwed the address once more, picked a button and stabbed it a couple of times, then waited. His patience was rewarded after a few moments as a soft female voice came over the line. "Yes?" "Erm," Ranma hesitated, having not scripted for this particular encounter. "Got a letter for Miss Mieou?" Silence, then the intercom clicked back on. "Please leave it in the mail box with the rest of the correspondence." The martial artist frowned. Given who the letter was from, he was thinking it to be important in some way. And damned if i'm just gonna leave it in a box. He keyed the the speaker again. "Yeah, Hild-san asked me to--" Click. "Please come up," the voice advised as the lock disabled, immeditely reversing the previously standoff-ish tone with a hint of... anticipation? Ranma smiled. Hild had that sort of effect on people and he opened up the door, easily ascending to the top floor where an intricately carved solid oak door awaited. His hand was poised to knock when the muffled female voice stopped him short. "It's unlocked. Come." The pigtailed boy shrugged, opening the door and stepping into what was by all accounts a luxury suite. A huge, plush sofa dominated the room while the furiture surrounding it spoke of money. Large amounts of money. It was real wood, brass and crystal, and none of it looked like it was bought at the discount warehouse on the corner. And this is just one room, Ranma whistled mentally, throughly impressed. He turned his attention to the sole occupant, a green haired woman who was pouring two cups of tea from a porceline container on one of the end tables. The emerald haired woman turned, regarding her visitor with red eyes and skeptical disposition. "You're not exactly who I would have expected Hild-san to send." "Yeah, well, I think she's a bit busy at the moment," Ranma shrugged, moving around the sofa to accept the cup of tea the woman was offering. He took a polite sip. "Heck, she only had a moment to stop by Ucchan's to say 'hi'." the woman raised an eyebrow, but otherwise said nothing, sipping her own tea before continuing. "Of course. Mistress Hild is a busy woman. I assume that to be the coorespondence in question?" "Oh yeah, sorry about that," Ranma blinked, all but forgetting the black letter in his hand. He handed the letter over and watched her set the tea aside, breaching the red wax seal with a long fingernail. The martial artist took that as his que that his duties had been successuflly discharged. "Hey, thanks for the tea, Meiou-san. Gotta go." "Of course," She repleid absently, not even looking up as she read the pale white parchment within. Ranma had reached the door and was nearly about to exit her suite when heheard her voice again. "On second thought..." Ranma watched the woman cock her head, then look up at him, then back to the letter as if to re-read it. "If I may impose on you once more?" "Uh, sure?" Ranma glanced back, idley curious as to what would cause the woman to request her stay. "It says her you are adept at martial arts, is that correct?" That took Ranma back. The letter is about me? "Yeah...?" "I have a student that requires a certain familiarization with martial arts. Your references," The green haired motioned to the letter from Hild. "speak for themselves." "I, uh..." Ranma dissembled having been caught completely off guard. Why would Hild san recommend me to teach somebody? Gotta be pretty damn important, I guess, but... "Look, I gotta be honest... I ain't liscensed to teach my art yet. Not sure if I can--" "A technicality," Miss Meiou brushed past his objection. "If Hild-san is recommending you, then that's all the only assurance I need. You will be well compensated, of course." The martial artist brooded over the terms for a moment, considering just how much of a technicality his liscensing was. In the end, he had to conclude she was right. Can't see the old pervert declaring me ready to teach anytime soon and I can already kick Pop's ass... "She won't require anything advanced at this juncture," The emerald haired woman continued to outline as Ranma rolled the idea around in his head. "Just a solid foundation to get her started. Once that is accomplished, you can decide on wether you want to continue to more advanced instruction." A foundation. Maybe... it was a tightrope of technicalities, but basic instruction hardly Anything Goes. "I'd like ta meet her first. Can't make any guarantees until then." "Of course," The woman aquiesed gracefully. "Her studies consume most of her weekdays, but it is Saturday. If you have time, I can arrange meeting so that we may both acertain as to whether this will be a viable partnership." "Don't see why not," Ranma shrugged, letting a dead chuckle slip through his consciousness. Not like I got anything better to do... hang around the dojo get malleted by the tomboy, chased by the girls... "Ah, sure," Ranma nodded at the resonable concession, taking the slip he had been offered. A quick look at the address indicates it was less than fifteen minutes away by normal walking, he estimated. "Give me about an hour. Gonna drop by somewhere for lunch first." "Of course," She set the tea cup aside, securing it and the tray. "By the way, I never got your--" Her protegee's trainer was already gone. Setsuna meiou gazed at the closed door a moment before turning back to the letter she had recieved. She took it in hand once more, reading it silently to herself. "What are you up to, Hild-sama?" Edited by Ozzallos, Jul 8 2009, 07:16 PM.
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| Saotendo | Jul 8 2009, 04:38 PM Post #17 |
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Evil! You are sooooo Evil! lol, but I did love it. And oh the NWC is gonna freak (in the future) when they find out where he's been spending his time, and with whom (or what more likely) and what they've been doing. Can hear Akane now "Why are you teaching her and you won't teach me?" Or Ryoga "Ranmaaa! You must paying for hurting Akane's feelings by teaching someone other than her!" and like a junkie, I still want more, lol. (It never ends, does it?) |
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| Dumbledork | Jul 8 2009, 05:09 PM Post #18 |
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Ah yes, Setsuna is always a nice touch in any story. I have a question about the curse trigger. Is the water activation part completely gone or does it still work additionaly to Ranma's will? Might be a problem if Ranma gets splashed in front of people aware of the curse and they want to know how he got a cure. |
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| Ozzallos | Jul 8 2009, 07:12 PM Post #19 |
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The water component is still there per the end of ch6, though he can consciously override it at this point. For example, if Ranma isn't paying attention and water hits, he can still be changed, thus accounting for accidental incidents where it would be very inconvenient in forgetting not to change. Conversely, he can override the effect with concentration ensuring a lock regardless of which gender he is being splashed into. As a corollary, Ranma can now change at will with concentration. As for touching Setsuna... Consider who she's dealing with before you write her off as a novelty ![]() Slight edit to the wrap-up for flow. Edited by Ozzallos, Jul 8 2009, 07:16 PM.
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| biigoh | Jul 8 2009, 07:24 PM Post #20 |
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Indeed, this is making me curious.
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| Saotendo | Jul 8 2009, 08:40 PM Post #21 |
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Just reread it and it looks like you are setting him up with Amy! The "Akane" copy. Nice way to break down any Pavlovian responses that Akane's beaten into him. |
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| Wharpt | Jul 8 2009, 09:06 PM Post #22 |
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So Hild is setting up Ranma and Hotaru to meet? Aside from the martial arts training, will Ranma-chan get a chance to teach Hotaru Hild's method of 'crowd-control'? OT - Is that Bonaparte in your avatar? |
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| Ozzallos | Jul 8 2009, 09:18 PM Post #23 |
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Let's just say Hild is a bit more... Ambitious concerning the future than Amy. Edited by Ozzallos, Jul 8 2009, 09:23 PM.
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| Saotendo | Jul 8 2009, 11:14 PM Post #24 |
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Can so see Akane's reaction when she meets herself and finds out her name is Amy. Insecurity town, here we come. Given how trusting (snort) Akane is with Ranma and other girls, her and Amy is gonna be one wild uh meeting! ROTFLMAO! |
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| Ozzallos | Jul 8 2009, 11:50 PM Post #25 |
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No, no, no, no! No Amy!
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| WarGiver | Jul 9 2009, 12:06 AM Post #26 |
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.... Magical Girls being taught how to hunt demons by someone chosen by the queen of them herself... I agree. What is Hild's plan here? that and you are definitely evil Ozz
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| Ozzallos | Jul 9 2009, 12:58 AM Post #27 |
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<----------OT: Metal Slug. Not Hotaru either. Though in retrospect, I can see the confusion caused by the "studies consume most of her weekday schedule" bit. I'll refine it further as it's simply school and... extra circular activities that would get in the way (namely Youma busting). |
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| Tenhauser | Jul 9 2009, 02:07 AM Post #28 |
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... Please tell me that it is not going to be Usagi. Pretty please, with sugar on top? |
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| GreydonCreed | Jul 9 2009, 02:37 AM Post #29 |
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What is more important is ask is why the Princess of Pluto and the Guardian of the Time Gates is cooperating with the ruler of Hell. . . unless Setsuna Meiou and her friends aren't Senshi in this story. Perhaps Setsuna and Hild cut a deal where they cooperate in the fight against the cross-dimensional Negaverse youma, since Beryl and Metallia are not under Hild's control. |
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| biigoh | Jul 9 2009, 04:04 AM Post #30 |
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... It's Mizuno Ami, not... Amy. Please don't use the dubbed names.
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