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| Arianna | Mar 15 2008, 10:02 AM Post #1 |
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[b]Name:[/b] Arianna Alderran [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Role:[/b] Student [b]SID:[/b] 752557 [b]Dorm:[/b] 109 [b]Age:[/b] 20 [b]City-State:[/b] Necransia [b]Birthday:[/b] Dec. 21st, 740 [b]Appearance:[/b] Arianna has bright blue eyes most would compare to the ocean bordering Necransia. Her hair is a dark red that flows down her back and ends in the middle. She stands at 5'8" and weights 130 lbs. Her face is very small which compliments her very narrow bone structure. She has a slightly tanned complexion, but it just adds a bit of golden to her skin and is quite light. Her physical appearance doesn't make her appear to be much of a fighter. Her breasts much like her body tone aren't very large. [b]Clothing:[/b] She wears a pale gold full length dress much like she wore to the masquerade ball in which Zolton snuck her here during. As well she is wearing golden slippers over her feet. All in all she looks more suited for a ball then a military academy. [b]Weapons:[/b] A standard issue Necransian army bow: Given to her by her escort. It's an oak bow that was quickly and shoddily made. [b]Personality:[/b] Arianna is a very happy person. She still holds some of the mental scars from her years of captivity from Louis in Necransia's castle. Due to her noble upbringing she is overly feminine and proper. She tends to shy away from violence at all cost. She is very meek most of the time although she holds strong value of what people should appear, and will comment to people close to her when they make a mistake. [b]Strength:[/b] She is very knowledgeable in the art of healing and alchemy. [b]Weakness:[/b] She has had no training, offical or unoffical, in any type of weapon. Her frame is not meant for fighting as it has little strength and she is very clumsy normally, which is amplified by her attire. [b]History:[/b] Arianna along with Aldaras are the rightful rulers to the Necransia throne. She is Aldaras' twin sister. Since 'The Battle Of The Nobles' Arianna has been held captive by Louis while he held control over Necransia. She was held captive through political pressure because she feared what would happen if she left to Alan. Louis had discovered from a soldier that had went to Everland that Alan had survived. She was warned that should she leave, she would be giving Alan a death sentence. Through communication through Zolton's vassel in the castle over the last year, Arianna's escape plan was made and executed. She came to the academy during the masquerade ball in the musician's caravan. [b]RP Sample:[/b] I looked around my new travel companions. They knew nothing of how to dress, or so I thought. They were wearing horribly clashing colors as well, no one person wore anything that could pass as a unifying piece. They looked mismatched, even more so with me under my black cloak. I would soon see my beloved brother, whom I hadn't seen in five long years. Every second seemed like an eternity. My feet were sore, seeing as how they were unaccustomed to walking this much, and on this type of ground. I pushed on although every muscle in my body complained. I had to make as much distance as I could from Necransia castle, my prison. I was now free, my life was my own again, free to do what I desire. Never again would I be helpless, not only was I going to join my dear brother, I would learn how to defend myself. At my side Zolton's vassel, Lilth, whom came this year walked, almost as excited to see Everland as I was. She had been my brother's, whom she knew as 'Aldaras', good friend. Apparently I would have to teach him his manners again. What shocked me the most is according to her, one of his other friend's Wedule claimed that on numerous occasions in his sleep he called my name. The caravan pushed on towards Everland Academy and away from Louis. [b]Special Power:[/b] Minor Healing: She can heal simple scratches, cuts and bruises on others. |
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The blood of Isis, the spells of Isis, the magical powers of Isis, shall make this great one strong, and shall be an amulet of protection [against him] that would do to him the things which he abominateth. - Egyptian Book Of The Dead | |
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| Drestia | Mar 15 2008, 11:36 AM Post #2 |
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[color=yellow][font=Arial]-put lbs after her weight... otherwise it could be anything(stone, ducks, etc) -not a very long personality -more specific in the weaknesses please -vassel is spelt wrong -what the hell is 'Aldaras' 's ? -RP sample is boring... doesn't matter really, just may want to spice up your writing in actual RP[/color][/font] |
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There's so much behind my smile that I can never show. I never said to be like me, I say to be like you and make a difference. ~Marilyn Manson I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? ~John Lennon | |
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| Arianna | Mar 17 2008, 02:58 PM Post #3 |
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I hope these changes are acceptable... As for the RP sample, I'm sorry I couldn't think of anything more interesting to talk about. |
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The blood of Isis, the spells of Isis, the magical powers of Isis, shall make this great one strong, and shall be an amulet of protection [against him] that would do to him the things which he abominateth. - Egyptian Book Of The Dead | |
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| Drestia | Mar 29 2008, 10:22 AM Post #4 |
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Your Worst Nightmare
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[font=Arial][color=yellow]Can no one spell masquerade? Besides that it seems to be fine so fix it and you are [b]Accepted[/b][/color][/font] |
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There's so much behind my smile that I can never show. I never said to be like me, I say to be like you and make a difference. ~Marilyn Manson I believe in everything until it's disproved. So I believe in fairies, the myths, dragons. It all exists, even if it's in your mind. Who's to say that dreams and nightmares aren't as real as the here and now? ~John Lennon | |
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| Aldaras | Apr 2 2008, 02:55 PM Post #5 |
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Man Whore Of The Millenium
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No, no one can spell masqueraded... it's the hardest word to spell in the English language, or so I now decree. I don't see anything wrong, but then again , I did help you write it so... [b][i]ACCEPTED[/i][/b] |
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