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Ryuuzaki (L)
Topic Started: Nov 24 2007, 06:30 PM (331 Views)
Xidon

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O.O CnC
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Rocket Fingers

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Umm.....Hmm.......It looks okay....Not much focus on L himself though. Put him in the middle, instead of off to the side.
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Rocket Fingers
Nov 24 2007, 11:35 PM
Umm.....Hmm.......It looks okay....Not much focus on L himself though. Put him in the middle, instead of off to the side.

the focus is on L and the focal point is his eye, putting him in the middle wouldn't work couse it would ruin the balance, the flow and the whole concept of the tag >.<


anyway new version:
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XxFeaRLeSsxX
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Yay I love L :dance: It kinda looks like he has a mechanical arm (kinda like FMA) but still, great job! :thumbup:
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Xidon
Nov 25 2007, 08:36 AM
Rocket Fingers
Nov 24 2007, 11:35 PM
Umm.....Hmm.......It looks okay....Not much focus on L himself though.  Put him in the middle, instead of off to the side.

the focus is on L and the focal point is his eye, putting him in the middle wouldn't work couse it would ruin the balance, the flow and the whole concept of the tag >.<


anyway new version:
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I agree with Xidon....

Great Job!....i luv it
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Maora Tezuka
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YEAH!!! I love the crimson all over... awesome work ^_^

oh! btw... why don't make the 'Ryuuzaki' bigger??
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Xidon

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^Hmm maybe for the next tag :9
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Ultima Star
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Xid..delete some of the C4D bits from L's face is kinda...ruining it..or lower the opacity in that side if you dont want to delete them.
And maybe another color for the text and move it a little...
Also that part next to his hair...maybe..erase some?..lol..that's just at my point of view anyway.
Still it's great work since you started with this I've seen how yo've been improving and now you're pretty good. keep at it buddy
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Xidon

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^Oh garsh golly darn I wanted to create amazing depth but anime stocks just make it so hard D:

anyway I'll doubt I'll be making a new version any time soon since I am kinda busy but I'll see
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Ultima Star
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Weird O.o I work a whole lot beter with anime stocks <3 hehe ok if you ever make a new version show it 'kay?lol
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Xidon

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^I am talking about creating depth in a tag, it is hard to make good depth with an anime stock
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